Poems About Angels Seeking Honest Critique
#angels
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
27th Mar 2024 8:22pm
27th Mar 2024 8:22pm
Brother
magics cast, I witness the elements being maneuvered
while the seemly claim innocence
no witchcraft here
spelling on the airs
it's a binding tradition
say the spell
Our Father....
Catholic until King Henry wanted a new wife
then Christians struck fear in the weak-minded
talking too much, spin the verb and dissect
see if you can keep up
silence is the way
your favorite brother hardly
Your favorite sister I don't think so
set at odds from the start
with weapons thrust in our hands ...
while the seemly claim innocence
no witchcraft here
spelling on the airs
it's a binding tradition
say the spell
Our Father....
Catholic until King Henry wanted a new wife
then Christians struck fear in the weak-minded
talking too much, spin the verb and dissect
see if you can keep up
silence is the way
your favorite brother hardly
Your favorite sister I don't think so
set at odds from the start
with weapons thrust in our hands ...
#love
#angels
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 9:05pm
26th Mar 2024 9:05pm
Stars Eclipse the Moon
smothering the dawn...never
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
#stars
#angels
#aliens
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 3:37pm
26th Mar 2024 3:37pm
Loca
with my head to the dirt I listen
it's not the paved way I seek
but the unbeaten path
a deep drumming in my chest
tells me the ancient route
unseen in the verses is the way
my trajectory alters in the energies
with lightning strikes, and solar flares
our universe and Earth is cruising through the galaxies
I touch the sky then space
tapping into my star records to get my bearings
calling the corners
I am answered
the north winds chill
the southern winds astound
it is time to unify
divide...
it's not the paved way I seek
but the unbeaten path
a deep drumming in my chest
tells me the ancient route
unseen in the verses is the way
my trajectory alters in the energies
with lightning strikes, and solar flares
our universe and Earth is cruising through the galaxies
I touch the sky then space
tapping into my star records to get my bearings
calling the corners
I am answered
the north winds chill
the southern winds astound
it is time to unify
divide...
#love
#angels
#aliens
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 9:35pm
25th Mar 2024 9:35pm
Spendor in the Storm
resolving the differences
it is a math equation
with no logic to it
it's all angles no chords
to your left, to your left...march
sleeting in the mathematical and electrical charge
whispering to dragons on the airs
manipulating darkness here and in the void
sweeping through the energies I detect fear
my son are you yet a tyrant?
then give me your reign of tyranny
let us have solemn peace
a moment in time without opposing factions,,, friction
remember you love your peoples on all planes
they grieve...
it is a math equation
with no logic to it
it's all angles no chords
to your left, to your left...march
sleeting in the mathematical and electrical charge
whispering to dragons on the airs
manipulating darkness here and in the void
sweeping through the energies I detect fear
my son are you yet a tyrant?
then give me your reign of tyranny
let us have solemn peace
a moment in time without opposing factions,,, friction
remember you love your peoples on all planes
they grieve...
#love
#angels
#aliens
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 3:46am
25th Mar 2024 3:46am
Honey and Vinegar
I see a narrow minded civilation out for greed
present is sorrow for my child Melancholy
protecting my progeny I set aside my cup of wrath reserved for you
I am one with my husband it's been a long time
space and time separated
confounding distance the abyss
I woke cold and then swam through blackholes to our rendevous spot
tapping into my star records I realize you are gorging on pain
leaving me breathless
I summon my men to feed me
they give me succor
Wisdom is among us
Exodus and Elizabelle are shaken
...
present is sorrow for my child Melancholy
protecting my progeny I set aside my cup of wrath reserved for you
I am one with my husband it's been a long time
space and time separated
confounding distance the abyss
I woke cold and then swam through blackholes to our rendevous spot
tapping into my star records I realize you are gorging on pain
leaving me breathless
I summon my men to feed me
they give me succor
Wisdom is among us
Exodus and Elizabelle are shaken
...
#angels
#aliens
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 2:25am
25th Mar 2024 2:25am
Father
Father, you sent the songs that soothe my synapses
I will only understand your orders
you are the air the matter I am made of
lead me not into temptation meaning help me avoid it
my faith will not falter and if does pick me up
you have a destined path for me
set aside to be your instrument of truth
I am deeply sad
I am told I'm crazy again
I've been stalked by who knows Father...only you know
what deeds are done in the dank
I have reaped pure pain
if on the day of the rebellion I was unfaithful
I hope you will turn...
I will only understand your orders
you are the air the matter I am made of
lead me not into temptation meaning help me avoid it
my faith will not falter and if does pick me up
you have a destined path for me
set aside to be your instrument of truth
I am deeply sad
I am told I'm crazy again
I've been stalked by who knows Father...only you know
what deeds are done in the dank
I have reaped pure pain
if on the day of the rebellion I was unfaithful
I hope you will turn...
#God
#angels
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2024 2:44am
23rd Mar 2024 2:44am
Content
tension is present being pulled in the enter=verse
psychedelic pain, deja vu I've been here before
perhaps in another presentation
or maybe this is a recurring nightmare I can't wake from
you dealt the cards
then stacked them
in my vision, I see a house of cards
with the joker driving you to distraction
bate and switch different faces, same instrument of hate
I mind my own business
you have to ruin my reverie with your games
really, I'm too old to play
if you're happy, be happy for me
I've graduated, I'm moving on...
psychedelic pain, deja vu I've been here before
perhaps in another presentation
or maybe this is a recurring nightmare I can't wake from
you dealt the cards
then stacked them
in my vision, I see a house of cards
with the joker driving you to distraction
bate and switch different faces, same instrument of hate
I mind my own business
you have to ruin my reverie with your games
really, I'm too old to play
if you're happy, be happy for me
I've graduated, I'm moving on...
#love
#angels
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2024 3:01am
22nd Mar 2024 3:01am
Space Race War
this isn't a race war alone, it's a space race war
some of the most intelligent beings are held captive
in their defense, how do you fight what you can't see?
when no relief is given
when everything you have
you had to take
I eat like a barbarian
I know what it's like to starve
sometimes I buckle under the weight of the classes
tag teamed and born in a pit, still I get up
sorrow is rich off us
knowledge is gold
I'm not in the sharing mood, however
I've burned with it on my tongue before
I had...
some of the most intelligent beings are held captive
in their defense, how do you fight what you can't see?
when no relief is given
when everything you have
you had to take
I eat like a barbarian
I know what it's like to starve
sometimes I buckle under the weight of the classes
tag teamed and born in a pit, still I get up
sorrow is rich off us
knowledge is gold
I'm not in the sharing mood, however
I've burned with it on my tongue before
I had...
#war
#universe
#angels
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 2:33am
21st Mar 2024 2:33am
Delicious
exciting lush, pink plaything
loved above measure
desired in the hell of my choice
you designed the torture to free me
and as a knee, knee Queen
I aim to please
conjuring some roughhousing
in the eternal scorn, we have a reckoning
it's just us Big Man
you need some sexual healing
blow off steam inside me
our descendants have been busy with surprises
riding that crazy wavelength like they do
first I call in the seductresses
male and female after our kind
they ache with the need
affectionate smile ...
loved above measure
desired in the hell of my choice
you designed the torture to free me
and as a knee, knee Queen
I aim to please
conjuring some roughhousing
in the eternal scorn, we have a reckoning
it's just us Big Man
you need some sexual healing
blow off steam inside me
our descendants have been busy with surprises
riding that crazy wavelength like they do
first I call in the seductresses
male and female after our kind
they ache with the need
affectionate smile ...
#love
#angels
#IMissYou
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Mar 2024 6:43pm
17th Mar 2024 6:43pm
Liars
as I address the infliction, it is with much regret I say this
my heart is very passionate
that is counted against me
I am held by unwritten rules
which like the Mad Hatter or our government change constantly
I need a clear voice to adhere to
clear and concise
not mutated garble
it is insidious the way some of you operate
with no decorum or reason
utter dominance is more your style
there is no worthy opponent I can see
that being said Karma will rectify for things unseen
I came to this realm with previous...
my heart is very passionate
that is counted against me
I am held by unwritten rules
which like the Mad Hatter or our government change constantly
I need a clear voice to adhere to
clear and concise
not mutated garble
it is insidious the way some of you operate
with no decorum or reason
utter dominance is more your style
there is no worthy opponent I can see
that being said Karma will rectify for things unseen
I came to this realm with previous...
#dark
#angels
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Mar 2024 4:44am
10th Mar 2024 4:44am
Echo Dot
my thoughts become convoluted
as they enter my mind at such a pace as to make my mind spin
my brain cannot organize them all, in a timely fashion
faster than the speed of light they manifest in my mind
I believe by telepathic thought
I try to record what is seemingly beamed in
old memories, things I have forgotten from other lives
and things I've never known at all
keeper of visions I release the energy into the world
relaying a message I believe isn't just for me
I get angry when I get confused, as this weakens my stance ...
as they enter my mind at such a pace as to make my mind spin
my brain cannot organize them all, in a timely fashion
faster than the speed of light they manifest in my mind
I believe by telepathic thought
I try to record what is seemingly beamed in
old memories, things I have forgotten from other lives
and things I've never known at all
keeper of visions I release the energy into the world
relaying a message I believe isn't just for me
I get angry when I get confused, as this weakens my stance ...
#angels
#aliens
#scifi
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
Designs and Visions
it's happening again it's warming up and I'm not feeling good
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
#bipolar
#angels
#MentalHealth #aliens
#MentalHealth #aliens
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