Poems About Beauty Seeking Honest Critique
#beauty
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 6:47pm
6th Sep 2024 6:47pm
bloom honey
satisfy the love cravings deep within
it's painfully true I love you
caress my hurt it's the most beautiful about me
listen to my refrains and let them lull you sexually
it always rains in the grey
giving me hope you are the sunshine that enters
the clouds depart and the flowers are ladies in waiting
opening up, faces turned towards you with smiles on their faces
the garden opens as they watch their mistress put on her finest
I'm dressed in blue just like you requested
innocent sitting by the sacred waters
you peel back my...
it's painfully true I love you
caress my hurt it's the most beautiful about me
listen to my refrains and let them lull you sexually
it always rains in the grey
giving me hope you are the sunshine that enters
the clouds depart and the flowers are ladies in waiting
opening up, faces turned towards you with smiles on their faces
the garden opens as they watch their mistress put on her finest
I'm dressed in blue just like you requested
innocent sitting by the sacred waters
you peel back my...
#beauty
#romantic
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5 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 00:08am
5th Sep 2024 00:08am
Weeds and thorns
#beauty
#crush
#FallingInLove
169 reads
2 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 3:30am
4th Sep 2024 3:30am
Round Trip
One round trip, please”
“That’ll be sixteen”
The night is young
I feel the warm breeze
I want to dance
The music played
And he whispered
Softly
“You look like starlight”
That was love at first sight
The boat continued on
Playing the same song
Ready for wine
I smiled and thanked the kind man
But I had other plans
“That’ll be sixteen”
The night is young
I feel the warm breeze
I want to dance
The music played
And he whispered
Softly
“You look like starlight”
That was love at first sight
The boat continued on
Playing the same song
Ready for wine
I smiled and thanked the kind man
But I had other plans
#admiration
#beauty
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1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 3:15am
4th Sep 2024 3:15am
Who Possibly Looked Like A Classic Playboy Playmate
Zachary
went over to River's
house to help her with some homework and
met River's mother who possibly looked like a
classic Playboy Playmate named Candy
Loving before River
came downstairs.
went over to River's
house to help her with some homework and
met River's mother who possibly looked like a
classic Playboy Playmate named Candy
Loving before River
came downstairs.
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sensual
110 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 00:22am
4th Sep 2024 00:22am
Whither
Your breath
Silent sonnets of poetry
Which wreath the air
With something more -
Indefinable
As if touching upon forever
You're art in the stillness
That pleasures my eyes
And I'm lost
Drowning in the view
What is it stays the moment
Longer
Whenever you're near
Imaginings take flight
From the shadows of my mind
Loosed like freshening breeze
Bearing the scent of rain
Before a summer storm
As distant thunder rolls
You possess that fire which stirs a man
And makes his feelings burn ...
Silent sonnets of poetry
Which wreath the air
With something more -
Indefinable
As if touching upon forever
You're art in the stillness
That pleasures my eyes
And I'm lost
Drowning in the view
What is it stays the moment
Longer
Whenever you're near
Imaginings take flight
From the shadows of my mind
Loosed like freshening breeze
Bearing the scent of rain
Before a summer storm
As distant thunder rolls
You possess that fire which stirs a man
And makes his feelings burn ...
#beauty
#FallingInLove
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
278 reads
13 Comments
UbiquitousVoid
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 8:32am
3rd Sep 2024 8:32am
WHITE
How could it be
My oath of malice, broken?
What did I see
From out my dreams, awoken?
Fair and unbeknownst to me
With radiance bequeathed the shade
To my orbicular gates
Stricken
The purity refined therein
Made every light anemic
And the rose of her smile
My kaleidoscopic prison
A single thought escaped
As I made away
"Goodness, me"
My oath of malice, broken?
What did I see
From out my dreams, awoken?
Fair and unbeknownst to me
With radiance bequeathed the shade
To my orbicular gates
Stricken
The purity refined therein
Made every light anemic
And the rose of her smile
My kaleidoscopic prison
A single thought escaped
As I made away
"Goodness, me"
#admiration
#beauty
#ForbiddenLove
138 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 3:26am
3rd Sep 2024 3:26am
beautiful
loving you forever
though I sense you think I don't know
you don't feel beautiful
you can turn it on for the world
but you'll only get so close to me before you back off
I've felt this for a long time
it saddens me that you see yourself in a bad light
because really I don't care if you are a bad guy
but it hurts my heart the way you put yourself down internally
I feel your pain and I can't help how attached I am to you
my soul tells me things
I feel when you come close
and you are trying to be so covert
I can feel...
though I sense you think I don't know
you don't feel beautiful
you can turn it on for the world
but you'll only get so close to me before you back off
I've felt this for a long time
it saddens me that you see yourself in a bad light
because really I don't care if you are a bad guy
but it hurts my heart the way you put yourself down internally
I feel your pain and I can't help how attached I am to you
my soul tells me things
I feel when you come close
and you are trying to be so covert
I can feel...
#beauty
#romantic
192 reads
5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 00:43am
2nd Sep 2024 00:43am
Onyx Mother's Court
hunting the dark with earnest hope
such depth and beauty
In my infancy misunderstood
the bleak my Mother
the shadows, my guardians
lace of honesty
I lost my way in man's world
who damns the darkness
the shadows listen to me singing
my sweet lonely refrain
sent here on a mission of discovery
my family would have me be kind
especially when not understanding your culture
lilts on the wind
it caters to my needs
and corrects me when I'm wrong
turn the phrase and be more patient
immortally...
such depth and beauty
In my infancy misunderstood
the bleak my Mother
the shadows, my guardians
lace of honesty
I lost my way in man's world
who damns the darkness
the shadows listen to me singing
my sweet lonely refrain
sent here on a mission of discovery
my family would have me be kind
especially when not understanding your culture
lilts on the wind
it caters to my needs
and corrects me when I'm wrong
turn the phrase and be more patient
immortally...
#beauty
#mother
#vampires
66 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
31st Aug 2024 8:36pm
31st Aug 2024 8:36pm
ON THE GO
and she came into town with a late summer breeze
Like something so retro but never seen before
Setting hearts afire bringing them to their knees
With a glimpse of heaven leaving them wanting more
It was in the look and how they breathed this dream
Lost in the secret of her windows to the soul
They could be easily carried away downstream
Into vivid fantasies that can take their toll
She carried herself with an energetic style
A bright future of endless possibilities
And they’d surrender to that contagious smile
Like a trail of...
Like something so retro but never seen before
Setting hearts afire bringing them to their knees
With a glimpse of heaven leaving them wanting more
It was in the look and how they breathed this dream
Lost in the secret of her windows to the soul
They could be easily carried away downstream
Into vivid fantasies that can take their toll
She carried herself with an energetic style
A bright future of endless possibilities
And they’d surrender to that contagious smile
Like a trail of...
#beauty
#hope
#universe
171 reads
4 Comments
CoffeeMan_YQX
Poem Published
31st Aug 2024 3:11am
31st Aug 2024 3:11am
Perfection
As you are
Your eyes
Your smile
Your figure
Your personality
Your soul
Your trustworthiness
As you are
You are perfect
No need to change a thing
My radiant raven
The world's greatest beauty
I love you
Just as you are
You are a masterpiece
As you are
Perfection
Your eyes
Your smile
Your figure
Your personality
Your soul
Your trustworthiness
As you are
You are perfect
No need to change a thing
My radiant raven
The world's greatest beauty
I love you
Just as you are
You are a masterpiece
As you are
Perfection
#admiration
#beauty
#ILoveYou
#kindness
#love
299 reads
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CoffeeMan_YQX
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 3:29am
29th Aug 2024 3:29am
Best Friend
Beautiful
Exquisite
Super
Terrific
Fantastic
Radiant
Irresistible
Elegant
Nice
Dearly loved
Exquisite
Super
Terrific
Fantastic
Radiant
Irresistible
Elegant
Nice
Dearly loved
#admiration
#beauty
#crush
#ILoveYou
#respect
142 reads
0 Comments
JAZZMANOR
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 10:36am
26th Aug 2024 10:36am
Which Zone
#beauty
#happiness
#lust
#passion
#sensual
201 reads
2 Comments
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