Poems About Dawn Seeking Honest Critique
#dawn
Respect not long after dawn
#teens
#identity
#inspirational
#freedom
#dawn
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I Don't Know Who You Are... Nor Do I Want To
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#dialogue
#sensual
#dawn
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Earthshine
She filled the glass with crescent gold
And you can bet that I was impressed
By a sight, although eons old,
I had telescopically compressed...
Which gave pulsation to the air
And motion to her massy pocks
Slowly raising in Aurora's glare
Her oceans of volcanic rocks,
And as our Earth glow faded
With the beginning of the day,
I heard the night time quiet traded
For brand new sounds of avian play,
Which is the heaven songbirds make
When crescent moons help day to break!
And you can bet that I was impressed
By a sight, although eons old,
I had telescopically compressed...
Which gave pulsation to the air
And motion to her massy pocks
Slowly raising in Aurora's glare
Her oceans of volcanic rocks,
And as our Earth glow faded
With the beginning of the day,
I heard the night time quiet traded
For brand new sounds of avian play,
Which is the heaven songbirds make
When crescent moons help day to break!
#moon
#summer
#morning #dawn
#morning #dawn
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On One Saturday Morning
Billy was watching
cartoons on one
Saturday morning
and not paying
attention to Krusty
the cat who stared
at the laces on his
blue sneakers.
cartoons on one
Saturday morning
and not paying
attention to Krusty
the cat who stared
at the laces on his
blue sneakers.
#childhood
#home
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#dawn
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The Full Sturgeon!
Oh golden orb of gracious light
Sweep away daylight's roasting sky
And tease the currents of the night
With the cool way your moonbeams fly,
Never thrown like the bolts of Zeus
Or with Apollo's brazen heat
Which threaten both cypress and spruce
Whereby lunar lovers meet
And by your beam will love much more
In the sportive midnight fashion
Which pumps the blood found at the core
Of a lover's fit of passion
And sure to keep that love awake
To boast of it for repletion's sake!
Sweep away daylight's roasting sky
And tease the currents of the night
With the cool way your moonbeams fly,
Never thrown like the bolts of Zeus
Or with Apollo's brazen heat
Which threaten both cypress and spruce
Whereby lunar lovers meet
And by your beam will love much more
In the sportive midnight fashion
Which pumps the blood found at the core
Of a lover's fit of passion
And sure to keep that love awake
To boast of it for repletion's sake!
#summer
#dawn
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Good Night!
Oh honeyed gibbous, how you glow,
And gently glaze the morning dew
Through the gossamer cloud band flow
The wind on high creates for you,
And as you wane above the billows
I think of the people dreaming
All night long upon their pillows
Missing all your golden beaming
Which must enchant Aurora's eyes
For in the east I see anew
Her bold effect on your old skies
Which has them turning brighter blue,
And is how heavenly bodies make
The glory seen in days that break!
And gently glaze the morning dew
Through the gossamer cloud band flow
The wind on high creates for you,
And as you wane above the billows
I think of the people dreaming
All night long upon their pillows
Missing all your golden beaming
Which must enchant Aurora's eyes
For in the east I see anew
Her bold effect on your old skies
Which has them turning brighter blue,
And is how heavenly bodies make
The glory seen in days that break!
#dawn
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Ordinance
There was no hint of breeze when the moon arose
And mechanistically scaled the sky
To presage Apollo's blue daybreak glows
In its concert score with the rooster cry
After leaving me with an hour's peace;
The very finest hour's peace I know
With moonbeams as gold as a magic fleece
Recharged whenever the solar flares blow
And scattershot photons from crater rims
Redistribute wealth from electrum sun
Like pieces of eight the night goddess skims
As solar doubloons by the Lunar ton...
Paying the way for the crow of the cock
And all...
And mechanistically scaled the sky
To presage Apollo's blue daybreak glows
In its concert score with the rooster cry
After leaving me with an hour's peace;
The very finest hour's peace I know
With moonbeams as gold as a magic fleece
Recharged whenever the solar flares blow
And scattershot photons from crater rims
Redistribute wealth from electrum sun
Like pieces of eight the night goddess skims
As solar doubloons by the Lunar ton...
Paying the way for the crow of the cock
And all...
#summer
#morning
#night #dawn
#night #dawn
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Pax Mesonoxia
Silence bids farewell in birdsong
And departs on the morning breeze
To return again before too long
When night brings daytime to its knees
In the comfort of its sable cloak
Descending in the droop of dusk
On all the postmeridian folk
Be they benign or be they brusque,
Yet surely seeking midnight relief
From the fulsome photonic wave crash
Slamming life's great diurnal reef
Of endless multisensory trash...
Ever de-emphasized in the dark
So that peace of mind may make its mark.
And departs on the morning breeze
To return again before too long
When night brings daytime to its knees
In the comfort of its sable cloak
Descending in the droop of dusk
On all the postmeridian folk
Be they benign or be they brusque,
Yet surely seeking midnight relief
From the fulsome photonic wave crash
Slamming life's great diurnal reef
Of endless multisensory trash...
Ever de-emphasized in the dark
So that peace of mind may make its mark.
#morning
#night
#dawn
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Midsummer night dreams
Beach field vacations. Trying to make a new reputation. Going outside without hesitation.
Fire flies lighting up the mid sky. To the ground. Stars glisten star lit sky's ,while walking by moon light, across the warm sand.
Birds chirping they're happy songs from heaven above. This is what midsummer night dreams are made of.
Lovers walking hand and hand.
Shopping for engagement rings through windows. Beautiful weddings under gazebos ,along the sea shore or river banks.
I can't wait, for my midsummer night's dream to happen again. It's waiting for...
Fire flies lighting up the mid sky. To the ground. Stars glisten star lit sky's ,while walking by moon light, across the warm sand.
Birds chirping they're happy songs from heaven above. This is what midsummer night dreams are made of.
Lovers walking hand and hand.
Shopping for engagement rings through windows. Beautiful weddings under gazebos ,along the sea shore or river banks.
I can't wait, for my midsummer night's dream to happen again. It's waiting for...
#love
#birds
#beach
#summer
#dawn
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Dawn Spider Spawn
orb matrons’
brass dawn
suspended
birthing dreams
hatching monsters
descension electric
down octagonal beams
horror spewing
allotrius spawns
beholders’ bewilderment
brass dawn
suspended
birthing dreams
hatching monsters
descension electric
down octagonal beams
horror spewing
allotrius spawns
beholders’ bewilderment
#monsters
#aliens
#nightmares
#dystopian
#dawn
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ARCHETYPE23
arichetoype23
I have entered a new a new demensi0n
No one can hear me here
I am invisible
I do not exist
Kiss my fist
you fuckingj
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I have entered a new a new demensi0n
No one can hear me here
I am invisible
I do not exist
Kiss my fist
you fuckingj
i0-[otmjcbs aXBVCJHVCGHCGFH GYI7T
#fall
#dawn
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PRAYER TO THE SUN
ra there is no one like you
my golden lord
set gold on blue
who conquers dark
and quells the cold
of soul's dark night
and sets him bold
to roam your perfect, holy day
in blessed light
that shows the way
who nudges wake
when day begins
and warms the heart
and lifts the chin
and oh, my kindest, righteous king
whose fires blaze to make the rain
and grow the green
that feeds the whole
my thanks to you
from deepest soul
amen
65 unique words
my golden lord
set gold on blue
who conquers dark
and quells the cold
of soul's dark night
and sets him bold
to roam your perfect, holy day
in blessed light
that shows the way
who nudges wake
when day begins
and warms the heart
and lifts the chin
and oh, my kindest, righteous king
whose fires blaze to make the rain
and grow the green
that feeds the whole
my thanks to you
from deepest soul
amen
65 unique words
#happiness
#sun
#dawn #NaPoWriMo2022
#dawn #NaPoWriMo2022
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DU Poetry : Poems About Dawn Seeking Honest Critique