Poems About Earth Seeking Honest Critique
#earth
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Poems about earth seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
thoughtsdie
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 11:33pm
16th Apr 2024 11:33pm
Cannibal Consummation
I peel your layers
Undress the skin clothing you
Caress your dripping flesh
Lick nerve sensations
Cleanse you in dirty breath
Devour raw vitality
Pleasure permeates
Don't just cry in release
Scream in painful pleasure!
Lose yourself in my body
As I eat parts of yours for dinner
The object of my affection
Serve me forever
In death we do not part
But spill our putrescent life
For the earth...
Undress the skin clothing you
Caress your dripping flesh
Lick nerve sensations
Cleanse you in dirty breath
Devour raw vitality
Pleasure permeates
Don't just cry in release
Scream in painful pleasure!
Lose yourself in my body
As I eat parts of yours for dinner
The object of my affection
Serve me forever
In death we do not part
But spill our putrescent life
For the earth...
#dark
#evil
#earth #horror
#earth #horror
49 reads
3 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 11:36am
16th Apr 2024 11:36am
On the heights
At one point only the birds were flying
and the winds came
took the wings
at one point my neck hurt
for following the flight of birds
then the birds got tired
and they glared in the eyes
from anyone who saw them fly
at a certain point the planes appeared
and cut off the wings of the birds
crossed the birds' routes
at that time only planes flew
because the birds
they didn’t have a license to fly
at those heights...
and the winds came
took the wings
at one point my neck hurt
for following the flight of birds
then the birds got tired
and they glared in the eyes
from anyone who saw them fly
at a certain point the planes appeared
and cut off the wings of the birds
crossed the birds' routes
at that time only planes flew
because the birds
they didn’t have a license to fly
at those heights...
#earth
#environment
#birds
31 reads
0 Comments
Carnegia
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 1:03am
13th Apr 2024 1:03am
Into the Light
Prologue
“Anthems to glory and anthems to love and hymns filled with earthly delight.
Like the songs that the darkness composes to worship the light” - Dan Fogelberg
A Free(d) Spirit
Into the light, is our deliverance
It is from the womb’s darkness we are born
God’s gift of life giveth all reverence
A free spirit…dawn of Earthly sojourn
Fate, chance and destiny is our path
Melody of rhythm, rhyme and harmony
With faith, hope and charity will we hath
Life’s opus…sing thy keys in euphony!
...
“Anthems to glory and anthems to love and hymns filled with earthly delight.
Like the songs that the darkness composes to worship the light” - Dan Fogelberg
A Free(d) Spirit
Into the light, is our deliverance
It is from the womb’s darkness we are born
God’s gift of life giveth all reverence
A free spirit…dawn of Earthly sojourn
Fate, chance and destiny is our path
Melody of rhythm, rhyme and harmony
With faith, hope and charity will we hath
Life’s opus…sing thy keys in euphony!
...
#earth
#spiritual
#heaven #freedom
#heaven #freedom
51 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 10:19pm
10th Apr 2024 10:19pm
Gravimetric
The moon betwixt the new and full
goes through the afternoon,
then from the full the Earth will pull
it back to newly lune.
And thus as heaven's shuttlecock
it rackets to and fro
above the sultry summer stock
and over winter snow.
Thereby is how the game is played,
by every planetoid,
in varied orbitals arrayed
throughout the stellar void...
where nothing postulates the math
of nature as a psychopath.
goes through the afternoon,
then from the full the Earth will pull
it back to newly lune.
And thus as heaven's shuttlecock
it rackets to and fro
above the sultry summer stock
and over winter snow.
Thereby is how the game is played,
by every planetoid,
in varied orbitals arrayed
throughout the stellar void...
where nothing postulates the math
of nature as a psychopath.
#earth
#universe
#moon #astronomy
#moon #astronomy
119 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 00:32am
10th Apr 2024 00:32am
World of Filth
Humans are destroying mother earth
fertile lands toxic, decaying rebirth
air, land and sea are heavily polluted
deforestation, extinction, trees uprooted
corporations profit, not a care for our well being
asthma, emphysema, difficulties breathing
diseased animals, FDA approves to consume
aquatic life tainted, lead in our blood stream, awaiting doom
man made diseases, a global threat to our demise
extinction is certain, time to revolt, time to rise
fertile lands toxic, decaying rebirth
air, land and sea are heavily polluted
deforestation, extinction, trees uprooted
corporations profit, not a care for our well being
asthma, emphysema, difficulties breathing
diseased animals, FDA approves to consume
aquatic life tainted, lead in our blood stream, awaiting doom
man made diseases, a global threat to our demise
extinction is certain, time to revolt, time to rise
#corruption
#earth
#environment
#pollution
#greed
57 reads
6 Comments
Carnegia
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 11:30pm
5th Apr 2024 11:30pm
Shadow Dancing
Her presence is hidden in plain daylight
There is where she’ll be dancing with the Sun
Obvious is her absence at midnight
Half world away a rendezvous begun
Blinding silence prologues her shadow dance
Afternoon twilight where syzygy greets
Heavenly bodies acknowledge romance
Of time and place occultation completes
Yet…beyond the umbra not quite to be
A glancing penumbra pirouette teased
Transient attention gathers to see
Shadow dancing o’er horizons appeased
A New Moon on Monday extraordinaire
“Just one moment...
There is where she’ll be dancing with the Sun
Obvious is her absence at midnight
Half world away a rendezvous begun
Blinding silence prologues her shadow dance
Afternoon twilight where syzygy greets
Heavenly bodies acknowledge romance
Of time and place occultation completes
Yet…beyond the umbra not quite to be
A glancing penumbra pirouette teased
Transient attention gathers to see
Shadow dancing o’er horizons appeased
A New Moon on Monday extraordinaire
“Just one moment...
#love
#romantic
#earth
#sun
#moon
78 reads
2 Comments
Northern_Soul
-Missy-
-Missy-
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 9:11am
4th Apr 2024 9:11am
Hymn to Earth
I found the idle skeleton
of a lone deer out on the moor,
half-visible, half-sinking
into the bone-rich mud
eye sockets empty; the skin
quite gone as I considered
how death is simply life
with a free buffet.
Often, I dream of what it must
be like to sink into nothingness.
To seep slowly into the liminal,
to pour fuel into the abyss
how Earth
is always two parts green
often ten parts silence
of a lone deer out on the moor,
half-visible, half-sinking
into the bone-rich mud
eye sockets empty; the skin
quite gone as I considered
how death is simply life
with a free buffet.
Often, I dream of what it must
be like to sink into nothingness.
To seep slowly into the liminal,
to pour fuel into the abyss
how Earth
is always two parts green
often ten parts silence
#earth
#pagan
#Britain
105 reads
15 Comments
diddi
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 3:27am
2nd Apr 2024 3:27am
Losing The Edge
The world
is like a box
hurtling through
the speed of light, cosmos
green and blue
with the corners chopped off
an 8 billion crew, minions to
Captain Jack Frost
trapped in our view, the moon
knows we are lost
the spectrum splits through
the hues
of rainbowed floss
old Moses, he too
got renewed
a testament, to the boss
all the brand new
becomes viewed
and is a was.
A floating illusion
coated in a fission, fusion
uranium, insane, ion cake
the lid is flapping...
is like a box
hurtling through
the speed of light, cosmos
green and blue
with the corners chopped off
an 8 billion crew, minions to
Captain Jack Frost
trapped in our view, the moon
knows we are lost
the spectrum splits through
the hues
of rainbowed floss
old Moses, he too
got renewed
a testament, to the boss
all the brand new
becomes viewed
and is a was.
A floating illusion
coated in a fission, fusion
uranium, insane, ion cake
the lid is flapping...
#earth
38 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 1:55am
1st Apr 2024 1:55am
We Need One Another
The earth was not made for only one race.
Every race and nation belong here.
Moreover, all human beings are equals.
No person is superior to another.
We need the Negroes and the Caucasians.
We need the Jews and the Arabs.
We need the Chinese and the Indians.
We need the Asians and the Eskimos.
The colour of a man’s skin does not matter.
Rich people have the right to life.
Poor people also have the right to life.
Together, we all make the world beautiful.
Every race and nation belong here.
Moreover, all human beings are equals.
No person is superior to another.
We need the Negroes and the Caucasians.
We need the Jews and the Arabs.
We need the Chinese and the Indians.
We need the Asians and the Eskimos.
The colour of a man’s skin does not matter.
Rich people have the right to life.
Poor people also have the right to life.
Together, we all make the world beautiful.
#earth
#humankind
#racism
#motivational
#inspirational
54 reads
2 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
31st Mar 2024 11:38am
31st Mar 2024 11:38am
This Strange World
Would be much more interesting
If hell really did freeze over
If even for a day
No bats could make
Their way out of hell
And we could watch donkeys
Fly high up in the sky
There would be
some sadness, too
If all who said
"Well, I'll be damned!"
Really were subjected
To a horrendous life
In no other place than hell
Your imagination can
Be a blessing or
Sometimes even a curse
So remember when life
Seems at it's strangest
It could...
If hell really did freeze over
If even for a day
No bats could make
Their way out of hell
And we could watch donkeys
Fly high up in the sky
There would be
some sadness, too
If all who said
"Well, I'll be damned!"
Really were subjected
To a horrendous life
In no other place than hell
Your imagination can
Be a blessing or
Sometimes even a curse
So remember when life
Seems at it's strangest
It could...
#science
#earth
#LifeChangingMoment #vulnerability
#LifeChangingMoment #vulnerability
65 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2024 9:28am
22nd Mar 2024 9:28am
Navigating Through Darkness
The Earth above
Circling around Hell
Soulless on a dark river
Calling down the blue light
Returning home
Circling around Hell
Soulless on a dark river
Calling down the blue light
Returning home
#motivational
#earth
#heaven
#hell
#uplifting
76 reads
4 Comments
Ald
Poem Published
11th Mar 2024 2:33am
11th Mar 2024 2:33am
The tree.
Free of charge
My rest.
I believe in green nest
In the morning
Lake of the house
Where the picture
Is green and I parrot🦜
The flying kite.
In the ink work
I befriended Viking
Biking🚴 in green
DrCula December
Photo📷 vernyl
Like ocean of the
Jar call.
In the midst of night
I lake the sea.
Of dreams
Lamps on
Boards.
🦇on wings.
Pliocene
On center.
Yolp
On way waters.
Creating cresting content
Of Clay classics
Of...
My rest.
I believe in green nest
In the morning
Lake of the house
Where the picture
Is green and I parrot🦜
The flying kite.
In the ink work
I befriended Viking
Biking🚴 in green
DrCula December
Photo📷 vernyl
Like ocean of the
Jar call.
In the midst of night
I lake the sea.
Of dreams
Lamps on
Boards.
🦇on wings.
Pliocene
On center.
Yolp
On way waters.
Creating cresting content
Of Clay classics
Of...
#earth
60 reads
1 Comment
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