Poems About Addiction by Top Critiquers
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Poems about addiction by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 8:35am
26th Oct 2024 8:35am
The Price Is Never Fair
Whiskey river flowing through my mind
Unable to remember which way is down
Needing to escape from the daily grind
Waiting for insanity to come back around
Hooked on the feeling of remaining numb
Casting blame on this foolish heart of mine
Chasing after love leaves me looking dumb
These toxic thoughts lead to rapid decline
Been broken so many times I’ve lost count
Yesterday is one continuous loop of despair
Couldn’t tell you how much or the amount
Details get fuzzy and the price is never fair
Unable to remember which way is down
Needing to escape from the daily grind
Waiting for insanity to come back around
Hooked on the feeling of remaining numb
Casting blame on this foolish heart of mine
Chasing after love leaves me looking dumb
These toxic thoughts lead to rapid decline
Been broken so many times I’ve lost count
Yesterday is one continuous loop of despair
Couldn’t tell you how much or the amount
Details get fuzzy and the price is never fair
#addiction
208 reads
21 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 7:21pm
16th Feb 2025 7:21pm
Reality is a curse
Will you catch me this time if I fall?
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times, I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
the dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times, I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
the dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
#addiction
#love
#marriage #support
#marriage #support
91 reads
17 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
31st Aug 2022 3:25pm
31st Aug 2022 3:25pm
a requiem for pain
I'm losing my internal battle
my grip slips and I want to scream nonstop
I'm being tortured to what end?
it hurts to think I can't cut it
is this my life from now on?
wear a chain or else
bloody hell
I've talked with ones like me
anxious hell with a gut churning chaser
admittedly I am afraid
I sleep and the call enters
ringing off the hook...my need
I will try again I feel I have no choice
but I'm not going to lie to you
if my only option is constant in your face pain
I choose...
my grip slips and I want to scream nonstop
I'm being tortured to what end?
it hurts to think I can't cut it
is this my life from now on?
wear a chain or else
bloody hell
I've talked with ones like me
anxious hell with a gut churning chaser
admittedly I am afraid
I sleep and the call enters
ringing off the hook...my need
I will try again I feel I have no choice
but I'm not going to lie to you
if my only option is constant in your face pain
I choose...
#anxiety
#dark
#addiction #hurt
#addiction #hurt
569 reads
6 Comments
Her
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 3:09am
10th Feb 2025 3:09am
Unholy
It’s unholy
How I lose myself
Consumed by the fire in dark, yet vacant eyes
The heat of skin
Possessed by all that we become
I don’t wait
For a gentle love that doesn’t exist
But this
The raging tide that pulls me under
This is my forever
The only way they know how to love
It’s unholy
How they seem to know me wholly
My fingernails digging in their backs
My teeth buried in their shoulders
While they are buried deep inside my untamed heart
Complicated edges soothe ...
How I lose myself
Consumed by the fire in dark, yet vacant eyes
The heat of skin
Possessed by all that we become
I don’t wait
For a gentle love that doesn’t exist
But this
The raging tide that pulls me under
This is my forever
The only way they know how to love
It’s unholy
How they seem to know me wholly
My fingernails digging in their backs
My teeth buried in their shoulders
While they are buried deep inside my untamed heart
Complicated edges soothe ...
#addiction
#erotic
#lust #passion
#lust #passion
264 reads
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 1:52am
18th Feb 2025 1:52am
I'm going through
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ FOR what I want to talk about what makes some folks think, which makes no sense when some people's think what your going through in your own life. Really isn't what you're going through 🤔 yet to tell you that you are not going through what you say what you have in your own life. 😧 Let me remind you that you ain't me and I'm not you, 😔 going through the process of the stages that I have to face on a daily basis of life. For you tell me that you don't believe that I have cancer but yet I do, from prostate...
#addiction
#bipolar
#cancer
#depression
#MentalHealth
55 reads
2 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 10:02am
6th Jan 2025 10:02am
She Drinks...
#addiction
#depression
83 reads
15 Comments
Numer90
Numer0-un0
Numer0-un0
Poem Published
20th May 2021 3:49pm
20th May 2021 3:49pm
EUPHORIA; Euphoric Me!
Me;
I don't talk much "Miss" but when I do, I'm foul mouthed..
Is that alright with you Darling?
My Therapist;
Go to sleep!
Me;
No!.. I don't feel like sleeping..
I.. I.. I'm just.. Oh! Don't mind me..
I just wanna keep blabbing and revealing the contents of my lame brain..
...
I don't talk much "Miss" but when I do, I'm foul mouthed..
Is that alright with you Darling?
My Therapist;
Go to sleep!
Me;
No!.. I don't feel like sleeping..
I.. I.. I'm just.. Oh! Don't mind me..
I just wanna keep blabbing and revealing the contents of my lame brain..
...
#addiction
#PTSD
440 reads
2 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
20th May 2022 00:30am
20th May 2022 00:30am
Drink my blood... Again...
You are my red-hot vein, pierced through and through,
Subduing me in your voluptuous sins
You are the ban of the great bloody bunch,
You are my impudent and violent exciting fear
You are a drug running through closed veins,
You are the line beyond which I fall up
And in flight, I will wear wings with you,
And over the abyss I will soar like a bat
You tied my thoughts, stole my flesh,
Drank the blood, you give an unthinkable high
And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,
Begins to break my heart without a dose ...
Subduing me in your voluptuous sins
You are the ban of the great bloody bunch,
You are my impudent and violent exciting fear
You are a drug running through closed veins,
You are the line beyond which I fall up
And in flight, I will wear wings with you,
And over the abyss I will soar like a bat
You tied my thoughts, stole my flesh,
Drank the blood, you give an unthinkable high
And managed to inject me into a storm with silence,
Begins to break my heart without a dose ...
#marijuana
#vampires
#addiction
795 reads
28 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 8:46pm
30th Dec 2024 8:46pm
Fast and Furious
So, my countrymen have decided
to embrace...and celebrate...
organized stupidity.
So it is written.
So let it be done.
And may they learn the hard way
how to bring order
to their own thoughts
and actions.
Though unnecessary...
as forethought would have done the job.
So stub your toes, America!
Fuck around and find out.
Go ahead. Reach out.
Get a good grip on that
spinning table saw blade!
...
to embrace...and celebrate...
organized stupidity.
So it is written.
So let it be done.
And may they learn the hard way
how to bring order
to their own thoughts
and actions.
Though unnecessary...
as forethought would have done the job.
So stub your toes, America!
Fuck around and find out.
Go ahead. Reach out.
Get a good grip on that
spinning table saw blade!
...
#abuse
#addiction
#ignorance #SelfHarm
#ignorance #SelfHarm
233 reads
8 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
14th Jan 2024 2:36pm
14th Jan 2024 2:36pm
Tangent Magical Totem Machine
You start one way
End up another
Art serum
Color addiction
Ride the music
Pooneil Corner
Watch me ..
End up another
Art serum
Color addiction
Ride the music
Pooneil Corner
Watch me ..
#music
#art
#identity
#addiction
#LifeCycle
235 reads
18 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 11:47am
1st Nov 2024 11:47am
Vodkhaiku
Clear liquid, ice cold
Burning warmth in every sip
Glass echoes its tale.
Burning warmth in every sip
Glass echoes its tale.
#addiction
#alcohol
#art
#lust
#passion
93 reads
10 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
19th Mar 2021 5:26am
19th Mar 2021 5:26am
The Breakdown
Falling into the abyss the rocks felt like a million needles
Every one of them with a furious blast
Icicles tearing away at eyelids feeling fucking evil
Each one becoming worst than the last
But from there, there’s no way to go but up
Unless you dig Deep Underground
At the core you begin to understand the upheaval
All the while you slide into the breakdown
And then, when there is nothing left
All you can do is move forward
Every one of them with a furious blast
Icicles tearing away at eyelids feeling fucking evil
Each one becoming worst than the last
But from there, there’s no way to go but up
Unless you dig Deep Underground
At the core you begin to understand the upheaval
All the while you slide into the breakdown
And then, when there is nothing left
All you can do is move forward
#anger
#depression
#memories
#addiction
#MovingOn
669 reads
6 Comments
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