Poems About Faith Seeking Honest Critique
#faith
ThePoet632
CrossWords
CrossWords
Poem Published
14th May 2023 8:33pm
14th May 2023 8:33pm
Nature, Earth and poetry
Nature, Earth and poetry
Glory to the tree, splendor of the mountain....
Energy of the wind and of the sea
Solid is the rock on the mountain's top
Fluent, the waters when they stream like poetry....
carrying all the human cares, sins and pains ashore...
Nature is worth the words shed on her land
full of warmth that breaths humanity and spirituality
Patience rhymes with obedience, with kindness....
Lore comes to you when you go outdoors, feel the flora, probe the distant expansion of earth, not inside a mundane agora, when they fake...
Glory to the tree, splendor of the mountain....
Energy of the wind and of the sea
Solid is the rock on the mountain's top
Fluent, the waters when they stream like poetry....
carrying all the human cares, sins and pains ashore...
Nature is worth the words shed on her land
full of warmth that breaths humanity and spirituality
Patience rhymes with obedience, with kindness....
Lore comes to you when you go outdoors, feel the flora, probe the distant expansion of earth, not inside a mundane agora, when they fake...
#religion
#faith
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#morality
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Auraofblack
James Burns
James Burns
Poem Published
14th May 2023 9:41am
14th May 2023 9:41am
Maya & Fate
You're not captain of your own ship when life's drifting upon the tide.
You can't claim free will when everything you were conditioned to be, was base amplified.
Mastery of our mind can be elusive, distracted by lifes sordid fatalistic play.
Feel good vibes are most sought-after before we get an individual lottery-like Doomsday.
No one really knows the answers, what awaits us in eternal sleep.
If our actions here determine there, can we be intent on going that deep?
We're probably the food, lured by a false light existing in...
You can't claim free will when everything you were conditioned to be, was base amplified.
Mastery of our mind can be elusive, distracted by lifes sordid fatalistic play.
Feel good vibes are most sought-after before we get an individual lottery-like Doomsday.
No one really knows the answers, what awaits us in eternal sleep.
If our actions here determine there, can we be intent on going that deep?
We're probably the food, lured by a false light existing in...
#faith
#fate
#spiritual
#philosophical
#morality
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
13th May 2023 1:18pm
13th May 2023 1:18pm
Four Horsemen Cavalry
In conquest we watch the rise and fall of the empire
Dismantling the established order in an endeavor to forge singularity
Calling to arms this modern Armageddon
Live and die by your own sword
Famine greets us with manufactured oppression
While the rich get away with murder
Gospel contrasts
Who’s pulling the strings?
When all is directed of sovereign decree
Redemption provocations of creations mutiny
Persecution’s, staging a war for the drama
Intermingled of spirit and flesh
Declare the fight
Sword...
Dismantling the established order in an endeavor to forge singularity
Calling to arms this modern Armageddon
Live and die by your own sword
Famine greets us with manufactured oppression
While the rich get away with murder
Gospel contrasts
Who’s pulling the strings?
When all is directed of sovereign decree
Redemption provocations of creations mutiny
Persecution’s, staging a war for the drama
Intermingled of spirit and flesh
Declare the fight
Sword...
#corruption
#God
#Christian
#faith
#apocalypse
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Poetryman
Poem Published
13th May 2023 8:46am
13th May 2023 8:46am
Here We Go Again God
Jesus Christ Almighty
or God Almighty
or God dammit!
Bad things come in 3's
So let's throw in the Holy fucking Spirit too
I have had enough of you!
I told you before and before and before
DejaVu again and again and again
I be not Job
I am never going to bend to the will of someone or sum 3 that tortures me
Unrelenting pain and unforgiving misery
I have had enough of thee
No matter the good I do in the world
You beat me down into ashes and dust
My spirit is broken inside this bucket of rust
Just let me be so I can be...
or God Almighty
or God dammit!
Bad things come in 3's
So let's throw in the Holy fucking Spirit too
I have had enough of you!
I told you before and before and before
DejaVu again and again and again
I be not Job
I am never going to bend to the will of someone or sum 3 that tortures me
Unrelenting pain and unforgiving misery
I have had enough of thee
No matter the good I do in the world
You beat me down into ashes and dust
My spirit is broken inside this bucket of rust
Just let me be so I can be...
#death
#faith
#fate
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
11th May 2023 6:46pm
11th May 2023 6:46pm
Sardis
Do you want a reputation or a witness?
When your works appear as if living but you die behind closed doors
I see myself in all
Am I part of the solution or a defective piece in a dysfunctional puzzle?
Red flags waved on the premise of those the world speaks well of
Don’t praise my name when I’m still working out the kinks of my relative hypocrisy
When glory is not my own but whatever blessing proves my life is but an expression of His majesty
So I face myself in this correction
For all I’ve contemplated of this misdirection
When...
When your works appear as if living but you die behind closed doors
I see myself in all
Am I part of the solution or a defective piece in a dysfunctional puzzle?
Red flags waved on the premise of those the world speaks well of
Don’t praise my name when I’m still working out the kinks of my relative hypocrisy
When glory is not my own but whatever blessing proves my life is but an expression of His majesty
So I face myself in this correction
For all I’ve contemplated of this misdirection
When...
#love
#Christian
#faith
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
11th May 2023 6:40pm
11th May 2023 6:40pm
Philedelphia
So speak to me
What trials may come
To lead the world into captivity
Spared the day
The ones faithful and true
What’s to be said of former things
A remnant remains in truth and virtue
So author now this idealization
Rapture worked into hopes of faith
Will they have their deliverance from the hour?
By the divine or natures course by delayed providence of sovereign power
Dying off to enter into rest
Before all hell breaks loose by heavens decree
The wrath of God poured out upon the wicked soil to kill the harvest...
What trials may come
To lead the world into captivity
Spared the day
The ones faithful and true
What’s to be said of former things
A remnant remains in truth and virtue
So author now this idealization
Rapture worked into hopes of faith
Will they have their deliverance from the hour?
By the divine or natures course by delayed providence of sovereign power
Dying off to enter into rest
Before all hell breaks loose by heavens decree
The wrath of God poured out upon the wicked soil to kill the harvest...
#religion
#God
#Christian
#faith
#spiritual
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
10th May 2023 10:10am
10th May 2023 10:10am
Smyrna
What’s to be said of us
But that no servant is greater than his master
When promises coincide with the tests to come
The First and the Last speaks our reminder
Resurrection our inheritance of salvation
Enriched by the hope of unseen crowns
Learning faithfulness reinforced of tribulation and poverty
There is no lack in the hands of divine providence
In bankruptcy our dependence is well compensated by a surplus of grace
Possession takes form in the unbecoming
Co-writing our sufferings in collaboration with Satanic mutiny ...
But that no servant is greater than his master
When promises coincide with the tests to come
The First and the Last speaks our reminder
Resurrection our inheritance of salvation
Enriched by the hope of unseen crowns
Learning faithfulness reinforced of tribulation and poverty
There is no lack in the hands of divine providence
In bankruptcy our dependence is well compensated by a surplus of grace
Possession takes form in the unbecoming
Co-writing our sufferings in collaboration with Satanic mutiny ...
#religion
#God
#Christian
#faith
#spiritual
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
10th May 2023 9:23am
10th May 2023 9:23am
Ephesus
Call this to my attention
A letter written from one moment to another
Transcendent words of timeless authors’ reinvention
Who was and is and is to come
Fair warnings to recover
Addressed messages in a bottle heart cast out upon the sea
Intended recipients of warnings, intended for many, intended for me
Calling age to age or individual heart
The message embodied speaks the same
Motives brought into question when works depart
For whose glory do we function, for love or for our own name?
Intolerance we speak against evils...
A letter written from one moment to another
Transcendent words of timeless authors’ reinvention
Who was and is and is to come
Fair warnings to recover
Addressed messages in a bottle heart cast out upon the sea
Intended recipients of warnings, intended for many, intended for me
Calling age to age or individual heart
The message embodied speaks the same
Motives brought into question when works depart
For whose glory do we function, for love or for our own name?
Intolerance we speak against evils...
#religion
#God
#Christian
#faith
#spiritual
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eljustignoreyou
John Daliva
John Daliva
Poem Published
9th May 2023 10:57am
9th May 2023 10:57am
Distant Feeling
How I long for the days when our world was never hindered,
when our voices were the only things that were revered.
How I dream of our time alone,
As it feels being together is far gone.
How I wish we could go back,
To our yesterday as if we never unpacked.
How I sometimes grow tired of waking,
In a bed alone with my heart beating.
How I succumb to tears to days of distance
As I reminisce about your embrace in abundance.
Despite the buts and ifs
Spellbound in time you and I lifts,
Days of sorrow will pass I am certain,
In...
when our voices were the only things that were revered.
How I dream of our time alone,
As it feels being together is far gone.
How I wish we could go back,
To our yesterday as if we never unpacked.
How I sometimes grow tired of waking,
In a bed alone with my heart beating.
How I succumb to tears to days of distance
As I reminisce about your embrace in abundance.
Despite the buts and ifs
Spellbound in time you and I lifts,
Days of sorrow will pass I am certain,
In...
#strength
#hope
#faith
#LongDistanceRelationship
#admiration
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LunasChild8
Poem Published
6th May 2023 1:07am
6th May 2023 1:07am
One and the Same
We are one and the same
The opposing sides of a golden coin
As you breathe out our shared name
We are humbly asked to join
-
The past, the present and the future
To bind the individual strands into one yarn
We became friends when we were once strangers
I only feel safe when held in your arms.
-
Hold me closer, please don't let me go
Our hearts beat in unison to a common rhythm
We're in constant lockstep, either fast or slow
Together we shall enter the eternal kingdom.
-
We are one and the same
Two opposing...
The opposing sides of a golden coin
As you breathe out our shared name
We are humbly asked to join
-
The past, the present and the future
To bind the individual strands into one yarn
We became friends when we were once strangers
I only feel safe when held in your arms.
-
Hold me closer, please don't let me go
Our hearts beat in unison to a common rhythm
We're in constant lockstep, either fast or slow
Together we shall enter the eternal kingdom.
-
We are one and the same
Two opposing...
#happiness
#love
#faith #rhyming
#faith #rhyming
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Sapphirewolf
Poem Published
5th May 2023 3:49am
5th May 2023 3:49am
Fear Not
Do not fear the hour of death....
For in it great honor awaits....
For if we believe in christ our lord....
We'll finally walk through Heavens gates....
For in it great honor awaits....
For if we believe in christ our lord....
We'll finally walk through Heavens gates....
#religion
#faith
#spiritual
156 reads
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schizostalker
Poem Published
4th May 2023 11:49am
4th May 2023 11:49am
Falling in line
Ever started doing something you felt way very wrong?
Did you do it because other people felt it was good and strong?
Did you conform to their beliefs or ideology?
Maybe one day you should start to worry about your psychology.
Maybe if you didn't give in and fall in line.
Then possible,maybe, probably your true self would shine.
Stop doing things to keep others happy and in agreeable stance with your guided motivations.
Let you real thoughts reveal your determination.
Let everyone know you able to make your own choice.
They will learn no matter...
Did you do it because other people felt it was good and strong?
Did you conform to their beliefs or ideology?
Maybe one day you should start to worry about your psychology.
Maybe if you didn't give in and fall in line.
Then possible,maybe, probably your true self would shine.
Stop doing things to keep others happy and in agreeable stance with your guided motivations.
Let you real thoughts reveal your determination.
Let everyone know you able to make your own choice.
They will learn no matter...
#faith
#TruthOfLife
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