Poems About Drugs Seeking Honest Critique
#drugs
Poems about drugs seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2024 11:53am
2nd Mar 2024 11:53am
They Call Me
Fucking druggo
Societal missfit
Dirty hippie cunt
Stinking of ganja
Hypocrit
Posting fingers
Lithium gaze
Smoking dangerous cannabis ?
This morbidly obese beast
Medicine cabinet fully stocked
Uppers downers
Antipsychotics
Now answer this
Whos the bigger druggo?
Societal missfit
Dirty hippie cunt
Stinking of ganja
Hypocrit
Posting fingers
Lithium gaze
Smoking dangerous cannabis ?
This morbidly obese beast
Medicine cabinet fully stocked
Uppers downers
Antipsychotics
Now answer this
Whos the bigger druggo?
#drugs
#marijuana
#addiction
143 reads
2 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
29th Feb 2024 8:38am
29th Feb 2024 8:38am
Recreational drugs
I’m smelling fucking colours
I’m seeing through the stars
My eyes have become portals
My body’s up on Mars
I think I’ve become Woody
I think I’ve become Buzz
No wait, I’m actually Bullseye
Ha-ha I’m actually sars
My anatomy is changing
My cells have become cars
The wheels on this bus are turning
On this clock you have my heart
My minds morphed into numbers
Speech has become blurred
Language into music
Pictures into words
Take me to your mother
Ask her, would she take me? ...
I’m seeing through the stars
My eyes have become portals
My body’s up on Mars
I think I’ve become Woody
I think I’ve become Buzz
No wait, I’m actually Bullseye
Ha-ha I’m actually sars
My anatomy is changing
My cells have become cars
The wheels on this bus are turning
On this clock you have my heart
My minds morphed into numbers
Speech has become blurred
Language into music
Pictures into words
Take me to your mother
Ask her, would she take me? ...
#drugs
147 reads
0 Comments
Darkness_Fiend
Poem Published
29th Feb 2024 8:13am
29th Feb 2024 8:13am
(26) Life As I Know It V.XIII.MMXV @ 4:04pm
Drugs ignite twisted perceptions.
Times are rough, that’s an expectation.
Everything the world does is meaningless.
Life keeps teaching us.
In the bathroom reflecting on events that occurred.
Scribbling it down as I’m flying like a bird.
Hoping one day these painful rhymes get recognized.
Miserable memories linger, my family cries.
Life’s a twisted dimension, swirling in circles.
Roaming dark alleyways, smoking on some purple.
I don’t have enough reasons to live nor end it.
Regardless, I can’t split.
I’m not the one...
Times are rough, that’s an expectation.
Everything the world does is meaningless.
Life keeps teaching us.
In the bathroom reflecting on events that occurred.
Scribbling it down as I’m flying like a bird.
Hoping one day these painful rhymes get recognized.
Miserable memories linger, my family cries.
Life’s a twisted dimension, swirling in circles.
Roaming dark alleyways, smoking on some purple.
I don’t have enough reasons to live nor end it.
Regardless, I can’t split.
I’m not the one...
#drugs
#addiction
121 reads
0 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 6:31pm
27th Feb 2024 6:31pm
On My Shaggy Shit
Here we go again traveling to another so-called haunted place
While I blow chronic smoke in my home dog’s face,
“We have been dealing with this creepy shit for so long
Sometimes I think about turning my crew to ghost-am I wrong,
“Little do they know I carry a gun I nicknamed the ‘Ghostmaker’
For those fools at the end who are spiritual fakers,
“Because a long time ago my ass stopped all that running
I’m not trying to lose weight so a motherfucka started gunning,
“Let Daphne and Fred Karen asses...
While I blow chronic smoke in my home dog’s face,
“We have been dealing with this creepy shit for so long
Sometimes I think about turning my crew to ghost-am I wrong,
“Little do they know I carry a gun I nicknamed the ‘Ghostmaker’
For those fools at the end who are spiritual fakers,
“Because a long time ago my ass stopped all that running
I’m not trying to lose weight so a motherfucka started gunning,
“Let Daphne and Fred Karen asses...
#sex
#drugs
144 reads
6 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 1:52pm
22nd Feb 2024 1:52pm
Northern youth…
#depression
#drugs
#addiction
#nostalgia
#manipulation
89 reads
3 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 2:04am
22nd Feb 2024 2:04am
Drugs
#abuse
#LifeStruggles
#drugs #addiction
#drugs #addiction
123 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Feb 2024 2:47pm
15th Feb 2024 2:47pm
Identical Twins
They were identical twins and beautiful
they shared lovers,
they shared clothes,
they shared the automobile,
they shared needles,
they shared their horrifying near death experiences,
they shared the emergency room,
they shared a wake & funeral,
they now share the same plot and gravestone.
they shared lovers,
they shared clothes,
they shared the automobile,
they shared needles,
they shared their horrifying near death experiences,
they shared the emergency room,
they shared a wake & funeral,
they now share the same plot and gravestone.
#death
#drugs
#addiction
85 reads
2 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
15th Feb 2024 4:31am
15th Feb 2024 4:31am
On this lonesome highway
Bridges engulfed
no going back
Bridges engulfed
warm safety blanket
There once was a silver spoon
that soon became a blackened mess
The dish stood aghast
lost within the crack den
On the needle crucified
chasing the face of God
Sound those drums the marching powders arrived
Caved in the septum spelunkers
A hand full of darts smoldering still
coffin nails for that nicotine fix
Liver pickled
Getting that Amphetamine feel
Mainlining time like she's gone out of fashion
When all that's done...
no going back
Bridges engulfed
warm safety blanket
There once was a silver spoon
that soon became a blackened mess
The dish stood aghast
lost within the crack den
On the needle crucified
chasing the face of God
Sound those drums the marching powders arrived
Caved in the septum spelunkers
A hand full of darts smoldering still
coffin nails for that nicotine fix
Liver pickled
Getting that Amphetamine feel
Mainlining time like she's gone out of fashion
When all that's done...
#drugs
#PopCulture
92 reads
1 Comment
monkeyman
Poem Published
12th Feb 2024 2:58pm
12th Feb 2024 2:58pm
One of Them
Stop with the parties
for starters
quit the drugs
and the booze
And the football and horses
you know you’re no fun when you loose
Give up the smokes
no jokes
if you can muster the will
And the friend who reminds you,
“Even boredom can kill”
Go sober they told ya
it will all work out fine
But that doesn’t help with the demons
or passing the time
Be respected and successful
be everything they tell you to be
Do what you want, man
just don’t try and sell it to me
Keep your...
for starters
quit the drugs
and the booze
And the football and horses
you know you’re no fun when you loose
Give up the smokes
no jokes
if you can muster the will
And the friend who reminds you,
“Even boredom can kill”
Go sober they told ya
it will all work out fine
But that doesn’t help with the demons
or passing the time
Be respected and successful
be everything they tell you to be
Do what you want, man
just don’t try and sell it to me
Keep your...
#alcohol
#drugs
#addiction
#freedom
#escape
114 reads
4 Comments
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
10th Feb 2024 7:03pm
10th Feb 2024 7:03pm
Netflix & Kill
Netflix and chill seems to be the motto, an excuse to hang out while getting all blotto!
To chill with one another, and hopefully get it on!? However, sometimes, it can go terribly wrong.
Tarquin was scrolling on Facebook, just having a gooseys, when he sees a status by a dorris called Lucy...
"Can any1 suggest any good serial killer documentaries?" Tarquin then commented underneath it. "Yes, I know plenty!"
They started to banter, back and forth on the comments, from flirting to cherpsing and chatting some nonsense.
...
To chill with one another, and hopefully get it on!? However, sometimes, it can go terribly wrong.
Tarquin was scrolling on Facebook, just having a gooseys, when he sees a status by a dorris called Lucy...
"Can any1 suggest any good serial killer documentaries?" Tarquin then commented underneath it. "Yes, I know plenty!"
They started to banter, back and forth on the comments, from flirting to cherpsing and chatting some nonsense.
...
#romantic
#murder
#violence
#drugs
#dating
138 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Feb 2024 7:34pm
9th Feb 2024 7:34pm
She
She was a junkie
she told her friends that she was going to get out of this apt that her boyfriend owns
she says there's bad vibes there
she said that he keeps me hooked on smack
she wanted change
she wanted to pull away from him, seek help and move forward
she wanted to escape the city & get away from people, places & things
she decided to hang with her girlfriends one night
she was at her best friends place
she got the urge to get high
she most certainly did, a half hour later,
she was found dead on the floor in her girlfriends...
she told her friends that she was going to get out of this apt that her boyfriend owns
she says there's bad vibes there
she said that he keeps me hooked on smack
she wanted change
she wanted to pull away from him, seek help and move forward
she wanted to escape the city & get away from people, places & things
she decided to hang with her girlfriends one night
she was at her best friends place
she got the urge to get high
she most certainly did, a half hour later,
she was found dead on the floor in her girlfriends...
#death
#drugs
#addiction #LifeChangingMoment
#addiction #LifeChangingMoment
137 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Feb 2024 10:56pm
6th Feb 2024 10:56pm
You Must Fight To Live
#drugs
#rhyming
#homelessness
#addiction
#poverty
90 reads
8 Comments
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