Poems About Bipolar Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about bipolar seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:45am
Yesterday 2:45am
Honoring Your Inner Divine Temple
The difference between a wise woman and a foolish woman, the wise woman will always build her foundation on brick, it is the value of her worth.
That beautiful abode where she reigns.
She will be the organic nurturer unto Mother Nature, the Healer, and the arbitrator between her seeds that bears the reflective image of her intellect.
The spiritual alliance between man and his deity, to give his mind that third eye, the gateways to his divine awakening, as she propels that pilgrimage, where in his quest to seek higher vibration, she never loses sight of her...
That beautiful abode where she reigns.
She will be the organic nurturer unto Mother Nature, the Healer, and the arbitrator between her seeds that bears the reflective image of her intellect.
The spiritual alliance between man and his deity, to give his mind that third eye, the gateways to his divine awakening, as she propels that pilgrimage, where in his quest to seek higher vibration, she never loses sight of her...
#bipolar
#MentalHealth
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1 Comment
frankiefearless
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frankieeeee
Poem Published
18th Mar 2024 8:09am
18th Mar 2024 8:09am
tripping downhill
the descent is rising;
my features are freezing,
I find myself staring at nothing in particular,
there's a numbness creeping about.
apathy is increasing and my thoughts are turning bitter,
my mind is becoming distrustful of all things good.
my heart shelters in place.
I'm empty and devoid of feeling.
I see you darkness,
you always know how to greet me old friend.
can you pencil me in?
I think I'll stay awhile.
darkness will you hold me?
I have missed the solemn solace of your embrace.
you filter the world...
my features are freezing,
I find myself staring at nothing in particular,
there's a numbness creeping about.
apathy is increasing and my thoughts are turning bitter,
my mind is becoming distrustful of all things good.
my heart shelters in place.
I'm empty and devoid of feeling.
I see you darkness,
you always know how to greet me old friend.
can you pencil me in?
I think I'll stay awhile.
darkness will you hold me?
I have missed the solemn solace of your embrace.
you filter the world...
#depression
#dark
#bipolar #MentalHealth
#bipolar #MentalHealth
103 reads
1 Comment
frankiefearless
frankieeeee
frankieeeee
Poem Published
15th Mar 2024 7:46am
15th Mar 2024 7:46am
Introducing; The Golden Age of the Gallantly Goated Gamer Guitarist
bipolar,
name thy enemy.
highs, lows, and in-betweens,
patterns, cycles, what does it all mean?
he is your foundation and origin story,
he translates your mainframe to my motherboard.
he's the server of your soul,
and the cycles of your circuitry.
your voice can be heard in the music...
name thy enemy.
highs, lows, and in-betweens,
patterns, cycles, what does it all mean?
he is your foundation and origin story,
he translates your mainframe to my motherboard.
he's the server of your soul,
and the cycles of your circuitry.
your voice can be heard in the music...
#love
#hope
#inspirational
#bipolar
#MentalHealth
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frankiefearless
frankieeeee
frankieeeee
Poem Published
12th Mar 2024 11:22pm
12th Mar 2024 11:22pm
can i see you?
hey! I know it's only been a week,
can I call you though?
I'm flying high right now, but I can feel the crash coming.
yesterday was day three again,
day three is the absolute worst.
well, that is until you get to day five...
you said you needed space for a few weeks to address some issues,
was that just a ruse?
were you hinting at coming back after your volatile season or hoping that would be my final push to go?
I want to respect your wishes,
so I won't call. ...
can I call you though?
I'm flying high right now, but I can feel the crash coming.
yesterday was day three again,
day three is the absolute worst.
well, that is until you get to day five...
you said you needed space for a few weeks to address some issues,
was that just a ruse?
were you hinting at coming back after your volatile season or hoping that would be my final push to go?
I want to respect your wishes,
so I won't call. ...
#love
#depression
#hope #bipolar
#hope #bipolar
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1 Comment
frankiefearless
frankieeeee
frankieeeee
Poem Published
11th Mar 2024 3:20am
11th Mar 2024 3:20am
balanced duality and dichotomy
help me peel back the layers and unmask,
unwind with me as I lounge in the foliage of fall,
be my partner in this beloved folie à deux.
enjoy your time and ride this coaster of emotion.
hurtle forward, drop your gut on the loop, and slingshot backwards.
ride it once and know what to do, nothing new to expect.
except this coaster shows a pattern,
a bigger cycle; fall down 7, get up 8,
it must be fate these missteps won't abate.
depressed, manic, stable
manic, depressed,...
unwind with me as I lounge in the foliage of fall,
be my partner in this beloved folie à deux.
enjoy your time and ride this coaster of emotion.
hurtle forward, drop your gut on the loop, and slingshot backwards.
ride it once and know what to do, nothing new to expect.
except this coaster shows a pattern,
a bigger cycle; fall down 7, get up 8,
it must be fate these missteps won't abate.
depressed, manic, stable
manic, depressed,...
#love
#bipolar
#philosophical
#wisdom
#determination
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2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
Designs and Visions
it's happening again it's warming up and I'm not feeling good
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
#bipolar
#angels
#MentalHealth #aliens
#MentalHealth #aliens
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10 Comments
googlybear420
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 7:20am
27th Feb 2024 7:20am
one last relapse
i lie there
lifeless.
a million thoughts rush in at once,
each more disturbing than the last.
reunited with my glistening savior,
to lead me down this inevitable path.
a crimson river rapidly flows,
welcoming repose.
when will it end?
i scream and cry for some sort of understanding
but suddenly i’m no longer standing,
i can hear my mother demanding,
“OPEN THE DOOR!”
i hear her no more.
i lie there,
lifeless.
lifeless.
a million thoughts rush in at once,
each more disturbing than the last.
reunited with my glistening savior,
to lead me down this inevitable path.
a crimson river rapidly flows,
welcoming repose.
when will it end?
i scream and cry for some sort of understanding
but suddenly i’m no longer standing,
i can hear my mother demanding,
“OPEN THE DOOR!”
i hear her no more.
i lie there,
lifeless.
#SelfHarm
#bipolar
#MentalHealth #SelfReflection
#MentalHealth #SelfReflection
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Nov 2023 5:41pm
21st Nov 2023 5:41pm
mania
rotating in the atmosphere
mania its talking to me
seen aberrations refer to me
in sync I speak
turning in the elements
turned up naturally
i concur
it's a hazard
I need to come down to Earth
winding my way in the sky
I scream
leaning on my intelligence to keep me sane
little G is in
talking shit
flinging dispersions
boy crazy soul child
getting the best of me
mania its talking to me
seen aberrations refer to me
in sync I speak
turning in the elements
turned up naturally
i concur
it's a hazard
I need to come down to Earth
winding my way in the sky
I scream
leaning on my intelligence to keep me sane
little G is in
talking shit
flinging dispersions
boy crazy soul child
getting the best of me
#bipolar
#StreamOfConsciousness
155 reads
5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
24th Aug 2023 7:23pm
24th Aug 2023 7:23pm
cling
inside the bleak there is a nothingness that overcomes
shadows that grow large and envelope
it is fear, you know?
it swallows previous hopes
and incites unrest within me
it quietly brews then reaches my core
it's scarred terrain
I make my way through it slowly
trying to make sense of the unknown
I don't know why I get riled
I wish to put to an end to it quickly
what will fear teach me, how to doubt?
it seems like a meaningless feeling
yet it looms over me
threatening in its...
shadows that grow large and envelope
it is fear, you know?
it swallows previous hopes
and incites unrest within me
it quietly brews then reaches my core
it's scarred terrain
I make my way through it slowly
trying to make sense of the unknown
I don't know why I get riled
I wish to put to an end to it quickly
what will fear teach me, how to doubt?
it seems like a meaningless feeling
yet it looms over me
threatening in its...
#anxiety
#bipolar
#fear
199 reads
11 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2023 4:05am
23rd Aug 2023 4:05am
doldrums
gracious greed in a depressive state
stare at the emptiness, its impressive
seeking solace inside the sorrow
I regress myself to see what has me down
down deep I hate myself, I think
I try to change but it does no good
who am I fooling really/
a counterfeit me who's going to buy that
it doesn't work
so I am stuck here feeling moody
it's where I'm comfortable, in the deep end
sorrow is my friend
she never lets me down
I'm on good speaking terms with my negativity
it is second nature
I can pretend I'm...
stare at the emptiness, its impressive
seeking solace inside the sorrow
I regress myself to see what has me down
down deep I hate myself, I think
I try to change but it does no good
who am I fooling really/
a counterfeit me who's going to buy that
it doesn't work
so I am stuck here feeling moody
it's where I'm comfortable, in the deep end
sorrow is my friend
she never lets me down
I'm on good speaking terms with my negativity
it is second nature
I can pretend I'm...
#bipolar
#MentalHealth
#apathy
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
19th Aug 2023 4:06am
19th Aug 2023 4:06am
emo bi-polar emptiness
enduring the plight
we suffer the indignity
we trudge through the mire
insults be damned we are who we are
it is because of the dark our tongues are sharp
thick with blood spitting disdain
I want to edify still, I'm existing in the madness
emptiness culls the hurt
escapism for the guilt
needy feelings getting the best of me
I seek to come back to the surface
break through the bleak
but I'm going through a moment
give me a minute to compose myself
I will stick my guts back in
after you eviscerate me ...
we suffer the indignity
we trudge through the mire
insults be damned we are who we are
it is because of the dark our tongues are sharp
thick with blood spitting disdain
I want to edify still, I'm existing in the madness
emptiness culls the hurt
escapism for the guilt
needy feelings getting the best of me
I seek to come back to the surface
break through the bleak
but I'm going through a moment
give me a minute to compose myself
I will stick my guts back in
after you eviscerate me ...
#bipolar
#shadows
220 reads
14 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Aug 2023 8:01pm
17th Aug 2023 8:01pm
quell
sadness quells the madness for a moment
it insinuates itself into my emotions
a heavy cloud brewing with feeling
sorrow swirls in the now
I can feel the descent
into the fogginess of pine
my mood alters considerably because of lack of focus
I can't concentrate on any one thing
I lack control in these sessions of doubt
I look over my life with trepidation
fear cloys my soul and I feel suffocated
weep for the day
keen for tomorrow
I don't know where I will land
it presses on me daily
but my mental health...
it insinuates itself into my emotions
a heavy cloud brewing with feeling
sorrow swirls in the now
I can feel the descent
into the fogginess of pine
my mood alters considerably because of lack of focus
I can't concentrate on any one thing
I lack control in these sessions of doubt
I look over my life with trepidation
fear cloys my soul and I feel suffocated
weep for the day
keen for tomorrow
I don't know where I will land
it presses on me daily
but my mental health...
#sadness
#bipolar
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10 Comments
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