Poems About Unrequited Love Seeking Honest Critique
#UnrequitedLove
Poems about unrequited love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
NP_NP
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 4:26pm
13th Feb 2025 4:26pm
He Is Poison
You are the king of poisons my arsenic.
Giving you one night would be
like ingesting cyanide death to the
soul in minutes.
Careful young women, some
men come to steal your hearts
and blacken your soul, nothing more.
They'll drain your beauty and watch
you convulse their Strychnine,
enjoying your dying misery.
Be warned and careful who you
bring to bed. He will give you
spiritual death, draining your
vitality and leaving you hollow.
Before you take his hand...
Giving you one night would be
like ingesting cyanide death to the
soul in minutes.
Careful young women, some
men come to steal your hearts
and blacken your soul, nothing more.
They'll drain your beauty and watch
you convulse their Strychnine,
enjoying your dying misery.
Be warned and careful who you
bring to bed. He will give you
spiritual death, draining your
vitality and leaving you hollow.
Before you take his hand...
#disappointment
#lust
#regret
#sex
#UnrequitedLove
102 reads
4 Comments
jenny_way
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 5:32pm
8th Feb 2025 5:32pm
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
You might be not who I imagined
I’m aware, yet can’t help
Staring at you stealthily, while you pass through me with your friends
Oh god, you don’t even notice me
You care less to see
How fast I’m falling in love with you
Yeah, I know. I’m too naive
You’re probably a piece of shit,
But the thought of you fills me with zeal
If I’m as good as they say
Then why am I not the one for you?
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
I’m aware, yet can’t help
Staring at you stealthily, while you pass through me with your friends
Oh god, you don’t even notice me
You care less to see
How fast I’m falling in love with you
Yeah, I know. I’m too naive
You’re probably a piece of shit,
But the thought of you fills me with zeal
If I’m as good as they say
Then why am I not the one for you?
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
#crush
#dreams
#FallingInLove #UnrequitedLove
#FallingInLove #UnrequitedLove
58 reads
1 Comment
BlackBox
Black Box
Black Box
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 00:59am
6th Feb 2025 00:59am
This Feeling
I think of you often
Fondly, softly
Quietly in my prison of a mind
During my days and my nights
As I sit typing these small mementos
I’m reminded of how close we became
Your laughter, your beauty
The never ending conversations
This feeling of emptiness, loneliness
This somber sadness grips my soul
Clutching with intent to crush what’s left
Mangled and mashed into dust
Tears well up ready to burst forth
A briny, saline waterfall crashing into the depths of my heart
Inducing an anxious panic overriding all...
Fondly, softly
Quietly in my prison of a mind
During my days and my nights
As I sit typing these small mementos
I’m reminded of how close we became
Your laughter, your beauty
The never ending conversations
This feeling of emptiness, loneliness
This somber sadness grips my soul
Clutching with intent to crush what’s left
Mangled and mashed into dust
Tears well up ready to burst forth
A briny, saline waterfall crashing into the depths of my heart
Inducing an anxious panic overriding all...
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#sadness
#UnrequitedLove
115 reads
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StillisinInk
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 5:14am
5th Feb 2025 5:14am
mercy.
swore to myself
I won't fall for your pleadings
will ignore you when you cry for help
leave you there all alone
just how you did to me
but one glance at you
and my heart yearns to help you
even if it means
breaking myself again allover
you knew it,didn't you?
I cant leave you suffering
to fix pieces of me
so here i am again
going in circles
you hurt me
I fix you
My brain begs for mercy
my heart wishes for your well being
you knew it,didn't you?
I cant leave you suffering
to fix pieces...
I won't fall for your pleadings
will ignore you when you cry for help
leave you there all alone
just how you did to me
but one glance at you
and my heart yearns to help you
even if it means
breaking myself again allover
you knew it,didn't you?
I cant leave you suffering
to fix pieces of me
so here i am again
going in circles
you hurt me
I fix you
My brain begs for mercy
my heart wishes for your well being
you knew it,didn't you?
I cant leave you suffering
to fix pieces...
#bittersweet
#fear
#manipulation
#sadness
#UnrequitedLove
36 reads
2 Comments
Damselinhandcuffs
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 6:47am
31st Jan 2025 6:47am
Silent Peak
How much is left for you to feel?
Isn't this lonesomeness killing you with patience my love?
Eating away the molten layers
The pretty walls within your skin
How can you ever feel satisfaction still laying next to him?
Touching yourself
Keeping company to the growing empty spaces
That used to be so full-
Full of love
The deep taste of a shared future
The sweet pallet of its laughter
How much is left to feel?
As he lays sleeping...
Isn't this lonesomeness killing you with patience my love?
Eating away the molten layers
The pretty walls within your skin
How can you ever feel satisfaction still laying next to him?
Touching yourself
Keeping company to the growing empty spaces
That used to be so full-
Full of love
The deep taste of a shared future
The sweet pallet of its laughter
How much is left to feel?
As he lays sleeping...
#love
#MovingOn
#rejection
#relationships
#UnrequitedLove
132 reads
4 Comments
Deadsorrow78
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 2:10am
27th Jan 2025 2:10am
Wings of a Red Bird
Mystical eyes from across the Way.
Your sacred path has been laid.
Follow the scent of the sweet, earthly balsamic aroma of
The Nag champa, and transcend this way.
Dragon's Blood lines the sides to protect you on this spiritual quest. And Zeus has asked Crotus to watch over you with his mighty bow, as you cross from the Way.
Patchouli has been spread upon the path to ease your stress and bring you inner peace.
Place the turquoise stone in the palm of your hand and
transcend this way. As Jupiter lights the purple and violet
candles, in sets of three so...
Your sacred path has been laid.
Follow the scent of the sweet, earthly balsamic aroma of
The Nag champa, and transcend this way.
Dragon's Blood lines the sides to protect you on this spiritual quest. And Zeus has asked Crotus to watch over you with his mighty bow, as you cross from the Way.
Patchouli has been spread upon the path to ease your stress and bring you inner peace.
Place the turquoise stone in the palm of your hand and
transcend this way. As Jupiter lights the purple and violet
candles, in sets of three so...
#peace
#UnrequitedLove
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0 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 2:08pm
25th Jan 2025 2:08pm
Russians
In the black and white of an endless film, I long to be your red rose, vivid, surreal. The last glimpse you catch before closing your eyes, The final breath shared under stormy skies.
I have never fought so fiercely, so true, Until the battle of words was between me and you. In the war of hearts, we wield the knives, Each strike cutting deep, yet we both survive.
I hold the blade to your chest, you to my throat, A silent scream as our souls take note. I beg you to do it, to end this rift, But you, with your surrender, offer a white handkerchief.
You fall to your knees,...
I have never fought so fiercely, so true, Until the battle of words was between me and you. In the war of hearts, we wield the knives, Each strike cutting deep, yet we both survive.
I hold the blade to your chest, you to my throat, A silent scream as our souls take note. I beg you to do it, to end this rift, But you, with your surrender, offer a white handkerchief.
You fall to your knees,...
#heartbroken
#hurt
#love
#rejection
#UnrequitedLove
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_kristiibooooo
Kristina
Kristina
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 6:23pm
22nd Jan 2025 6:23pm
These thoughts
We have been down this road before
What do I do
We have different ways of showing that we love
But it just feeling his love is going
The hurt and sadness I feel in my heart overwhelms me
The constant overthinking
That he knows I cannot help
Here I am again
Thinking
these Thoughts
I get reassurance from him
Like hey it’s just you thinking these thought there not true
But here I am again thinking
these Thought
I don’t know what I have to do
I will do anything for him
He is the only person I want ...
What do I do
We have different ways of showing that we love
But it just feeling his love is going
The hurt and sadness I feel in my heart overwhelms me
The constant overthinking
That he knows I cannot help
Here I am again
Thinking
these Thoughts
I get reassurance from him
Like hey it’s just you thinking these thought there not true
But here I am again thinking
these Thought
I don’t know what I have to do
I will do anything for him
He is the only person I want ...
#apathy
#forgiveness
#ILoveYou
#obsession
#UnrequitedLove
122 reads
9 Comments
Damselinhandcuffs
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 2:30am
22nd Jan 2025 2:30am
Bug
I used your pet name last night.
It was an accident.
It slipped out of the lonely gap of my teeth
as I slipped him out of me.
It came searching for you like the pest that you are.
I called this stranger your pet name and cried,
It was an accident.
How it still pains me
that you turned out to be a flea only for her.
The bird woman
The one who could leave and still be so present.
So controlling in absence.
But my dear,
you are a bug.
A plague that took years from...
It was an accident.
It slipped out of the lonely gap of my teeth
as I slipped him out of me.
It came searching for you like the pest that you are.
I called this stranger your pet name and cried,
It was an accident.
How it still pains me
that you turned out to be a flea only for her.
The bird woman
The one who could leave and still be so present.
So controlling in absence.
But my dear,
you are a bug.
A plague that took years from...
#breakup
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#rejection
#UnrequitedLove
85 reads
2 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 6:40pm
20th Jan 2025 6:40pm
Ah do
Yes, I’d love to tell you that I do
And I'd love to make you my boo; without further ado
Through fire and ice; we’ll see it through
A love reborn; both bold and new
Your touch ignites like morning’s hue
A blaze of passion; fierce and due.
No shadow falls where your light grew
The world revolves; yet rests on you.
With every step; my soul imbues
A rhythm synced; to love’s own cues.
The storms may rise; the winds may bruise
But I stand firm; I cannot lose.
Your voice; a symphony that woos
A melody...
And I'd love to make you my boo; without further ado
Through fire and ice; we’ll see it through
A love reborn; both bold and new
Your touch ignites like morning’s hue
A blaze of passion; fierce and due.
No shadow falls where your light grew
The world revolves; yet rests on you.
With every step; my soul imbues
A rhythm synced; to love’s own cues.
The storms may rise; the winds may bruise
But I stand firm; I cannot lose.
Your voice; a symphony that woos
A melody...
#beauty
#love
#romantic #UnrequitedLove
#romantic #UnrequitedLove
195 reads
3 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 9:01am
18th Jan 2025 9:01am
Black Rose
Yes, she says...
She swears by the moon; the stars: the sea
Her love as endless;.... as eternity.
She paints her words... in colors so bold
Promises spun.... like threads of gold
She’d fight the storms; she’d face the night
Trade her shadows for his light...
But when the world catches a glimpse
The truth unfolds... the story limps.
And when you take it out to the open
You see her vows were softly spoken.
She only wants to be adored
To hear sweet words... like "You’re my reward."
Never chose him… oh no, not...
She swears by the moon; the stars: the sea
Her love as endless;.... as eternity.
She paints her words... in colors so bold
Promises spun.... like threads of gold
She’d fight the storms; she’d face the night
Trade her shadows for his light...
But when the world catches a glimpse
The truth unfolds... the story limps.
And when you take it out to the open
You see her vows were softly spoken.
She only wants to be adored
To hear sweet words... like "You’re my reward."
Never chose him… oh no, not...
#abuse
#FallingInLove
#relationships #UnrequitedLove
#relationships #UnrequitedLove
154 reads
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EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:52pm
3rd Jan 2025 11:52pm
unrequited
Your affections
are a one night stand
with unrequited love
you talk a big game, babe
but you disappear
like a post-fuck smoke
leaving nothing but memories
and the scent of you behind
I fuck myself into dreams of you
wake up with a sex toy between my legs
and the disappointment of being alone
No scalding hot shower has ever
washed away the lingering heat inside
but I still try
a pointless punishment
that leaves me wet
in too many ways
I half wish you'd never
whispered...
are a one night stand
with unrequited love
you talk a big game, babe
but you disappear
like a post-fuck smoke
leaving nothing but memories
and the scent of you behind
I fuck myself into dreams of you
wake up with a sex toy between my legs
and the disappointment of being alone
No scalding hot shower has ever
washed away the lingering heat inside
but I still try
a pointless punishment
that leaves me wet
in too many ways
I half wish you'd never
whispered...
#dirty
#erotic
#IMissYou
#sex
#UnrequitedLove
221 reads
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