Poems About the Beach Seeking Honest Critique
#beach
Poems about the beach seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
move like water
aquamarine waves
tremble against roaring shore
white shells shine like stars
tremble against roaring shore
white shells shine like stars
#beach
#LifeAsAWriter
#love
#nature
#water
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Great Day For A Cool Swim
Preston and some friends arrived at the beach house
just in time to see Juliette swimming around
in a black bikini before she heard a
voice say "Great day for a cool swim, Darling Sweetheart!"
just in time to see Juliette swimming around
in a black bikini before she heard a
voice say "Great day for a cool swim, Darling Sweetheart!"
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#summer
#water
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Saw You Sit Naked In The Cool Water
When I saw you sit
naked in the cool water,
I felt the urge to
strip down and allow myself
to be eternally yours.
naked in the cool water,
I felt the urge to
strip down and allow myself
to be eternally yours.
#beach
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
81 reads
2 Comments
A Result Of Having Gone To Dawson's Beach Party
Nicole opened her
eyes and saw herself naked
in bed with Cody
as a result of having
gone to Dawson's beach party.
eyes and saw herself naked
in bed with Cody
as a result of having
gone to Dawson's beach party.
#friendship
#beach
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
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Jagged Edge
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In
her
dream
one friday
at lunchtime
she carved out
a message to him
written in the sand
beneath the shadow
that captured her breath
floating between jagged rocks
swift and curious he moved his hand
across the top of her thigh, learning the
angles and edges of her shape and skin
following the line of mellowed sunlight
sharpened above the crests of waves
a streamlined net that tossed itself
widely across the ocean’s teeth
sitting beneath the stone walls
pawing...
In
her
dream
one friday
at lunchtime
she carved out
a message to him
written in the sand
beneath the shadow
that captured her breath
floating between jagged rocks
swift and curious he moved his hand
across the top of her thigh, learning the
angles and edges of her shape and skin
following the line of mellowed sunlight
sharpened above the crests of waves
a streamlined net that tossed itself
widely across the ocean’s teeth
sitting beneath the stone walls
pawing...
#lust
#sea
#beach
#lover
#sensual
116 reads
5 Comments
The carwash made you wet, I need to dry off
#women
#beach
#ShortStory
#dirty
#orgasm
96 reads
8 Comments
On The Day After The Beach Party
On a
Sunday, Paige
woke up
with a pain in her
head and found herself
nude in a sleeping
bag with
some guy next
to her.
Sunday, Paige
woke up
with a pain in her
head and found herself
nude in a sleeping
bag with
some guy next
to her.
#beach
#morning
#fiction
#suffering
#sensual
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Came Back To Shore After Swimming Naked
Briana
came back to shore after
swimming naked in the water and
discovered that Simon was filming her with his
camcorder which made Briana want
to cover her chest and
run away.
came back to shore after
swimming naked in the water and
discovered that Simon was filming her with his
camcorder which made Briana want
to cover her chest and
run away.
#friendship
#corruption
#beach
#fiction
#sensual
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Sea Breeze Cafe
In the tourist town of 10B, in the sea breeze cafe, I popped in for a bacon bap and a nice hot latte.
A short dumpy gremlin, whose name was Jolene, was being rude to the customers, tho she was quite pretty.
But only on the face, her greasy hair was tied back in a bun, I'm sure she just like being a b*tch and did it all for fun.
She should work at Karen's cafe, then she would be good at her job, instead of flobbing into people's cups of tea and acting like a yob.
With a screw face on and her arms folded up, she chucked the menu to the customers like...
A short dumpy gremlin, whose name was Jolene, was being rude to the customers, tho she was quite pretty.
But only on the face, her greasy hair was tied back in a bun, I'm sure she just like being a b*tch and did it all for fun.
She should work at Karen's cafe, then she would be good at her job, instead of flobbing into people's cups of tea and acting like a yob.
With a screw face on and her arms folded up, she chucked the menu to the customers like...
#birds
#beach
#holiday
#food
#travel
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Before He Spotted Pamela
Ethan was taking a
walk on the beach
before he spotted
Pamela naked and
riding on a horse.
And when he saw
her like Lady Godiva,
he got turned on.
walk on the beach
before he spotted
Pamela naked and
riding on a horse.
And when he saw
her like Lady Godiva,
he got turned on.
#horses
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sensual
88 reads
4 Comments
Accepted A Ride From Some Strangers
On Friday, Eden accepted a
ride from some strangers on her way
to the beach. On Monday, the
video of her stripped
naked and tied to
a wooden post
has been shown
on the
web.
ride from some strangers on her way
to the beach. On Monday, the
video of her stripped
naked and tied to
a wooden post
has been shown
on the
web.
#dark
#BDSM
#beach
#fiction
#sensual
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Hello? I'm Not Supposed To Be Here!
Bristol was at the beach to get some
sun for herself. That was before
a chloroform soaked rag made
her fall asleep. When she
woke up, Bristol saw
herself naked
and somehow
by a
pool.
sun for herself. That was before
a chloroform soaked rag made
her fall asleep. When she
woke up, Bristol saw
herself naked
and somehow
by a
pool.
#beach
#fiction
#confusion
#mystery
#sensual
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2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About the Beach Seeking Honest Critique