Poems for and About Brothers Seeking Honest Critique
#brother
Thank You
I want to thank you for raising me.
I know you could have pushed me to the side,
And did things like all the other kids did.
I want to thank you for practicing wrestling moves on me.
It taught me how to defend myself.
That's why the streets didn't conquer me.
I want to thank you stepping in and taking moms place,
When I was scared and had nightmares.
You were always there to fight off my demons.
I want to thank you for teaching me,
How to open our hidden Christmas presents,
And wrapping them back up, ...
I know you could have pushed me to the side,
And did things like all the other kids did.
I want to thank you for practicing wrestling moves on me.
It taught me how to defend myself.
That's why the streets didn't conquer me.
I want to thank you stepping in and taking moms place,
When I was scared and had nightmares.
You were always there to fight off my demons.
I want to thank you for teaching me,
How to open our hidden Christmas presents,
And wrapping them back up, ...
#brother
#memories
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I Wish To Seduce My Husband... Not His Brother!
Rachel went into the bedroom.
She was getting herself ready for Daniel.
But instead, Harrison walked in.
She was getting herself ready for Daniel.
But instead, Harrison walked in.
#brother
#marriage
#romantic
#fiction
#ignorance
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Another Interpretation
Esau and Jacob were twin brothers, according to the scripture.
The account suggests that these two men did not have a good relationship.
We must have a realistic view of the situation to understand it.
Esau went to work in the field and Jacob stayed home and cooked a meal.
When Esau went back home, he was exhausted and hungry.
Jacob could have offered his brother a free serving of the pottage.
A kind person would have done that for his or her sibling or even a stranger.
Esau had a weakness; he did not seriously consider spiritual matters.
Jacob...
The account suggests that these two men did not have a good relationship.
We must have a realistic view of the situation to understand it.
Esau went to work in the field and Jacob stayed home and cooked a meal.
When Esau went back home, he was exhausted and hungry.
Jacob could have offered his brother a free serving of the pottage.
A kind person would have done that for his or her sibling or even a stranger.
Esau had a weakness; he did not seriously consider spiritual matters.
Jacob...
#brother
#religion
#God
#food
#deception
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Romu
My brother
Is the rain
Too much for
Tine when
We walk
Away
To a village of the
Valley and sing
Songs of
Garlands
And gown.
Is the rain
Too much for
Tine when
We walk
Away
To a village of the
Valley and sing
Songs of
Garlands
And gown.
#brother
#rose
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Raphium Series~Brother
Little rebellion inside my soul
hoping to escape my troubles
Worrying the sky
his blue is tormented
Child of the day swims sideways
there is a cap on the air
I am grounded
So moving left to right
travel the winds
Finding the desert jubilation
and like a colt run free
expending energies too painful
Seeking sanctuary
immortal honesties
are too dreadful for me
Sympathy for the devil surely
understanding of the creator?...perhaps
Anger rushes through my veins ...
hoping to escape my troubles
Worrying the sky
his blue is tormented
Child of the day swims sideways
there is a cap on the air
I am grounded
So moving left to right
travel the winds
Finding the desert jubilation
and like a colt run free
expending energies too painful
Seeking sanctuary
immortal honesties
are too dreadful for me
Sympathy for the devil surely
understanding of the creator?...perhaps
Anger rushes through my veins ...
#love
#brother
#angels
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What She Had Done On The Last Day Of Summer
Xander saw Lindsay
splashing in the water and
smiling at her own
brother who was standing on
the beach and waiting for her.
splashing in the water and
smiling at her own
brother who was standing on
the beach and waiting for her.
#brother
#beach
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
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two brothers
(opposition disposition)
“Together, [they] form a necessary paradox;
not a senseless contradiction.”―Criss Jami, Healology
one is a priest,
the other is a pest;
him, too, a beast.
his sibling does his best,
sending the light,
where brother casts a plight;
the one engaged,
the other man enraged.
one is a friend,
the other full of ire;
him, too, a fiend,
his sib the world’s desire.
one shifts the blame,
his brother takes the hurt;
one mends the lame,
the other rends the heart.
...
“Together, [they] form a necessary paradox;
not a senseless contradiction.”―Criss Jami, Healology
one is a priest,
the other is a pest;
him, too, a beast.
his sibling does his best,
sending the light,
where brother casts a plight;
the one engaged,
the other man enraged.
one is a friend,
the other full of ire;
him, too, a fiend,
his sib the world’s desire.
one shifts the blame,
his brother takes the hurt;
one mends the lame,
the other rends the heart.
...
#brother
#family
#identity
#SelfReflection
#inequality
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Brother
A figure standing next to me
A man of 6,6 tall
A quiet soul of whom I love
To him, I owe it all
He watched me grow
From none to now
And never let me fall
The odd one out
In a sea of liars
We grew up, hand in hand
And I’ll never forget
His genuine smile
On a pedestal, he stands.
To him, I thank
For who I am
And all that I could be
Because what is life
Without a soul
As loving, or as free,
As he.
A man of 6,6 tall
A quiet soul of whom I love
To him, I owe it all
He watched me grow
From none to now
And never let me fall
The odd one out
In a sea of liars
We grew up, hand in hand
And I’ll never forget
His genuine smile
On a pedestal, he stands.
To him, I thank
For who I am
And all that I could be
Because what is life
Without a soul
As loving, or as free,
As he.
#brother
#sister
#childhood
#family
#memories
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Bittersweet Release
War, we fight
We fight the war together
Gotta stay strong
Or else the whole team will completely fall apart
I’ve got a minimum to no chores
But I can still feel the anguish, it’s killing me
We do it all for love
That’s worth fighting for
But the fighting is over
At for the most
A man from a child
His first wish is to hurt himself
I’m filled with repression
It’s coming out of my eyes
The movie I’ve seen a hundred times
Is the saddest thing I’ve ever seen
We fight the war together
Gotta stay strong
Or else the whole team will completely fall apart
I’ve got a minimum to no chores
But I can still feel the anguish, it’s killing me
We do it all for love
That’s worth fighting for
But the fighting is over
At for the most
A man from a child
His first wish is to hurt himself
I’m filled with repression
It’s coming out of my eyes
The movie I’ve seen a hundred times
Is the saddest thing I’ve ever seen
#sadness
#anxiety
#strength
#brother
#military
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Your family.
And mother Tuk tuk Rudra and Subir Raha the entrepreneur.
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#mother
#brother
#parent
#family
#daughter
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He's Not Like This All the Time
I love you.
You're an asphyxiant
Because, your heart, what's left is crumbs.
Imaging a picture perfect person.
Your eyes, the windows to the soul,
Through my lens, pre-post
All I see is red
You're an asphyxiant
Because, your heart, what's left is crumbs.
Imaging a picture perfect person.
Your eyes, the windows to the soul,
Through my lens, pre-post
All I see is red
#brother
#friendship
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Thaibo
solo, so low
you want to test me
I get it
I get it
I get it
how fucking long?
I know what's at stake
I stake my lack of reputation on that
it hurts really
I'm out there I see some of you are too
attack me, come out and do it
but I ask why we are kicking each other's asses
divide and conquer
that's what he would do, you know me
I am uniting
you underestimate the disturbed ones
you think I couldn't I connected to them
purified and pushed through
I am...
you want to test me
I get it
I get it
I get it
how fucking long?
I know what's at stake
I stake my lack of reputation on that
it hurts really
I'm out there I see some of you are too
attack me, come out and do it
but I ask why we are kicking each other's asses
divide and conquer
that's what he would do, you know me
I am uniting
you underestimate the disturbed ones
you think I couldn't I connected to them
purified and pushed through
I am...
#love
#brother
#family
#God
#spiritual
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