Poems About Disappointment by Top Critiquers
#disappointment
Poems about disappointment by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 7:59am
7th Nov 2024 7:59am
Toxic Regime
Can someone please explain their logic?
I’m lost beyond measure it would seem
I got deja-vu the whole thing feels ironic
Once again living under this toxic regime
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
I’m lost beyond measure it would seem
I got deja-vu the whole thing feels ironic
Once again living under this toxic regime
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#disappointment
139 reads
17 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 8:31pm
29th Sep 2024 8:31pm
Hermetic Breakdown (collaboration with AfterSexDilemma)
Here I sit alone and broken
My owner is annoyed
Windows won't even open
I lay dormant here, stranded in a church parking lot
Jesus won't help me
The ignition clicks, the engine is shot
Maybe it's time to meet that junk pile in the sky
If I had wings, I'd surely learn how to fly
Inside I die.
A slow demise.
A stuttered stop.
My purpose was forgot.
My owners empathy is unwise.
My detriment is no surprise.
The church is an empty lot.
There's no god that I've got.
Just brutal sun skies.
Scrutinizing...
My owner is annoyed
Windows won't even open
I lay dormant here, stranded in a church parking lot
Jesus won't help me
The ignition clicks, the engine is shot
Maybe it's time to meet that junk pile in the sky
If I had wings, I'd surely learn how to fly
Inside I die.
A slow demise.
A stuttered stop.
My purpose was forgot.
My owners empathy is unwise.
My detriment is no surprise.
The church is an empty lot.
There's no god that I've got.
Just brutal sun skies.
Scrutinizing...
#cars
#disappointment
#loneliness
#philosophical
#religion
86 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Dec 2022 1:47am
18th Dec 2022 1:47am
burn
come fiercely and burn the night
ashes on the wind keen
I'm in no mood now blow
insincerity of hope bleed truth
I am no toy
heathenistic I get from my knees and rise
insulting larceny stole my joy
petty thief of the heart
I want it back
I am willing a debt to my soul be paid
jilted storm where will you rain?
inside my pain you are welcome
twist my feelings until they are honest
lustful hex you are next to bleed tears
cold demeanor in the skies of a trickster
I hurt but I will get over it ...
ashes on the wind keen
I'm in no mood now blow
insincerity of hope bleed truth
I am no toy
heathenistic I get from my knees and rise
insulting larceny stole my joy
petty thief of the heart
I want it back
I am willing a debt to my soul be paid
jilted storm where will you rain?
inside my pain you are welcome
twist my feelings until they are honest
lustful hex you are next to bleed tears
cold demeanor in the skies of a trickster
I hurt but I will get over it ...
#sadness
#disappointment
389 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Jun 2024 1:08pm
27th Jun 2024 1:08pm
Come To Bed
Why don't you come to bed?
Why don't you come to bed stop pacing back and forth?
What happened earlier and what was said means nothing in the afterthought?
Why don't you come to bed and just lay down?
I can see the weariness and the lines and the frown that you have on your face
lay down
why don't you come to bed and just forget about it?
Yeah I know it's easy for me to say forget about it
because you didn't experience anything like that before but I have
I see that you're angry and you're...
Why don't you come to bed stop pacing back and forth?
What happened earlier and what was said means nothing in the afterthought?
Why don't you come to bed and just lay down?
I can see the weariness and the lines and the frown that you have on your face
lay down
why don't you come to bed and just forget about it?
Yeah I know it's easy for me to say forget about it
because you didn't experience anything like that before but I have
I see that you're angry and you're...
#anxiety
#disappointment
#frustration #hope
#frustration #hope
53 reads
24 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
8th Jun 2016 00:18am
8th Jun 2016 00:18am
In Your Face
What you say to a poet should be
carefully measured, not edited.
Do not mistake caramel
and the sweetness
of silence for censorship.
If she is blind, she will still peel
one good layer of your laugh,
she will have an analyst come
to your window in the night
and scrape the breath
from your pane to ensure
you are not sneaking a secret --
if she is not blind she will
poke holes through the air,
a pocket to insert your 7th
grade fear of mundane,
you're exquisite talent
for evasion as a child, ...
carefully measured, not edited.
Do not mistake caramel
and the sweetness
of silence for censorship.
If she is blind, she will still peel
one good layer of your laugh,
she will have an analyst come
to your window in the night
and scrape the breath
from your pane to ensure
you are not sneaking a secret --
if she is not blind she will
poke holes through the air,
a pocket to insert your 7th
grade fear of mundane,
you're exquisite talent
for evasion as a child, ...
#anger
#frustration
#disappointment
1677 reads
40 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 2:09pm
1st Dec 2024 2:09pm
Anomy
When you one day fathom a brother,
(raised by the same father and mother),
proudly display the hat
of parochial scat...
you'll wish your brother was another!
(raised by the same father and mother),
proudly display the hat
of parochial scat...
you'll wish your brother was another!
#disappointment
#family
89 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:28pm
Yesterday 8:28pm
Make Adjustment for your life
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words. ✍️ Let's take a moment to really analyze, the very stages of your steps into your own life.
Let's be honest and truthful and subconscious of our own personal thoughts. 🤔 Let's go through somethings, that you have done and not done, in the course of stages. What was your steps into life, within the stages that helped you to make, a decision to make changes. For ask thyself what would you like, to change or did change in your own life. 🤔 For sure did you repeat somethings, that altered your...
Let's be honest and truthful and subconscious of our own personal thoughts. 🤔 Let's go through somethings, that you have done and not done, in the course of stages. What was your steps into life, within the stages that helped you to make, a decision to make changes. For ask thyself what would you like, to change or did change in your own life. 🤔 For sure did you repeat somethings, that altered your...
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#regret
#sadness
28 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2023 8:58pm
22nd Nov 2023 8:58pm
Optimistic Pessimist
Fixed a squeaky door
WD40
Expect the squeak anyway
Somewhat disappointed
Success
Failure too
WD40
Expect the squeak anyway
Somewhat disappointed
Success
Failure too
#disappointment
#success
134 reads
24 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 3:41pm
26th Aug 2024 3:41pm
I'LL BOTHER YOU NO MORE
YES
I am a slow
learner but
once I learn
it is never
forgotten or
worth spending
idle time trying
to go through
a dead-end..
I
tried being coy,
casual and up front.
sometimes feeling
a brief ray of hope;
BUT
I have learned another
lesson in the life
of a wannabe poet:
"Enough fooling yourself."
I
will never bother
YOU again.
P.S. No! I'm not leaving DUP. Thanks for your encouragement.
I am a slow
learner but
once I learn
it is never
forgotten or
worth spending
idle time trying
to go through
a dead-end..
I
tried being coy,
casual and up front.
sometimes feeling
a brief ray of hope;
BUT
I have learned another
lesson in the life
of a wannabe poet:
"Enough fooling yourself."
I
will never bother
YOU again.
P.S. No! I'm not leaving DUP. Thanks for your encouragement.
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
180 reads
10 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 2:14pm
14th Apr 2024 2:14pm
crushed cookies
14 of 30
she used to look at me like she hated me
...my mother's mother...
wanted to erase my existence from her reality
mom always said it was all in my head
...that I was just being too sensitive
{I got that a lot growing up...}
until one holiday when I was 15
that woman sent a box of presents
lovely wrapped packages for mom & my sister
...complete with shimmery bows & pretty labels
each of them receiving warm fluffy robes
{they even had big pockets!}
...& matching slippers for them both ...
she used to look at me like she hated me
...my mother's mother...
wanted to erase my existence from her reality
mom always said it was all in my head
...that I was just being too sensitive
{I got that a lot growing up...}
until one holiday when I was 15
that woman sent a box of presents
lovely wrapped packages for mom & my sister
...complete with shimmery bows & pretty labels
each of them receiving warm fluffy robes
{they even had big pockets!}
...& matching slippers for them both ...
#hate
#rejection
#memories
#disappointment
#NaPoWriMo2024
157 reads
12 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 4:16pm
29th Sep 2024 4:16pm
Hermetic Breakdown (collab with Vision_of_insanity)
Here I sit alone and broken
My owner is annoyed
Windows won't even open
I lay dormant here, stranded in a church parking lot
Jesus won't help me
The ignition clicks, the engine is shot
Maybe it's time to meet that junk pile in the sky
If I had wings, I'd surely learn how to fly
Inside I die.
A slow demise.
A stuttered stop.
My purpose was forgot.
My owners empathy is unwise.
My detriment is no surprise.
The church is an empty lot.
There's no god that I've got.
Just brutal sun skies.
Scrutinizing...
My owner is annoyed
Windows won't even open
I lay dormant here, stranded in a church parking lot
Jesus won't help me
The ignition clicks, the engine is shot
Maybe it's time to meet that junk pile in the sky
If I had wings, I'd surely learn how to fly
Inside I die.
A slow demise.
A stuttered stop.
My purpose was forgot.
My owners empathy is unwise.
My detriment is no surprise.
The church is an empty lot.
There's no god that I've got.
Just brutal sun skies.
Scrutinizing...
#cars
#disappointment
#loneliness
155 reads
15 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 2:41am
30th Nov 2024 2:41am
question loneliness
i have
begun to
question
loneliness,
rearrange
my thoughts,
whether
light day
or dark
of night,
i come
up with
the same
problems,
because
there is
no one
here to
help me
understand.
begun to
question
loneliness,
rearrange
my thoughts,
whether
light day
or dark
of night,
i come
up with
the same
problems,
because
there is
no one
here to
help me
understand.
#confusion
#disappointment
#frustration
#loneliness
#sadness
73 reads
7 Comments
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