Poems About Faith Seeking Honest Critique
#faith
dnzmemn66
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 2:20pm
7th Jan 2025 2:20pm
Tears
My tears are cleansing
My tears are true
I cry these tears with thoughts of you
You save my soul
You keep me whole
For the battles I face take their toll
But I won’t waiver
And I won’t fall
For I have you
So I stand tall
My strength is building
My resolve is firm
I read the book
So I can learn
The day will come
When my time is done
But I shall not worry
For the war is won
My tears are true
I cry these tears with thoughts of you
You save my soul
You keep me whole
For the battles I face take their toll
But I won’t waiver
And I won’t fall
For I have you
So I stand tall
My strength is building
My resolve is firm
I read the book
So I can learn
The day will come
When my time is done
But I shall not worry
For the war is won
#Christian
#faith
#religion
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oraclesight
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 5:00am
7th Jan 2025 5:00am
Jon's Prayer (edited)
#faith
#prayer
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Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 4:25pm
30th Dec 2024 4:25pm
Sinking Ships
My heart stopped for one-thousandth of a second
resuscitated by chimes of St Thomas Church,
peeling hope from eternal tides.
We became the rainfall
sluicing across bows of burly tankers
lost in the Atlantic dark.
We wrote our names in sand
holding still in our time,
before clocks crashed from harbour gallows.
Building ships, forever,
or so it seems,
when we should be diving for pearls.
resuscitated by chimes of St Thomas Church,
peeling hope from eternal tides.
We became the rainfall
sluicing across bows of burly tankers
lost in the Atlantic dark.
We wrote our names in sand
holding still in our time,
before clocks crashed from harbour gallows.
Building ships, forever,
or so it seems,
when we should be diving for pearls.
#death
#faith
#hope #love
#hope #love
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Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 10:21pm
27th Dec 2024 10:21pm
written by Lady Fancy / Lori
I am not the sunrise
but I should be
I should be a cascade of wind
an unfinished scent
the geometry of words
starting a fresh poem
allowing the lines on my face
to tell it all
leak the shade of grief
I should be an ounce of pride
that spills
from an assumption
of sexual symbolism
headed the wrong way
down a one way street
I should be deep darkness
where old habits live
in ignorance
in awkward silence
beneath equations of unknown
I should be scarred wounds
trying to heal ...
but I should be
I should be a cascade of wind
an unfinished scent
the geometry of words
starting a fresh poem
allowing the lines on my face
to tell it all
leak the shade of grief
I should be an ounce of pride
that spills
from an assumption
of sexual symbolism
headed the wrong way
down a one way street
I should be deep darkness
where old habits live
in ignorance
in awkward silence
beneath equations of unknown
I should be scarred wounds
trying to heal ...
#faith
#hope
#love
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 4:42am
27th Dec 2024 4:42am
Wages of The Faithless
In depths unseen, beneath the endless night
Where shadows writhe and whisper of despair
I walked, alone, beneath an empty light
To witness what awaits the soul laid bare
No angels’ song, no holy trumpets sound
Only the hollow moan of desolate cries
For here, where souls in darkness are unbound
The Faithless walk with vacant hopeless eyes
Their steps are slow, their hearts are cold as stone
The wages earned for turning from the truth
In endless grief, they walk, yet walk alone
Their faith forsaken in the fleeting youth
...
Where shadows writhe and whisper of despair
I walked, alone, beneath an empty light
To witness what awaits the soul laid bare
No angels’ song, no holy trumpets sound
Only the hollow moan of desolate cries
For here, where souls in darkness are unbound
The Faithless walk with vacant hopeless eyes
Their steps are slow, their hearts are cold as stone
The wages earned for turning from the truth
In endless grief, they walk, yet walk alone
Their faith forsaken in the fleeting youth
...
#Christian
#faith
#God
#morality
#religion
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 00:56am
27th Dec 2024 00:56am
What ever you need and want
For sure 🙏 I'm thinking about you in your time of need when you seek clarity of understanding, is why am HERE AND NOW. 🙏 FOR I come as a blessing in disguise, for the betterment of each of your lives, 🤔 to help you navigate your ups and downs that are involved in creating a different kind of life. 🙏 For sure that's why I am here with you now, as I sit here and reflect upon the things I've seen how much this world 🌍 has changed over time. 😭 Years after YEARS of what is happening in the world, as 🌍 it becomes filled with chaos and drama...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 10:51pm
25th Dec 2024 10:51pm
Here we are in deep thoughts
How much does the deepness of the brain 🧠 that holds the mind, see within the very deepness of our lives, of the things. THAT we all have to learn to just to navigate, through the process of being able to just to survive, in this space and time of our lives. 🙏 FOR real that is the truth of the truth that has, been guiding you in ways that you can't even imagine. 😞 YET it is necessary to understand the whole situation, from start to finish for sure we are here. Facing one another as we exchange thoughts, from our own personal network, that has become the most powerful...
#faith
#fate
#morality
#philosophical
#rebirth
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disDain
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 00:20am
23rd Dec 2024 00:20am
If The Day’s Okay…I’m Alright
If the day’s okay…I’m alright
I would write…What I could not say
…I tried
To convey the time that I’ve had mine…
Into my mind…I pray
If the day’s okay…I’m alright
Giving Thanks…For my angst, provides a place where my fear can reside
And my tears can revive…The lifeless eyes…I see
If the day’s okay…I’m alright
Seeking the night, when I cry in the mourning
I’m much obliged…Being twisted and contorted
Enlisted to conform with…A dissident assortment
Blended into all of us “We”
If the day’s okay…I’m alright ...
I would write…What I could not say
…I tried
To convey the time that I’ve had mine…
Into my mind…I pray
If the day’s okay…I’m alright
Giving Thanks…For my angst, provides a place where my fear can reside
And my tears can revive…The lifeless eyes…I see
If the day’s okay…I’m alright
Seeking the night, when I cry in the mourning
I’m much obliged…Being twisted and contorted
Enlisted to conform with…A dissident assortment
Blended into all of us “We”
If the day’s okay…I’m alright ...
#faith
#fate
#karma #luck
#karma #luck
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:18am
22nd Dec 2024 3:18am
Spiritual Awakening
TO BE GRATEFUL AND THANKFUL AND BLESSED YET WHY is it that there is ways to go to escape, from the negativity and drama, but yet it doesn't matter what you think 🤔 and still feel. For sure we have to learn to truly navigate, through the process of the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF THOSE THINGS. THAT SEEMS TO JUST DRAW US IN SO many LEVELS OF CONTROL OVER US. YET I have found what I need to sustain life 🙏 for it's the truth of the nonsense that doesn't matter 😔 but yet it does sometimes. 🤨 For sure everything that we have to go through, is precious to life that sometimes...
#faith
#rebirth
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 8:50pm
21st Dec 2024 8:50pm
One Plus One
God is who made man sinners, when he decided to make the rules.
The devil is why I think I can make it, because he fell and still made it through.
I'm not saying that I'm all evil. One plus one is what makes me too.
Categories? We're all God's children. He loves me, as He also loves you.
The devil is why I think I can make it, because he fell and still made it through.
I'm not saying that I'm all evil. One plus one is what makes me too.
Categories? We're all God's children. He loves me, as He also loves you.
#faith
#hope
#love
#philosophical
#spiritual
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LunasChild8
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 2:53am
21st Dec 2024 2:53am
Salute
I raise my glass in a silent salute
For the hardships I’ve gone through, and the achievements I’ve earned
It leaves a bittersweet blanket over my tongue
Yet I down the drink, and set the glass on the table
Regardless of its content, I’ll quench my thirst.
For the hardships I’ve gone through, and the achievements I’ve earned
It leaves a bittersweet blanket over my tongue
Yet I down the drink, and set the glass on the table
Regardless of its content, I’ll quench my thirst.
#bittersweet
#faith
#strength
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 5:25pm
19th Dec 2024 5:25pm
Hidden Messages
I tend to sometimes wonder, why God smiles down on me.
Or is it that he's trying to build my tolerance, for pain and disbelief.
Either way that I see it, I'm glad that you stood next to me.
You're wonderfully amazing, breathtaking, and quite unique.
I sit here drinking coffee, thinking to myself, how lucky I could be.
I just want you to know one thing, and that's, Be patient, God's working on me.
Or is it that he's trying to build my tolerance, for pain and disbelief.
Either way that I see it, I'm glad that you stood next to me.
You're wonderfully amazing, breathtaking, and quite unique.
I sit here drinking coffee, thinking to myself, how lucky I could be.
I just want you to know one thing, and that's, Be patient, God's working on me.
#faith
#honesty
#hope
#love
#relationships
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