Fiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#fiction
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 2:42pm
6th Dec 2024 2:42pm
Jeremy's Christmas Card's From Eliza
Jeremy's Christmas card's from Eliza.
It shows her naked by the tree.
He better hide it quick.
It shows her naked by the tree.
He better hide it quick.
#Christmas
#fiction
#lover
#sex
#vanity
94 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 1:52pm
6th Dec 2024 1:52pm
I Heard A Car Pull In
Take
it out
of me now!
I heard a car
pull in and I don't
think that my mom and dad
would be happy to see me
naked on the table with you
humping me instead of cleaning out
the pool like you're supposed to be doing!
it out
of me now!
I heard a car
pull in and I don't
think that my mom and dad
would be happy to see me
naked on the table with you
humping me instead of cleaning out
the pool like you're supposed to be doing!
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#lover
#sex
111 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 1:04pm
5th Dec 2024 1:04pm
Talk About A Real Surprise Visit
Mom came to visit Lori.
She got caught naked with her roommate.
Poor Mom was in shock.
She got caught naked with her roommate.
Poor Mom was in shock.
#fiction
#home
#hurt
#mother
#sex
94 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 12:37pm
5th Dec 2024 12:37pm
Looked Like She Lost Something On That Beach
At first, Deanna thought that she found
true paradise on a Cancun
beach. But that was before she
saw some guys staring at
her, looked down and saw
tan lines where her
bikini
was to
be.
true paradise on a Cancun
beach. But that was before she
saw some guys staring at
her, looked down and saw
tan lines where her
bikini
was to
be.
#beach
#fiction
#ignorance
#sex
#summer
95 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 11:28am
3rd Dec 2024 11:28am
Leading To A Spring Break Nightmare
Deborah and her friends
Tracie and Lexa figured
that since they were far
from home, none of their
parents would stop them
from posing nude on a
beach for some guy who
claimed to be with the
Girls Gone Wild production.
Their dead bodies were
found on a Cancun beach.
Tracie and Lexa figured
that since they were far
from home, none of their
parents would stop them
from posing nude on a
beach for some guy who
claimed to be with the
Girls Gone Wild production.
Their dead bodies were
found on a Cancun beach.
#beach
#death
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
48 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 2:46pm
2nd Dec 2024 2:46pm
Is She Doing It To Make Me Jealous Or What?
Wayne was sitting in
a dive having some coffee
and reading some Bradbury.
That's before he looked
across the street and saw his
wife kissing some other guy.
a dive having some coffee
and reading some Bradbury.
That's before he looked
across the street and saw his
wife kissing some other guy.
#betrayal
#coffee
#fiction
#lover
#wife
64 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 2:33am
2nd Dec 2024 2:33am
She Heard A Car Pull Up In The Driveway
"Pull it out of me! Quick! You need to get your
butt dressed and out of here before my husband comes
in!" was what Barbara has said to Jason
after she heard a car pull up in the driveway.
butt dressed and out of here before my husband comes
in!" was what Barbara has said to Jason
after she heard a car pull up in the driveway.
#fiction
#home
#lover
#sex
#wife
93 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 11:30am
1st Dec 2024 11:30am
Discovery Of A Neighbor's Nasty Secret
While
the rest
of the gang
were enjoying
themselves at the pool,
I went into the house
to get something and found this
scared young blonde chick stripped naked and
tied up in the basement. She looked at
me and said softly "I want to go home!"
the rest
of the gang
were enjoying
themselves at the pool,
I went into the house
to get something and found this
scared young blonde chick stripped naked and
tied up in the basement. She looked at
me and said softly "I want to go home!"
#BDSM
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
138 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 3:08pm
30th Nov 2024 3:08pm
Mom Welcomed Our New Neighbor
Mom welcomed our new neighbor.
They got naked and humped each other.
That's before Dad came home.
They got naked and humped each other.
That's before Dad came home.
#dialogue
#father
#fiction
#mother
#sex
99 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 2:13pm
30th Nov 2024 2:13pm
There Was Nothing Else For Us To Do
Since there was nothing
else for us to do while
our cabin was inside the
storm, both Karen and
I made ourselves strip
down and look at each
other play with our
attached goodies.
else for us to do while
our cabin was inside the
storm, both Karen and
I made ourselves strip
down and look at each
other play with our
attached goodies.
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
#storm
105 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 3:08am
30th Nov 2024 3:08am
If You Want To Join Us
Rob went over to Kurt's
house to complain about
the noise and saw his
partner Susan standing
naked in the backyard.
"If you want to join us,
you have to take your
clothes off first" was
what Susan told Rob
before going back in.
house to complain about
the noise and saw his
partner Susan standing
naked in the backyard.
"If you want to join us,
you have to take your
clothes off first" was
what Susan told Rob
before going back in.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#home
#sex
98 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 2:00am
30th Nov 2024 2:00am
Tom And Sally
Tom finished taking his shower.
Sally opened her robe and flashed herself.
They went into the bedroom.
Sally opened her robe and flashed herself.
They went into the bedroom.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#lover
#sex
112 reads
2 Comments
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