Poems About Unrequited Love by Top Critiquers
#UnrequitedLove
Poems about unrequited love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 8:29pm
19th Dec 2024 8:29pm
Breaking the silence
Now I can't believe
That you aren't near me
It's so easy to deceive
My thoughts that you don't see
Want you to feel my pain
Come and touch my hands
Would you hear it again?
Time measured through the sands
Sometimes, you don't understand
What you mean to me
Try to enter my mind
Maybe, you could see
Start to open your eyes
I fall into my dreams forever
Every night I dream of you
We can rest our fears together
Breaking the silence that surrounds you
That you aren't near me
It's so easy to deceive
My thoughts that you don't see
Want you to feel my pain
Come and touch my hands
Would you hear it again?
Time measured through the sands
Sometimes, you don't understand
What you mean to me
Try to enter my mind
Maybe, you could see
Start to open your eyes
I fall into my dreams forever
Every night I dream of you
We can rest our fears together
Breaking the silence that surrounds you
#dreams
#heartbroken
#relationships #UnrequitedLove
#relationships #UnrequitedLove
115 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
3rd Aug 2024 10:38am
3rd Aug 2024 10:38am
Long for true sleep
Why can't I sleep a little bit longer?
Why do my conscious and subconscious mind
want to wake up
When I don't have to
Dreams do not come as easily to me as they used to
The pitch of night and the stillness
greets me with every toss and turn
A slight doze and you are there
Lips a centimeter apart
Your scent surrounds me
You lightly graze your nose against mine
I want to move but I am frozen in time
I should feel fear
What I feel is sadness
I know you are not...
Why do my conscious and subconscious mind
want to wake up
When I don't have to
Dreams do not come as easily to me as they used to
The pitch of night and the stillness
greets me with every toss and turn
A slight doze and you are there
Lips a centimeter apart
Your scent surrounds me
You lightly graze your nose against mine
I want to move but I am frozen in time
I should feel fear
What I feel is sadness
I know you are not...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#FeelingLost
#UnrequitedLove
95 reads
26 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 6:46pm
2nd Sep 2024 6:46pm
Wednesday
help me find my way
down the dark and twisted path
I have no faith in people
the ones I've trusted let me down
it hurts bitterly
the only one I blame is myself
making the wrong choices
letting them inside my sacred heart
they took me for granted
looked at vulnerability as a game to play
I will not choose someone new
I no longer trust myself
to choose loving people
your love is all-encompassing you allow me to make mistakes
my loneliness is complete there is no human that can compare
I've delved into...
down the dark and twisted path
I have no faith in people
the ones I've trusted let me down
it hurts bitterly
the only one I blame is myself
making the wrong choices
letting them inside my sacred heart
they took me for granted
looked at vulnerability as a game to play
I will not choose someone new
I no longer trust myself
to choose loving people
your love is all-encompassing you allow me to make mistakes
my loneliness is complete there is no human that can compare
I've delved into...
#loneliness
#UnrequitedLove
181 reads
7 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2022 2:12pm
23rd Apr 2022 2:12pm
LONGING TO SHARE
NOW
The hustle and
bustle, pushing
and shoving, pressuring
schedule, and
bumper-to-bumper
traffic ended when
I walked into my haven.
NOW
is my sacred time,
my time to shower,
slowly sip my favorite
wine as candlelights
cascade erotic shadows
dancing on the walls
in sync with my chosen music.
Relaxing,
my body starts to hunger
as movement starts
in my pleasure zone.
AS
I am longing to share,
the doorbell signals
YOU
are here.
Time starts a new world
of...
The hustle and
bustle, pushing
and shoving, pressuring
schedule, and
bumper-to-bumper
traffic ended when
I walked into my haven.
NOW
is my sacred time,
my time to shower,
slowly sip my favorite
wine as candlelights
cascade erotic shadows
dancing on the walls
in sync with my chosen music.
Relaxing,
my body starts to hunger
as movement starts
in my pleasure zone.
AS
I am longing to share,
the doorbell signals
YOU
are here.
Time starts a new world
of...
#friendship
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
#crush
#obsession
433 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Sep 2023 00:43am
28th Sep 2023 00:43am
A SPECIAL BOND
A special bond with someone you just met is amazing when you can, see and feel the energy of the vibes as you feel comfortable in each others skin. JUST between the two of us as, we look deep into each other's eye to eye and see the true character of what, we are building together a life by STEEL AND STONES. As we express our true inner intentions, with realness of desire for that is REAL AS IT GETS, JUST BECAUSE IT FEELS LIKE something. That we can cherish in the process of creating a real strong commitment, with real consistency and devotion and respect. For that is what it takes if we are...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
474 reads
8 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
29th Apr 2023 5:58pm
29th Apr 2023 5:58pm
The L Word
I L you
You can't stop me
Perhaps it's mutual
Time will never tell
There's quiet moments
Suffering too
Too much damn rain
Alone in my thoughts
You'll never see this
If you do
You'd probably make fun of me
Change the subject
Anything to avoid
That damn elephant in the room
A Master or tormented
My own game
BIG
You can't stop me
Perhaps it's mutual
Time will never tell
There's quiet moments
Suffering too
Too much damn rain
Alone in my thoughts
You'll never see this
If you do
You'd probably make fun of me
Change the subject
Anything to avoid
That damn elephant in the room
A Master or tormented
My own game
BIG
#love
#confessional
#UnrequitedLove
359 reads
22 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
27th Aug 2023 2:06pm
27th Aug 2023 2:06pm
cradling the aftermath
two came feverishly together
words of hope glistening on starving lips
tangled up in blinding passion
souls intertwined
bodies alive with fire
they fervently merged
into one
as it sometimes does
time cooled their frenzied bliss
and the one least invested became restless
slipping silently from their embrace
while she in trust slumbered on
still bewitched & oblivious
loneliness crept in
and took his vacant place
broken is the newborn
left wailing in its cradle
the rhythm of its lifeblood ...
words of hope glistening on starving lips
tangled up in blinding passion
souls intertwined
bodies alive with fire
they fervently merged
into one
as it sometimes does
time cooled their frenzied bliss
and the one least invested became restless
slipping silently from their embrace
while she in trust slumbered on
still bewitched & oblivious
loneliness crept in
and took his vacant place
broken is the newborn
left wailing in its cradle
the rhythm of its lifeblood ...
#sister
#heartbroken
#breakup
#TimeHeals
#UnrequitedLove
273 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
11th Jan 2024 00:29am
11th Jan 2024 00:29am
Fiberglass, Cane, or Bamboo?
#UnrequitedLove
#MovingOn
134 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 6:42am
17th Oct 2024 6:42am
Unrequited
If the world could see your requited love,
they'd see the strength of a newborn kitten.
The voice of a butterfly
A fistless knock on a door
A dandelion in the wind
They'd laugh at your whisper shouts,
The moving clothing with no body inside.
Your will as imposing as a deathbed patient's.
And they'd think they were seeing you.
But they'd be wrong.
they'd see the strength of a newborn kitten.
The voice of a butterfly
A fistless knock on a door
A dandelion in the wind
They'd laugh at your whisper shouts,
The moving clothing with no body inside.
Your will as imposing as a deathbed patient's.
And they'd think they were seeing you.
But they'd be wrong.
#strength
#UnrequitedLove
144 reads
10 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
28th Dec 2023 00:44am
28th Dec 2023 00:44am
Beguiling
The moon was beguiling
in her ancient silver beauty.
Oxygen less, she takes your breath far away.
From the night's silver crusted gray oblivion of missing you.
In the outer space of my heart, star prints of you are still in the billions.
I slip into, a gown of sorrow.
Weeping tomorrow's, some call it rain.
More like puncturing pain.
Half insane, shall I howl at the ruler
and her cratered light?
She comes accompanied by nights of black satin and a chaos of stars a ghostly metallic white
Although the future holds her luminous cards. ...
in her ancient silver beauty.
Oxygen less, she takes your breath far away.
From the night's silver crusted gray oblivion of missing you.
In the outer space of my heart, star prints of you are still in the billions.
I slip into, a gown of sorrow.
Weeping tomorrow's, some call it rain.
More like puncturing pain.
Half insane, shall I howl at the ruler
and her cratered light?
She comes accompanied by nights of black satin and a chaos of stars a ghostly metallic white
Although the future holds her luminous cards. ...
#sadness
#moon
#UnrequitedLove
202 reads
8 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
6th May 2024 12:26pm
6th May 2024 12:26pm
Discarded
Don't send me home tomorrow
Let it be a perfect day
Don't bring me all of this sorrow
By choosing to send me away
My home, hell, life's existence is no more than a cell
I'm barren, I'm waste without you and you can tell
My heart and mind are no more than empty shells
With cracks widening and spidering with every farewell
How can you feel like this and yet fear the words
My advances were met by you retreating and my heart heard
Isn't it time for our sun to rise or do we only exist at night
Am I only to exist within your...
Let it be a perfect day
Don't bring me all of this sorrow
By choosing to send me away
My home, hell, life's existence is no more than a cell
I'm barren, I'm waste without you and you can tell
My heart and mind are no more than empty shells
With cracks widening and spidering with every farewell
How can you feel like this and yet fear the words
My advances were met by you retreating and my heart heard
Isn't it time for our sun to rise or do we only exist at night
Am I only to exist within your...
#love
#rejection
#UnrequitedLove
341 reads
21 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
6th Feb 2022 11:30pm
6th Feb 2022 11:30pm
If
If I only knew the magic words to say
To make you believe I love you
I try but sometimes I think
I'm just trying to convince myself
Because my words never get through to you
There's a distance of miles
Standing next to you
Like talking through walls
Or not at all
How can only one feel everything
And the other feel nothing at all
I don't know
I know I don't know
And still I care
*
Now its been a few years
And I still think about you
The friend and nothing more I knew ...
To make you believe I love you
I try but sometimes I think
I'm just trying to convince myself
Because my words never get through to you
There's a distance of miles
Standing next to you
Like talking through walls
Or not at all
How can only one feel everything
And the other feel nothing at all
I don't know
I know I don't know
And still I care
*
Now its been a few years
And I still think about you
The friend and nothing more I knew ...
#UnrequitedLove
763 reads
6 Comments
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