Poems About Disappointment Seeking Friendly Advice
#disappointment
Poems about disappointment seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
Buried in Basalt
My hearts feels buried in basalt gravel
Delicate pressure points all surrounding
Each rocks presence is well known
A chorus of angular, uneven and jagged
Hearts can't help but beat as they are meant to
It's as the ocean beats against the sand
My blood doesn't soften the gravel as water does
Instead of crashing it pools through the gaps
Blood on basalt... It's quite the sight to behold
That thin fluid that turns rusty swirls to black
Each beat lifting and unsettling each stone
Each movement a new song thumps into existence
A song...
Delicate pressure points all surrounding
Each rocks presence is well known
A chorus of angular, uneven and jagged
Hearts can't help but beat as they are meant to
It's as the ocean beats against the sand
My blood doesn't soften the gravel as water does
Instead of crashing it pools through the gaps
Blood on basalt... It's quite the sight to behold
That thin fluid that turns rusty swirls to black
Each beat lifting and unsettling each stone
Each movement a new song thumps into existence
A song...
#sadness
#heartbroken
#UnrequitedLove
#disappointment
#FeelingTrapped
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003
The sun doesn’t shine, like it did last spring
Winter burns, leaving a hunger in me
I want to run, run until I collapse
I want to curl into a ball,
Cry, and sob just to make
my silence,
ache a little less.
This doesn’t make sense
Reality falls at my feet
But I’m still chasing it down
these empty streets
Tomorrow feels hopeless
While tonight, I feel alright
Gods, I’m grinning, but really
I’d rather cut myself
Open with a knife.
No last words,
nor bittersweet,
goodbyes.
...
Winter burns, leaving a hunger in me
I want to run, run until I collapse
I want to curl into a ball,
Cry, and sob just to make
my silence,
ache a little less.
This doesn’t make sense
Reality falls at my feet
But I’m still chasing it down
these empty streets
Tomorrow feels hopeless
While tonight, I feel alright
Gods, I’m grinning, but really
I’d rather cut myself
Open with a knife.
No last words,
nor bittersweet,
goodbyes.
...
#sadness
#depression
#disappointment
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Sensitivity
I grow disappointedly,after another attack from remarks,after heartache,break,can't take,misery.ls this my destiny,for my lack?
©SukiSushiCrown.19-01-2024
©SukiSushiCrown.19-01-2024
#sadness
#betrayal
#disappointment
#bittersweet
#manipulation
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Contemplative Grounds
Brewing motivation
Mental stim*ulation
Mind ajar
Cup in hand
Thoughts crammed
into s p a c e s
too small
Stacked
to the
rafters
Ugly little monsters
Gnawing at
the last thread
Until it
SNAPS
l
o
s
t
So...
Mental stim*ulation
Mind ajar
Cup in hand
Thoughts crammed
into s p a c e s
too small
Stacked
to the
rafters
Ugly little monsters
Gnawing at
the last thread
Until it
SNAPS
l
o
s
t
So...
#loneliness
#LifeStruggles
#coffee
#memories
#disappointment
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Leaving you hurts
There is scar on my heart
where your words shelled
it never heals but reeks in pain
smeared by your disdain
my heart still beats
as blood spills
from the hole you made
you smashed my spirit into broken glass pieces
as you sliced my desires
with a switch blade
where your words shelled
it never heals but reeks in pain
smeared by your disdain
my heart still beats
as blood spills
from the hole you made
you smashed my spirit into broken glass pieces
as you sliced my desires
with a switch blade
#sadness
#heartbroken
#breakup #disappointment
#breakup #disappointment
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What Would Orwell Say
Docile and tame
our unending shame
that some regard as fame
homogenized
pasteurized
and sanitized
the Animal Farm of existence
.
What would Orwell say
groaning in his grave
to see his cautionary tale unfold
in a world grown cold
restricted and controlled
-
Stop waiting to be told
safe within the fold
placidly living on the wold
Baa-ing like frightened ewes
is this the life you choose
-
What would Orwell say
about our lives of molded clay
as we're...
our unending shame
that some regard as fame
homogenized
pasteurized
and sanitized
the Animal Farm of existence
.
What would Orwell say
groaning in his grave
to see his cautionary tale unfold
in a world grown cold
restricted and controlled
-
Stop waiting to be told
safe within the fold
placidly living on the wold
Baa-ing like frightened ewes
is this the life you choose
-
What would Orwell say
about our lives of molded clay
as we're...
#escape
#disappointment
#rebellion
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White Noise
The mask c r a c k s
A little more
with each stark
de*part*ure
Despite promises
to remain
They f a d e
Best
to simply
turn away
Scream
into unending
darkness
Unable to
smother
the
drums
Muffle
the inevitable sound
Clicking
into waiting
silence
As farewell
closes another door
Leaving this...
A little more
with each stark
de*part*ure
Despite promises
to remain
They f a d e
Best
to simply
turn away
Scream
into unending
darkness
Unable to
smother
the
drums
Muffle
the inevitable sound
Clicking
into waiting
silence
As farewell
closes another door
Leaving this...
#sadness
#loneliness
#disappointment
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Better
If I had a better mind
I could bend the little travesties.
Make amends with the Gods of everything
Gravity wouldn't feel so damn heavy
and I could finally say something happy
Not melodramatic conversation pieces
A real hopeful and respectful sentencing
where I didn't have to fake my conviction
just to make you smile
and watch you walk away with a part of me
I don't want to learn another lesson
I don't want to see the worse side of my depression
Because sometimes the medication is too much to take
remember when you said...
I could bend the little travesties.
Make amends with the Gods of everything
Gravity wouldn't feel so damn heavy
and I could finally say something happy
Not melodramatic conversation pieces
A real hopeful and respectful sentencing
where I didn't have to fake my conviction
just to make you smile
and watch you walk away with a part of me
I don't want to learn another lesson
I don't want to see the worse side of my depression
Because sometimes the medication is too much to take
remember when you said...
#happiness
#anxiety
#redemption
#disappointment
#emptiness
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Resigned
The imagination,
both a blessing and a curse,
can be manipulated
to tell a story
that doesn't exist
It is hard to hold the tongue,
to immediately jump on the defense
but if asked to do so
I can only respect that with silence
As a small boy,
the neighbours were convinced
I had snuck into their pool
while away on vacation,
and the funny thing is,
I wasn't even in town
when my reported trespass occurred
From there,
there has been a lifetime of inventions
and accusations,
and being...
both a blessing and a curse,
can be manipulated
to tell a story
that doesn't exist
It is hard to hold the tongue,
to immediately jump on the defense
but if asked to do so
I can only respect that with silence
As a small boy,
the neighbours were convinced
I had snuck into their pool
while away on vacation,
and the funny thing is,
I wasn't even in town
when my reported trespass occurred
From there,
there has been a lifetime of inventions
and accusations,
and being...
#relationships
#disappointment
#hurt
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Wants not Needs
I swim in the ebb and flow
of life's cycles eternal tide
to birth and life grasping
what stories living has to offer
there's comedy in cycles circle
cruel pranks of enticement
only to be cruelly withheld
ambitions become unreachable
love for instance becomes a dream
comforts are shown from windows
of someone's living room
leaving bitter tastes in one's palate
the ache that lingers
none can actually share
for each their own disappointment
each to their dimensions of despair
wishing to find...
of life's cycles eternal tide
to birth and life grasping
what stories living has to offer
there's comedy in cycles circle
cruel pranks of enticement
only to be cruelly withheld
ambitions become unreachable
love for instance becomes a dream
comforts are shown from windows
of someone's living room
leaving bitter tastes in one's palate
the ache that lingers
none can actually share
for each their own disappointment
each to their dimensions of despair
wishing to find...
#SelfReflection
#disappointment
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Tears from Ashes
In the clash of vengeance, a battle unfolds,
Where flowers once bloomed, your wrath takes hold.
As if my existence, you choose to erase,
In the aftermath, ashes whisper, leaving no trace.
Where flowers once bloomed, your wrath takes hold.
As if my existence, you choose to erase,
In the aftermath, ashes whisper, leaving no trace.
#anger
#dark
#frustration
#disappointment
#emptiness
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The Transparent Vestments of Narcissistic Indifference
Shackled on the cold hard stone of your mind,
welcoming the sacrificial knife, weeping as rituals steal my heart,
giving all for love
-
Priestess of the sun god of your need,
devout belief in the morality of your greed,
erecting a tower of skulls you are freed
-
Empathy and compassion do not worship Huitzilopochtli,
shapeshifting god once appearing as Gaia or Kali,
resplendent in the transparent vestments of your narcissistic indifference.
-
take this...
welcoming the sacrificial knife, weeping as rituals steal my heart,
giving all for love
-
Priestess of the sun god of your need,
devout belief in the morality of your greed,
erecting a tower of skulls you are freed
-
Empathy and compassion do not worship Huitzilopochtli,
shapeshifting god once appearing as Gaia or Kali,
resplendent in the transparent vestments of your narcissistic indifference.
-
take this...
#anger
#betrayal
#disappointment
#manipulation
#deception
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DU Poetry : Poems About Disappointment Seeking Friendly Advice