Poems About Fish Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fish seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 8:41pm
10th Apr 2024 8:41pm
One fish, Two Fish - NaPoWriMo 10
Inside me are
one fish, two fish
at the least,
The dreamiest goldfish
daydreaming away
into obliviousness
you have ever known
so out of touch
they forget the previous moment
in favour of naive fondness
eager to look on the positive
and the golden lining.
And a surprise Shark
snarling and snapping away
in sudden savage attack
with a grinning quip
of deepest blue
to flush blood into the water
and a sharp erect fin
that will hardly finish anytime soon,
slapping some colour into...
one fish, two fish
at the least,
The dreamiest goldfish
daydreaming away
into obliviousness
you have ever known
so out of touch
they forget the previous moment
in favour of naive fondness
eager to look on the positive
and the golden lining.
And a surprise Shark
snarling and snapping away
in sudden savage attack
with a grinning quip
of deepest blue
to flush blood into the water
and a sharp erect fin
that will hardly finish anytime soon,
slapping some colour into...
#identity
#water
#fish
#SelfReflection
#NaPoWriMo2024
48 reads
1 Comment
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 6:06am
10th Apr 2024 6:06am
Catch and Release
Baited by a thought
The molest of exploited immodesty
It’s buy one body get one soul
When attraction is an overpriced commodity
Two edges of the same fight
When flirting on the fringe
Responsibilities thrown to the wind
Sedated by these images
Fed through the minds syringe
Subtleties of seductions lure causing us to bend
Hooker, lie, and drowning
Adulterated hearts
Tricking for cheap affections
Reputation suicide
Sell yourself for parts
We melt like water soluble metal
When integrity is poured...
The molest of exploited immodesty
It’s buy one body get one soul
When attraction is an overpriced commodity
Two edges of the same fight
When flirting on the fringe
Responsibilities thrown to the wind
Sedated by these images
Fed through the minds syringe
Subtleties of seductions lure causing us to bend
Hooker, lie, and drowning
Adulterated hearts
Tricking for cheap affections
Reputation suicide
Sell yourself for parts
We melt like water soluble metal
When integrity is poured...
#lust
#relationships
#sex
#corruption
#fish
258 reads
0 Comments
Cen
Rakhi Rudra
Rakhi Rudra
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 6:36pm
1st Apr 2024 6:36pm
In the world.
Like every
Humanity we are
Born in cabbage
Then the Nightingale
Apples we can I.
Humanity we are
Born in cabbage
Then the Nightingale
Apples we can I.
#fish
34 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Mar 2024 9:28pm
13th Mar 2024 9:28pm
There is Transformation in Death
For some species on earth,
there is transformation in death, a renaissance
if you will, becoming young all over again, whether you
see it as reincarnation or rebirth, a new life begins. There is
transformation in death, some lifeforms can be considered
immortal, the cycle continues underneath the ocean waves,
filling the sea with vibrant and deadly limbs. But that’s the
way nature has made them out to be, a wonderful creation of
beauty and wonder, for when their time comes, ...
there is transformation in death, a renaissance
if you will, becoming young all over again, whether you
see it as reincarnation or rebirth, a new life begins. There is
transformation in death, some lifeforms can be considered
immortal, the cycle continues underneath the ocean waves,
filling the sea with vibrant and deadly limbs. But that’s the
way nature has made them out to be, a wonderful creation of
beauty and wonder, for when their time comes, ...
#universe
#nature
#fish
101 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Oct 2023 2:42am
8th Oct 2023 2:42am
I Swear, Guys! I Really Saw A Genuine Mermaid!
Matthew
walked over to
the lake and saw some chick
smiling at him before she turned
and flashed her fish tail before swimming home.
walked over to
the lake and saw some chick
smiling at him before she turned
and flashed her fish tail before swimming home.
#friendship
#water
#fiction
#fish
#mermaids
88 reads
0 Comments
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
The Gardener
Poem Published
4th Oct 2023 10:47pm
4th Oct 2023 10:47pm
Playabout: Swan
A man once said one's best thoughts seem as if they come on at night,
and while I'm no expert, evidence suggests I thought this might be one -- it isn't, and wasn't, but I couldn't turn it down -
My parenting style is somewhat a swan,
savaged by a pike,
thrashing on the surface, unwinding underneath,
[I am unsure if pike take on swans
(Upon further inspection,
due to the reflections made in brackets here,
a swan has indeed been savaged by a pike
though they prefer cygnets,
as do turtles,
so too crows)
but...
and while I'm no expert, evidence suggests I thought this might be one -- it isn't, and wasn't, but I couldn't turn it down -
My parenting style is somewhat a swan,
savaged by a pike,
thrashing on the surface, unwinding underneath,
[I am unsure if pike take on swans
(Upon further inspection,
due to the reflections made in brackets here,
a swan has indeed been savaged by a pike
though they prefer cygnets,
as do turtles,
so too crows)
but...
#identity
#birds
#fish
114 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2023 6:42pm
3rd Oct 2023 6:42pm
Syl (with original Patois quotations)
Chapter 1
Family and Friends
A short slim man built a shanty in a squatter settlement near the fishing village in Greenwich Farm. He lived there with his girlfriend and his two little daughters. His name was Sylvester and everybody called him Syl for short. He also had an illegitimate son who lived with his mother in the country. Syl was a street vender. He had an old wooden stall on a sidewalk downtown and he sold a variety of items.
Fishing was Syl’s main hobby. He had two close friend Ronny and Arnold who used to go fishing with him....
Family and Friends
A short slim man built a shanty in a squatter settlement near the fishing village in Greenwich Farm. He lived there with his girlfriend and his two little daughters. His name was Sylvester and everybody called him Syl for short. He also had an illegitimate son who lived with his mother in the country. Syl was a street vender. He had an old wooden stall on a sidewalk downtown and he sold a variety of items.
Fishing was Syl’s main hobby. He had two close friend Ronny and Arnold who used to go fishing with him....
#women
#conflict
#sea
#fish
#curse
73 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2023 00:30am
3rd Oct 2023 00:30am
Syl
Chapter 1
Family and Friends
A short slim man built a shanty in a squatter settlement near the fishing village in Greenwich Farm. He lived there with his girlfriend and his two little daughters. His name was Sylvester and everybody called him Syl for short. He also had an illegitimate son who lived with his mother in the country. Syl was a street vender. He had an old wooden stall on a sidewalk downtown and he sold a variety of items.
Fishing was Syl’s main hobby. He had two close friend Ronny and Arnold who used to go fishing with him. Ronny and...
Family and Friends
A short slim man built a shanty in a squatter settlement near the fishing village in Greenwich Farm. He lived there with his girlfriend and his two little daughters. His name was Sylvester and everybody called him Syl for short. He also had an illegitimate son who lived with his mother in the country. Syl was a street vender. He had an old wooden stall on a sidewalk downtown and he sold a variety of items.
Fishing was Syl’s main hobby. He had two close friend Ronny and Arnold who used to go fishing with him. Ronny and...
#sea
#women
#friendship
#fish
#job
63 reads
0 Comments
Ald
Poem Published
11th Aug 2023 6:05am
11th Aug 2023 6:05am
Yellow daffodils .
When love was
Young
We ran wild into
trees and sunlight
Glory and groom
Green and white
Violet into rains
Yellow in magpies
And mangoes and
Daffodils
We used to run
Wild in summer and
Winter
Yellow hills
With green meadows.
Young
We ran wild into
trees and sunlight
Glory and groom
Green and white
Violet into rains
Yellow in magpies
And mangoes and
Daffodils
We used to run
Wild in summer and
Winter
Yellow hills
With green meadows.
#horses
#birds
#butterfly
#fish
#bees
107 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2023 3:30am
3rd Jun 2023 3:30am
Mermaid
Brian
stepped out for
some air.
He saw some chick in
the pool with large fish
fins instead of legs.
Brian
turned and yelled
"HEY, GUYS?!"
stepped out for
some air.
He saw some chick in
the pool with large fish
fins instead of legs.
Brian
turned and yelled
"HEY, GUYS?!"
#summer
#fiction
#fish
#mythology
#mermaids
128 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
21st Apr 2022 1:02am
21st Apr 2022 1:02am
child on the river
know fishermen say a large metal hook through its lip doesn’t
hurt it seems unlikely however,
I prefer a butterfly net
hurt it seems unlikely however,
I prefer a butterfly net
#fish
227 reads
3 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
8th Apr 2022 3:49pm
8th Apr 2022 3:49pm
Entitle Me
Entitle me Johnathan
To be at eased in your love
Encrypted me within
Thy dear thoughts there of
I'm just Lili Jean Stanley
To desire of u to be to true
And Johnathan Lili Jean
Oh how I love u
Entitle me!
To be at eased in your love
Encrypted me within
Thy dear thoughts there of
I'm just Lili Jean Stanley
To desire of u to be to true
And Johnathan Lili Jean
Oh how I love u
Entitle me!
#animals
#fish
#FallingInLove #FirstLove
#FallingInLove #FirstLove
208 reads
0 Comments
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