Poems About the Beach Seeking Honest Critique
#beach
Poems about the beach seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
You're That Guy From My Sister's Party
Oh, God! My head hurts!
Who the freaking hell are you, anyway?
Wait. Just let me think.
Oh, no. Don't tell me.
You're that guy from my sister's party.
That explains no bikini top.
Are you hungover like me?
Sure do look like it to me.
That's my last beach party.
Got a shirt I'll borrow?
Need something to cover up my chest.
Thanks for the tee shirt.
Now, could you please help me up?
I gotta get home before my husband.
Who the freaking hell are you, anyway?
Wait. Just let me think.
Oh, no. Don't tell me.
You're that guy from my sister's party.
That explains no bikini top.
Are you hungover like me?
Sure do look like it to me.
That's my last beach party.
Got a shirt I'll borrow?
Need something to cover up my chest.
Thanks for the tee shirt.
Now, could you please help me up?
I gotta get home before my husband.
#alcohol
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
126 reads
2 Comments
Nazare’
Waveriders
In pursuit of the most thrilling
Bone chilling
Fantastic fantasy
Upon cliffside scenes
New waves breaking
Are reborn dreams
Set in reality
Fading sometimes in the tides
And autumn light
Calm seas turning into dreams
Dreamt in the night
and
Felt in the sea breeze
by the early morning light
the ocean’s calling all
enticed by
the most alluring sight
In pursuit of the most thrilling
Bone chilling
Fantastic fantasy
Upon cliffside scenes
New waves breaking
Are reborn dreams
Set in reality
Fading sometimes in the tides
And autumn light
Calm seas turning into dreams
Dreamt in the night
and
Felt in the sea breeze
by the early morning light
the ocean’s calling all
enticed by
the most alluring sight
#beach
#dreams
#nature #sea
#nature #sea
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Bad Idea To Have Couples Day At The Beach
Molly slipped off her jacket.
Guys think she's hot in that bikini.
Randall dragged his wife home.
Guys think she's hot in that bikini.
Randall dragged his wife home.
#beach
#beauty
#betrayal
#fiction
#summer
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Two's Company... Four's A Crowd
John went to the beach.
Once there, he saw three bikini blondes.
He's got trouble with choosing.
That's before one came closer.
After kissing his lips, he remembered her.
It's his college sweetie Katey.
She's happy to see him.
Katey went to the beach with friends.
Thos friends left them alone.
Once there, he saw three bikini blondes.
He's got trouble with choosing.
That's before one came closer.
After kissing his lips, he remembered her.
It's his college sweetie Katey.
She's happy to see him.
Katey went to the beach with friends.
Thos friends left them alone.
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#nostalgia
60 reads
0 Comments
This Place Really Is A Nude Beach
You must be new here.
Welcome... Good Friend... to The Golden State.
I see you look confused.
This place really is a nude beach.
You need to take your clothes off.
Welcome... Good Friend... to The Golden State.
I see you look confused.
This place really is a nude beach.
You need to take your clothes off.
#beach
#confusion
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
135 reads
6 Comments
While She Was Getting Herself A Tan
Yvonne felt the cool
summer breeze touch
her naked skin while
she was getting herself
a tan on that nude beach.
summer breeze touch
her naked skin while
she was getting herself
a tan on that nude beach.
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
#summer
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Well? I Need To Do Something To Cool Off.
After looking all
over to make sure she is
alone, Debby stripped
down and sat in the water
before she saw Kevin there.
over to make sure she is
alone, Debby stripped
down and sat in the water
before she saw Kevin there.
#beach
#fiction
#sex
#summer
#tanka
119 reads
2 Comments
A Couple In Front Of A Campfire
While walking on the
beach, Annabeth saw
a naked couple hump
in front of a campfire.
But when she moved
closer towards them,
the couple disappeared
like they were mist.
beach, Annabeth saw
a naked couple hump
in front of a campfire.
But when she moved
closer towards them,
the couple disappeared
like they were mist.
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#ghosts
#sex
146 reads
4 Comments
This Is What I Realized On The Beach
After spotting some
hot chick in a bikini,
I realized that
there truly is no fun here
without you sharing with me.
hot chick in a bikini,
I realized that
there truly is no fun here
without you sharing with me.
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
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Beach Memories
It was a hot,summer day.
Sun shining,problems at bay.
There was sounds of laughter.
The way the sun felt on my skin.
And I forget all problems I've been.
There were kids digging holes.
Sandcastle contests,people pose for pictures.
To keep as a memory of today.
This sunny,warm summer day.
I wore a swimsuit in blue.
I sunbathed,a red hue.
I were under some shade with a book.
And I would take a look at the water.
The sand,next to my father.
I remember when I was a kid.
And I would go to the...
Sun shining,problems at bay.
There was sounds of laughter.
The way the sun felt on my skin.
And I forget all problems I've been.
There were kids digging holes.
Sandcastle contests,people pose for pictures.
To keep as a memory of today.
This sunny,warm summer day.
I wore a swimsuit in blue.
I sunbathed,a red hue.
I were under some shade with a book.
And I would take a look at the water.
The sand,next to my father.
I remember when I was a kid.
And I would go to the...
#beach
#happiness
#memories
#nostalgia
#sadness
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0 Comments
Got A Postcard From Catherine
Richard got a
postcard from
Catherine in
San Francisco.
It has a photo
of her naked
on a local beach.
postcard from
Catherine in
San Francisco.
It has a photo
of her naked
on a local beach.
#beach
#city
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
165 reads
0 Comments
Our Last Time Beach Combing
We stripped and humped there.
I had an orgasm... but she didn't.
Our last time beach combing.
I had an orgasm... but she didn't.
Our last time beach combing.
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
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DU Poetry : Poems About the Beach Seeking Honest Critique