Poems About Earth Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about earth seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Murphy’s Natural Law (or Mother Earth’s A Bitch)
sterile,
faultless blue sky,
limpid,
unmarred by a single cloud.
sweet wind
carries
taste of yellow, honeyed
flower pollen.
thundering, many-hued confusion.
tress, wheels, animals,
bill-boards,
colliding colors,
birds exuding
unheard tarantella.
music perceived, extravagant
colossal mechanical buffet.
single white cataract
nonsensically fluffy cloud
illuminated
by light blue rays of sunshine.
love,
some sought by everyone,
some,
sought by no one. ...
faultless blue sky,
limpid,
unmarred by a single cloud.
sweet wind
carries
taste of yellow, honeyed
flower pollen.
thundering, many-hued confusion.
tress, wheels, animals,
bill-boards,
colliding colors,
birds exuding
unheard tarantella.
music perceived, extravagant
colossal mechanical buffet.
single white cataract
nonsensically fluffy cloud
illuminated
by light blue rays of sunshine.
love,
some sought by everyone,
some,
sought by no one. ...
#earth
#environment
#nature
79 reads
3 Comments
Ambassador for World Peace
If Lennon was here,
Would he still delegate peace?
Our world's in danger
Would he still delegate peace?
Our world's in danger
#earth
#peace
#haiku #music
#haiku #music
54 reads
3 Comments
Cataclysmic
When time and certainty have no meaning,
the planet stops rotating,
a catastrophic event.
the planet stops rotating,
a catastrophic event.
#earth
#environment
#nature #tragedy
#nature #tragedy
64 reads
4 Comments
Beautiful World
Humans are destroying mother earth
fertile lands toxic, decaying rebirth
air, land and sea are heavily polluted
deforestation, extinction, trees uprooted
corporations profit, not a care for our well being
asthma, emphysema, difficulties breathing
diseased animals, FDA approves to consume
aquatic life tainted, lead in our blood stream, awaiting doom
man made diseases, a global threat to our demise
extinction is certain, time to revolt, time to rise
fertile lands toxic, decaying rebirth
air, land and sea are heavily polluted
deforestation, extinction, trees uprooted
corporations profit, not a care for our well being
asthma, emphysema, difficulties breathing
diseased animals, FDA approves to consume
aquatic life tainted, lead in our blood stream, awaiting doom
man made diseases, a global threat to our demise
extinction is certain, time to revolt, time to rise
#corruption
#earth
#nature #rhyming
#nature #rhyming
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0 Comments
LONESOME CHICKEN SONG (3-26-1988; Trinidad, Humboldt County, Northern California)
all my friends
be outside
cluckin in the yard
life up north here
in all the wet cold and fog
dense redwood forests
filled with head high ferns
and fallen moss covered logs
really ain t so hard
to live amidst and bear
it just gets kinda lonesome at times
especially after six long
cold months
of livin so isolated
way up north here
all on my own alone
except that is
for all my only other
fine feathered friends up here
i get to visit and see twice a day
who all be outside right...
be outside
cluckin in the yard
life up north here
in all the wet cold and fog
dense redwood forests
filled with head high ferns
and fallen moss covered logs
really ain t so hard
to live amidst and bear
it just gets kinda lonesome at times
especially after six long
cold months
of livin so isolated
way up north here
all on my own alone
except that is
for all my only other
fine feathered friends up here
i get to visit and see twice a day
who all be outside right...
#earth
#forest
#animals
#birds
#nature
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0 Comments
Reign Supreme
After the clouds have battled with thunder and lightning
There is a break between them in the skies
That’s when a light beams down like hopes and dreams
A sight to behold, a marvel to men’s eyes
The mountains are snow-capped and the foothills are green
After the rain Mother Nature always reigns supreme
There is a break between them in the skies
That’s when a light beams down like hopes and dreams
A sight to behold, a marvel to men’s eyes
The mountains are snow-capped and the foothills are green
After the rain Mother Nature always reigns supreme
#earth
#storm
#nature
88 reads
8 Comments
BEAUTE OF NATURE
The earths beauty that riches in Gods touch
Darknes that laid in the lords art
Light brought colors to everything and such
Plants and Animals he added to show his heavenly heart
Adam and Eve he implemented with mass trust
Beaute of nature " The Father" created from far.
Darknes that laid in the lords art
Light brought colors to everything and such
Plants and Animals he added to show his heavenly heart
Adam and Eve he implemented with mass trust
Beaute of nature " The Father" created from far.
#beauty
#earth
#animals
#nature
#God
127 reads
2 Comments
Mass Suicide by Ignorance
I.
We treat symptoms
without discovering their source
and address freedom
justice and liberty
as convenient truths
when it benefits us
II.
A person gets arrested
we blame mental health
the parents, political affiliation
color, race, gender
instead of asking:
why are so many among us sick
The root is ignored
thus, continues to gorge
on our ignorance
or unwillingness to learn
( you choose )
III.
We have so many
brands of band-aids ...
We treat symptoms
without discovering their source
and address freedom
justice and liberty
as convenient truths
when it benefits us
II.
A person gets arrested
we blame mental health
the parents, political affiliation
color, race, gender
instead of asking:
why are so many among us sick
The root is ignored
thus, continues to gorge
on our ignorance
or unwillingness to learn
( you choose )
III.
We have so many
brands of band-aids ...
#love
#earth
272 reads
19 Comments
Imbolc
Sun returns to earth
and warms cold, damp soil
Seeds awaken from dormancy
and new vigor springs from them.
And our eyes drink in the wonder!
Goddess blesses the earth and its interior.
The fields, the herds and the homes...
She brings healing, inspiration and art.
SHE lights the sacred flame.
And our mouths touch the dense sky!
Imbolc is time for renewal,
of cleaning out the old and preparing the new.
Honor the life that is reborn
and give thanks for the gift of fire.
And our...
and warms cold, damp soil
Seeds awaken from dormancy
and new vigor springs from them.
And our eyes drink in the wonder!
Goddess blesses the earth and its interior.
The fields, the herds and the homes...
She brings healing, inspiration and art.
SHE lights the sacred flame.
And our mouths touch the dense sky!
Imbolc is time for renewal,
of cleaning out the old and preparing the new.
Honor the life that is reborn
and give thanks for the gift of fire.
And our...
#power
#earth
#environment
#spring
#art
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1 Comment
THE TRUTH WILL HAVE YOU KILLED
Prior to Covid, I had a mental map of how society worked. Covid destroyed that picture. Covid revealed society as it really is and it’s shocking. Here's what I’ve learned about society for almost 4 years:
1. The ruling class is psychotic.
Bill Gates, Klaus Schwab, Albert Bourla etc. take delight in killing people, cause carnage just to overcome their own hedonistic adaptation, and are completely incapable of empathy or self-awareness. They have tremendous resources to shape society (and the technologies of persuasion have become incredibly powerful). But these people are...
1. The ruling class is psychotic.
Bill Gates, Klaus Schwab, Albert Bourla etc. take delight in killing people, cause carnage just to overcome their own hedonistic adaptation, and are completely incapable of empathy or self-awareness. They have tremendous resources to shape society (and the technologies of persuasion have become incredibly powerful). But these people are...
#corruption
#power
#politics
#earth
#deception
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2 Comments
Henceforth Utopia
I beheld some wild ruination scenes;
sunsets streaming sideways in a storm cloud dream
beyond post apocalyptic smithereens
in shade length extreme.
Playgrounds forthwith were of offspring devoid
though the woodland leaves caught daylight's farewell gold
just as they would in a graveyard, destroyed,
as they did of old.
The frenzy of depredation had cooled
and now throve only the bramble thorn and weeds.
Gone was the order the groundskeeper ruled
with their green thumb deeds!
Street concrete by the...
sunsets streaming sideways in a storm cloud dream
beyond post apocalyptic smithereens
in shade length extreme.
Playgrounds forthwith were of offspring devoid
though the woodland leaves caught daylight's farewell gold
just as they would in a graveyard, destroyed,
as they did of old.
The frenzy of depredation had cooled
and now throve only the bramble thorn and weeds.
Gone was the order the groundskeeper ruled
with their green thumb deeds!
Street concrete by the...
#dreams
#earth
#nature
#consumerism
#redemption
131 reads
3 Comments
Cockayne
Where I currently reside
Is filled with murder and suicide
Polluted lakes and streams
Sad reality is what it seams
Tainted death and polluted lands
Oceans toxic as well as the sand
Sooner then later change is what we need
Mother earth is dying, this is my final plea
Is filled with murder and suicide
Polluted lakes and streams
Sad reality is what it seams
Tainted death and polluted lands
Oceans toxic as well as the sand
Sooner then later change is what we need
Mother earth is dying, this is my final plea
#hope
#earth
#pollution #support
#pollution #support
95 reads
10 Comments
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