Poems About Unrequited Love Seeking Honest Critique
#UnrequitedLove
Poems about unrequited love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
20th Apr 2024 1:36pm
20th Apr 2024 1:36pm
Thinking of her
Sitting here thinking about you
Its a thing to do
Shes become imprinted on me
We could never be
Theres a lifetime that separates us
Nothing to discuss
But the heart wants what it wants
Still theres no response
I feel happiness again when we talk
I Watch the clock
Minutes turn to hours waiting for the ringtone
Put down the phone
Youre not for her and she could never be yours
On opposite shores
Your darkness would blot out her light
Shes day, you're night
...
Its a thing to do
Shes become imprinted on me
We could never be
Theres a lifetime that separates us
Nothing to discuss
But the heart wants what it wants
Still theres no response
I feel happiness again when we talk
I Watch the clock
Minutes turn to hours waiting for the ringtone
Put down the phone
Youre not for her and she could never be yours
On opposite shores
Your darkness would blot out her light
Shes day, you're night
...
#disappointment
#love
#sadness #UnrequitedLove
#sadness #UnrequitedLove
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The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 3:58pm
18th Apr 2024 3:58pm
An unwinnable game
Im in love with someone who doesn't feel the same
I wish that it would go as quickly as it came
I dont want to play this unwinnable game
Why the fuck did love put me in its aim
I felt happy and alive and now its just an ache
Was cutting off from her the right move to make
Was having her close something i could take
Either way i still feel a heartbreak
I miss her intensely she stays on my mind
And i know that its something that will take some time
I want time with her but its not fates design
Id learn how to love right, for...
I wish that it would go as quickly as it came
I dont want to play this unwinnable game
Why the fuck did love put me in its aim
I felt happy and alive and now its just an ache
Was cutting off from her the right move to make
Was having her close something i could take
Either way i still feel a heartbreak
I miss her intensely she stays on my mind
And i know that its something that will take some time
I want time with her but its not fates design
Id learn how to love right, for...
#love
#UnrequitedLove
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The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 5:28am
18th Apr 2024 5:28am
Something we never were
I want her so bad that its causing me pain
So i walk away but the feelings remain
My life feels like there is only the rain
Her blue skies is what I'm trying to gain
But i have nothing to offer except scars and trauma
I know when she thinks of me all she sees is the drama
Shes everything that I've been looking for
Shes made me want to open every closed door
Shes trying to be a good friend but I'm wanting more
Cuz i feel like my heart she can restore
I want to know how it feels to have her im my arms
To be fully in...
So i walk away but the feelings remain
My life feels like there is only the rain
Her blue skies is what I'm trying to gain
But i have nothing to offer except scars and trauma
I know when she thinks of me all she sees is the drama
Shes everything that I've been looking for
Shes made me want to open every closed door
Shes trying to be a good friend but I'm wanting more
Cuz i feel like my heart she can restore
I want to know how it feels to have her im my arms
To be fully in...
#love
#UnrequitedLove
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buddhakitty
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 1:36am
12th Apr 2024 1:36am
and finally, hope
I hope life blesses you
with a goodnight
kiss
I hope that the dreams
of moonlight fall upon
you like silver
snowflakes
I hope that your sadness
is covered by a thousand
red cut out paper
hearts
I hope that a child sees
through your eyes
and the devil
walk away
defeated
I hope the summer
rain cleanses your
grief and you can
finally grow
roses
with a goodnight
kiss
I hope that the dreams
of moonlight fall upon
you like silver
snowflakes
I hope that your sadness
is covered by a thousand
red cut out paper
hearts
I hope that a child sees
through your eyes
and the devil
walk away
defeated
I hope the summer
rain cleanses your
grief and you can
finally grow
roses
#forgiveness
#honesty
#UnrequitedLove
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Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 10:27pm
1st Apr 2024 10:27pm
In his arms
It should make me happy
He makes her feel warm
Happy to know
she is safe in his arms
and the sight of her laugh
fills him with glee
happier than ever is not happy for me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
those foolish butterflies
that I recognise
look so much better
in her pretty eyes
as if I could come close
to all that they will be
she keeps that happiness far away from me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
I am a monster
with all the time I spend
secretly hating
her...
He makes her feel warm
Happy to know
she is safe in his arms
and the sight of her laugh
fills him with glee
happier than ever is not happy for me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
those foolish butterflies
that I recognise
look so much better
in her pretty eyes
as if I could come close
to all that they will be
she keeps that happiness far away from me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
I am a monster
with all the time I spend
secretly hating
her...
#jealousy
#BestFriend
#heartbroken
#LGBT
#UnrequitedLove
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monovox128
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 6:08pm
25th Mar 2024 6:08pm
THESE THINGS I KNOW
I know I am not your first choice
I'd be lucky to be your seconds
Even though I knew from the start you're the one my heart beckons
I know at times I may seem more of a handful and just not enough
Others times I am but, still I think I'm totally unworthy of your love
I know I have many insecurities and also have far too many flaws
But, I am right here to testify to you
I'd be so fucking damn worth it all
I know from the very beginning you
liked me a lot and actually cared
Time has not been on our sides
and often I...
I'd be lucky to be your seconds
Even though I knew from the start you're the one my heart beckons
I know at times I may seem more of a handful and just not enough
Others times I am but, still I think I'm totally unworthy of your love
I know I have many insecurities and also have far too many flaws
But, I am right here to testify to you
I'd be so fucking damn worth it all
I know from the very beginning you
liked me a lot and actually cared
Time has not been on our sides
and often I...
#hope
#ILoveYou
#UnrequitedLove #bittersweet
#UnrequitedLove #bittersweet
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Baldwin
Poem Published
15th Mar 2024 4:09pm
15th Mar 2024 4:09pm
This Heart
This heart you’ve deftly thieved
from me,
you plunderer --
can you hear it
as it murmurs in your hands
a yes, oh yes,
and now asks when
yes when,
you’ll steal it yet again?
from me,
you plunderer --
can you hear it
as it murmurs in your hands
a yes, oh yes,
and now asks when
yes when,
you’ll steal it yet again?
#UnrequitedLove
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3 Comments
closram25
Poem Published
7th Mar 2024 8:58am
7th Mar 2024 8:58am
I was excited.
I loved a girl
with the thought of being loved,
I had nothing to gain
She said we’re all the same
I always tried my best
For 10 years til there was nothing left.
Here I lay my heart
Like this tale I’m telling.
with the thought of being loved,
I had nothing to gain
She said we’re all the same
I always tried my best
For 10 years til there was nothing left.
Here I lay my heart
Like this tale I’m telling.
#UnrequitedLove
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Jezkeebs
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2024 11:05pm
3rd Mar 2024 11:05pm
Syllable
Never my intention
Crazy sad endeavour
And this sad rejection
Thinking strange dilemma
Misery dejection
From her soul magnetic
This my love obsession
Making me frenetic
All years my attention
Thoughtful thoughts assemble
For rose of perfection
Actions be especial
Into my possession
Her heart I affected
Like a sweet infection
Then we were connected
Decent to deception
Lies they had potential
But step to redemption
To count sins sequential
This be my confession...
Crazy sad endeavour
And this sad rejection
Thinking strange dilemma
Misery dejection
From her soul magnetic
This my love obsession
Making me frenetic
All years my attention
Thoughtful thoughts assemble
For rose of perfection
Actions be especial
Into my possession
Her heart I affected
Like a sweet infection
Then we were connected
Decent to deception
Lies they had potential
But step to redemption
To count sins sequential
This be my confession...
#relationships
#friendship
#UnrequitedLove
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0 Comments
poetic_gawdess
Poem Published
8th Feb 2024 2:40am
8th Feb 2024 2:40am
Weather Man
Some of us see the rain,
more than the sunshine.
And I mean, really, that’s fine..
eventually you learn to appreciate it.
I’ve learned to dance between the drops,
as well as I’ve learned to cry in it.
but like the flowers and trees
I grow, I thrive in it.
Seeds sprouting
after endless tears have watered them.
i just have to give them time, don’t bother them..
from despair true beauty can grow
little did I know
that you’d come along
with arms so strong
you picked me up when i was falling apart;
a new feeling of...
more than the sunshine.
And I mean, really, that’s fine..
eventually you learn to appreciate it.
I’ve learned to dance between the drops,
as well as I’ve learned to cry in it.
but like the flowers and trees
I grow, I thrive in it.
Seeds sprouting
after endless tears have watered them.
i just have to give them time, don’t bother them..
from despair true beauty can grow
little did I know
that you’d come along
with arms so strong
you picked me up when i was falling apart;
a new feeling of...
#love
#LifeStruggles
#UnrequitedLove #hurt
#UnrequitedLove #hurt
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Pinkdreams
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2024 2:51pm
3rd Feb 2024 2:51pm
Sorry
He's yelling at me.
Why did you put your clothes in my dresser drawer?
Why?
That's crazy!
It's MY house
Not yours
i'm scared
i think i may have filled up two drawers
maybe three
a red sweater on top in one
but didn't i live with him for a while?
no
right
never
not at all
when he leaves
i'll remove everything
except my shame
that will take a while
Why did you put your clothes in my dresser drawer?
Why?
That's crazy!
It's MY house
Not yours
i'm scared
i think i may have filled up two drawers
maybe three
a red sweater on top in one
but didn't i live with him for a while?
no
right
never
not at all
when he leaves
i'll remove everything
except my shame
that will take a while
#shame
#UnrequitedLove
#nightmares
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Pinkdreams
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2024 1:32am
2nd Feb 2024 1:32am
Flying Over
I can see the rooftops of your world;
from my rusted perch
I've been circling for years
never knowing when,
or if,
you'll let me land.
I can see the rooftops of your world
the unsightly
the unseen
the spires
the power sources
stars dimmed from lesser light
still,
you'd take them from me
if you could.
i can see the rooftops of your world
and sometimes more
the windows you see out of
the intimacy of your coffee
the door women walk through
the door i have entered ...
from my rusted perch
I've been circling for years
never knowing when,
or if,
you'll let me land.
I can see the rooftops of your world
the unsightly
the unseen
the spires
the power sources
stars dimmed from lesser light
still,
you'd take them from me
if you could.
i can see the rooftops of your world
and sometimes more
the windows you see out of
the intimacy of your coffee
the door women walk through
the door i have entered ...
#UnrequitedLove
#MovingOn
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7 Comments
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