Poems About Dawn Seeking Honest Critique
#dawn
Here Comes Spring
Last trace of winter
Leaving a chill in the air
Spring will soon be here
Leaving a chill in the air
Spring will soon be here
#spring
#dawn
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Pawns After Dawn
Flames get sparked as we walk through our darkest of times
We can't stay parked and embark upon enlightened minds
We must find the pine colored gems within our struggles
Then answer them in pen within scantron bubbles
Rumbles In the jungles are tests of lions' & lioness' might
To see if we stumble as we juggle then fumble the insight
The sight of light doesn't evoke delight until after it's been gone
Just like the Sun's spike as it's transformed from dusk to dawn
Will you be a pawn and rest upon your laurels
Or carry on...
We can't stay parked and embark upon enlightened minds
We must find the pine colored gems within our struggles
Then answer them in pen within scantron bubbles
Rumbles In the jungles are tests of lions' & lioness' might
To see if we stumble as we juggle then fumble the insight
The sight of light doesn't evoke delight until after it's been gone
Just like the Sun's spike as it's transformed from dusk to dawn
Will you be a pawn and rest upon your laurels
Or carry on...
#dark
#LifeStruggles
#inspirational
#sun
#dawn
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Sectional Rhythm Leading By Fate
Fantasy in the
rhythm section.......What'up
over there?
A passle of hastle hustle
bent up pent up (House)
for a major chordal
of a chortle /
a minor's minor /
(oh, don't touch that thing, swing
it like a hell's bells
...
rhythm section.......What'up
over there?
A passle of hastle hustle
bent up pent up (House)
for a major chordal
of a chortle /
a minor's minor /
(oh, don't touch that thing, swing
it like a hell's bells
...
#betrayal
#sun
#night
#scary
#dawn
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Water Dripping Methodically In The Background
There were these words that longed
to be released, but the heart kept
them in a sinking ship near the
Bermuda Triangle part of the brain.
Actions aren't as loud as we
were lead to believe,
constant wondering is
actually quite maddening,
I guess there's something about
insanity that makes one want to
see if things might change.
The silence brings thoughts of
mechanical gears rotating slowly
in the mind, clicking into place
one notch, tinging tines,
more crazy, more of nothing. ...
to be released, but the heart kept
them in a sinking ship near the
Bermuda Triangle part of the brain.
Actions aren't as loud as we
were lead to believe,
constant wondering is
actually quite maddening,
I guess there's something about
insanity that makes one want to
see if things might change.
The silence brings thoughts of
mechanical gears rotating slowly
in the mind, clicking into place
one notch, tinging tines,
more crazy, more of nothing. ...
#water
#silence
#fairies #dawn
#fairies #dawn
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Iron Bars and Jerk-Off Jars in the Latest NewYear Style (the "Advent" of 2021 a.d.)
Un
equaled in
the senses plentiful,
grass
be
m o s t w a ys browner on
t h e
otherside of the scythe (held
in the old, dis'awkward manner.
That damned reaper of the damned, (go-
ing about in the damnedest of ways), you
could not help but feel
the glow of eXoneration blinding
...
equaled in
the senses plentiful,
grass
be
m o s t w a ys browner on
t h e
otherside of the scythe (held
in the old, dis'awkward manner.
That damned reaper of the damned, (go-
ing about in the damnedest of ways), you
could not help but feel
the glow of eXoneration blinding
...
#death
#sun
#WritingPoetry #dawn
#WritingPoetry #dawn
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Stay In My Arms
The few moments I spent with you gave me an inexpressible feeling
I wanted you to stay in my arms and gratify me, but you had to go
You smiled and waved to me from across the shopping centre
Now that I am close to you, I can look in your rare gray eyes again
Everything that I dreamed for is here when I hold you in my arms
Darling, stay in my arms until the pale light of dawn starts to show
I wanted you to stay in my arms and gratify me, but you had to go
You smiled and waved to me from across the shopping centre
Now that I am close to you, I can look in your rare gray eyes again
Everything that I dreamed for is here when I hold you in my arms
Darling, stay in my arms until the pale light of dawn starts to show
#love
#dreams
#dawn
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Quarter til 5
Morning breaks through the cracks of the shades, filtered and blurry
light pouring in from the gap between the curtains. I’ve been awake far before
the dawn stretched it’s sleepy arms over my window; the low morning light
reminding me I can’t stay hidden under the fleeting twilight cover. I miss the peace,
though.
light pouring in from the gap between the curtains. I’ve been awake far before
the dawn stretched it’s sleepy arms over my window; the low morning light
reminding me I can’t stay hidden under the fleeting twilight cover. I miss the peace,
though.
#sun
#morning
#sleep
#emptiness
#dawn
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dkzk Paradoxymoronic Poyls of Wizzdumb / Vol. One
Photo of dkzk by by by Leah Powell, AKA Anna Funk
Everything is all there is.
Nothing is all there was,
and all that ever will be.
Everything is nothing
multiplied by zero.
My child is dead.
Lifelong grief.
Lifelong sorrow.
(Period).
Everything is everywhere.
Nothing is everywhere.
Oh,oh...lost his grip on duality.
(What a shame).
If everything was nothing, could
anything be real and eXist?
Of course not....
Everything is all there is.
Nothing is all there was,
and all that ever will be.
Everything is nothing
multiplied by zero.
My child is dead.
Lifelong grief.
Lifelong sorrow.
(Period).
Everything is everywhere.
Nothing is everywhere.
Oh,oh...lost his grip on duality.
(What a shame).
If everything was nothing, could
anything be real and eXist?
Of course not....
#night
#nightmares
#philosophical
#morality
#dawn
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being left to forage
haven't been in a café for
months I've been having
breakfast at home requires
cooking or frying or toasting
or something other than
porridge ? full of lumps
months I've been having
breakfast at home requires
cooking or frying or toasting
or something other than
porridge ? full of lumps
#food
#dawn
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When Love Is The Foremost Thing On Your Mind
Your mornings begin with cheer and laughter
When love is the foremost thing on your mind.
Things aren’t always as hopeless as they seem.
You find yourself humming and singing all day long.
Although it’s late in the night, you can’t fall asleep.
You’d rather stay awake and daydream until dawn.
There are so many things to do with your time,
But you want to spend every day with your sweetheart.
When you're thinking of the one who excites your heart,
The madness of this world doesn’t affect you.
...
When love is the foremost thing on your mind.
Things aren’t always as hopeless as they seem.
You find yourself humming and singing all day long.
Although it’s late in the night, you can’t fall asleep.
You’d rather stay awake and daydream until dawn.
There are so many things to do with your time,
But you want to spend every day with your sweetheart.
When you're thinking of the one who excites your heart,
The madness of this world doesn’t affect you.
...
#love
#night
#sleep
#dawn
#happiness
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Another Day, Coming night!
For those who feel their days
became dull
to those who still crave, with forces so null,
like a day is just another day
a night coming to a night ...
It's a new day, a coming night!
May it be yours, forces so bright.
Don't lose, to those coarse force
Don't tame, into the clinging remorse...
Come, blasé,
and sing songs with me!
Where hope and romance fill thee
Let loose, set those spirits free
Unleash the love within ye...
May solutions, come to your
troubles
may pleasance...
became dull
to those who still crave, with forces so null,
like a day is just another day
a night coming to a night ...
It's a new day, a coming night!
May it be yours, forces so bright.
Don't lose, to those coarse force
Don't tame, into the clinging remorse...
Come, blasé,
and sing songs with me!
Where hope and romance fill thee
Let loose, set those spirits free
Unleash the love within ye...
May solutions, come to your
troubles
may pleasance...
#dawn
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fentanyl
so the high is so powerful that nobody
wants heroin unless its mixed with fentanyl.
and the dealers give out freebies in the morning and mix up one special packet of drugs that is too strong and causes the person to O.D.
word travels among the addicts that this dealer has got the strongest stuff so they flock to him.
say it aint so
wants heroin unless its mixed with fentanyl.
and the dealers give out freebies in the morning and mix up one special packet of drugs that is too strong and causes the person to O.D.
word travels among the addicts that this dealer has got the strongest stuff so they flock to him.
say it aint so
#morning
#coffee
#food
#LifeGoals
#dawn
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DU Poetry : Poems About Dawn Seeking Honest Critique