Poems About Friendship by Top Critiquers
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Poems about friendship by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Blue Beast (A Glimpse of Her)
Her expression bears a semblance of beautiful commotion
Spilled in poems of distant memory and listless melancholia
You feel her soul crawling through every line and word
Wondering how dark and excruciating for some life can be
The anonymity of this virtual world only lets us get a peek
But her art is strong enough to let us know that
She fights
She survives
She hurts
She strives even when she questions it herself
Like undying love
Beaten and broken but with an intense resolve
Feeling Blue
Every morsel of hope seems...
Spilled in poems of distant memory and listless melancholia
You feel her soul crawling through every line and word
Wondering how dark and excruciating for some life can be
The anonymity of this virtual world only lets us get a peek
But her art is strong enough to let us know that
She fights
She survives
She hurts
She strives even when she questions it herself
Like undying love
Beaten and broken but with an intense resolve
Feeling Blue
Every morsel of hope seems...
#friendship
#support
#respect
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6 Comments
Let's be Friends
acceptance of who one is
acknowledging strength and weaknesses
knowing when to be different
and knowing when to conform
embracing all in different hues
knowing that fine threads
hold everyone together in humanhood
a symphony of love and reverence
live with acceptance in gentle grace
let hearts be carried to a peaceful place
in unity and love let us stay
together in perfect harmony
acknowledging strength and weaknesses
knowing when to be different
and knowing when to conform
embracing all in different hues
knowing that fine threads
hold everyone together in humanhood
a symphony of love and reverence
live with acceptance in gentle grace
let hearts be carried to a peaceful place
in unity and love let us stay
together in perfect harmony
#friendship
#SelfReflection
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16 Comments
No; you won't ( for JeJe )
ever have that—
what you had with him;
you will experience difference
instead
Difference that is incomparable
except to its own depth; as his
was to his, alone with you
No; you won't
ever have that—
what you had with him
But Love cannot be outdone
by heights of imagination
nor barriers of suffering;
and Love
isn't meant to be contained
anymore than a flame, flickering—
Because Love, that which you are
and fashioned...
what you had with him;
you will experience difference
instead
Difference that is incomparable
except to its own depth; as his
was to his, alone with you
No; you won't
ever have that—
what you had with him
But Love cannot be outdone
by heights of imagination
nor barriers of suffering;
and Love
isn't meant to be contained
anymore than a flame, flickering—
Because Love, that which you are
and fashioned...
#love
#hope
#friendship
#inspirational
#support
505 reads
34 Comments
You
Reassuring and safe,
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
#kindness
#friendship
#confessional
#support
#wisdom
512 reads
32 Comments
Friendship Love
Baby you cock blocked
me because you want
me all to yourself I
also want you to
but will it ruin our
friendship or do we
just go for it because
you are a smart
beautiful strong sexy
woman and you
need to be loved in
every hole until
feeling orgasmic bliss
Damn baby your
golden nectar taste good
me because you want
me all to yourself I
also want you to
but will it ruin our
friendship or do we
just go for it because
you are a smart
beautiful strong sexy
woman and you
need to be loved in
every hole until
feeling orgasmic bliss
Damn baby your
golden nectar taste good
#love
#women
#sex
#friendship
#beauty
474 reads
4 Comments
Anabasis
No victory is victory
without some type of loss;
a cost too often some won't see,
like a greedy boss.
He knows the bucks that he must spend
and those that must stop here,
but all the rest will be his friend
much more than any peer.
And so in effort he must win
come hell or water high,
where freedom lets his greed begin,
and warriors to die.
And that's why payoff needs to be
where only colleagues tread
into a future, equally,
so no one winds up dead.
without some type of loss;
a cost too often some won't see,
like a greedy boss.
He knows the bucks that he must spend
and those that must stop here,
but all the rest will be his friend
much more than any peer.
And so in effort he must win
come hell or water high,
where freedom lets his greed begin,
and warriors to die.
And that's why payoff needs to be
where only colleagues tread
into a future, equally,
so no one winds up dead.
#courage
#friendship
#success
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2 Comments
My Vacation
#sex
#friendship
#support
227 reads
6 Comments
Brother from another mother
He’s my brother from another mother
Far more sensible than you or I
Got kicked out of home at 16
His mum hung him out high and dry
Just a kid, his bubble burst
Cruel parents, cruel intentions
Left on the streets by the state too
Thank god for kindness from the likes of me and you
Sometimes we’re brought to certain people
Universal intuition some may even say
I had the choice to save him from himself
Coincidentally saving me from my own fate
Out on his ass, no hope to grasp
But divine intervention luckily...
Far more sensible than you or I
Got kicked out of home at 16
His mum hung him out high and dry
Just a kid, his bubble burst
Cruel parents, cruel intentions
Left on the streets by the state too
Thank god for kindness from the likes of me and you
Sometimes we’re brought to certain people
Universal intuition some may even say
I had the choice to save him from himself
Coincidentally saving me from my own fate
Out on his ass, no hope to grasp
But divine intervention luckily...
#friendship
#NaPoWriMo2024
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2 Comments
Heart to heart
Those little hurts that keep us pushed apart –
it isn’t you that triggers that emotion:
a family heirloom, passed from heart to heart.
The loaded words and silences that smart,
perceived rejection causing such commotion --
old memories that keep us pushed apart.
The monster feelings soaring off the chart,
pulling us deeper in a cold, dark ocean --
an ancient trauma, passed from heart to heart.
When little things make reasoning depart
and distrust spreads through veins like poison potion, ...
it isn’t you that triggers that emotion:
a family heirloom, passed from heart to heart.
The loaded words and silences that smart,
perceived rejection causing such commotion --
old memories that keep us pushed apart.
The monster feelings soaring off the chart,
pulling us deeper in a cold, dark ocean --
an ancient trauma, passed from heart to heart.
When little things make reasoning depart
and distrust spreads through veins like poison potion, ...
#conflict
#friendship
#healing
#PersonalGrowth
#NaPoWriMo2024
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8 Comments
Can I Have This Kiss Forever
Upon opening my ancient hazel eyes, in the cocoon of my darkness, he is my light, he’s my passage to forevermore
He is the tender brushstroke in the midst of heat I seek, I need, his love I reach
Mmm… when he lays my soul down, my honey drips, unto his mind he lets it pour
The guidance of my whispers in the dark when Allah’s Mission has ordained me, in my absence he is the Utopia of my thoughts as my wings soar
My sanctuary governed by him
The solace in his embrace is gentle as a summer breeze to my cheek, a warm stirring of wind
The strong arms who catch...
He is the tender brushstroke in the midst of heat I seek, I need, his love I reach
Mmm… when he lays my soul down, my honey drips, unto his mind he lets it pour
The guidance of my whispers in the dark when Allah’s Mission has ordained me, in my absence he is the Utopia of my thoughts as my wings soar
My sanctuary governed by him
The solace in his embrace is gentle as a summer breeze to my cheek, a warm stirring of wind
The strong arms who catch...
#love
#friendship
257 reads
7 Comments
Crazytown
#friendship
#betrayal
#MentalHealth #hurt
#MentalHealth #hurt
433 reads
7 Comments
Thankful for you
A hard time for me
but I am thankful for you
for all that you are
but I am thankful for you
for all that you are
#love
#friendship
#holiday
#senryu
#gratitude
1063 reads
35 Comments
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