Poems About No Poo Seeking Honest Critique
#NoPoo
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
4th Jul 2023 2:18am
4th Jul 2023 2:18am
Ed's bomb
I was warned beforehand
his hand had made something
with wires and batteries
it was on his table
could I go see
what I saw was a metaphor
with wires hanging out of it
though didn't want to doubt it
in front of him
his hand had made something
with wires and batteries
it was on his table
could I go see
what I saw was a metaphor
with wires hanging out of it
though didn't want to doubt it
in front of him
#NoPoo
650 reads
15 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
18th Jun 2023 8:07pm
18th Jun 2023 8:07pm
Tulips, the untold truth of it
for a minute
I could think of no-thing
on gods green earth
which had a worse existence
than the chicken
then thought of the tulip
at least the chicken
has a quick turn of death
But the tulip is grown,
then harvested screaming,
thrown into to a bundle
then shiped on life support
sold in the mart
put in a vase
because they look so
fkn beautiful
while they die in pain
I could think of no-thing
on gods green earth
which had a worse existence
than the chicken
then thought of the tulip
at least the chicken
has a quick turn of death
But the tulip is grown,
then harvested screaming,
thrown into to a bundle
then shiped on life support
sold in the mart
put in a vase
because they look so
fkn beautiful
while they die in pain
#NoPoo
670 reads
13 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2023 11:18am
3rd Jan 2023 11:18am
Beside myself
not sure I like
her taste in mirror
or the depth
of wound last time
she held it up
her taste in mirror
or the depth
of wound last time
she held it up
#NoPoo
754 reads
17 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2022 4:16pm
23rd Dec 2022 4:16pm
Christmas morning 2021
We gathered when the sun was still too weak to punch through the grey sky.
Her children, the three of them, fussed around flowers, straightened the poetry and trinkets then raked the blue pebbles level with their fingers so when the sun broke through they shone like a calm blue sea
then we stood around in silence, our heads down each of us wrapped in our memories.
I poured her a drink, sucked the life from my cigarette, then spoke of mine, they theirs
some of us laughed, some of us cried, then we looked down again and...
Her children, the three of them, fussed around flowers, straightened the poetry and trinkets then raked the blue pebbles level with their fingers so when the sun broke through they shone like a calm blue sea
then we stood around in silence, our heads down each of us wrapped in our memories.
I poured her a drink, sucked the life from my cigarette, then spoke of mine, they theirs
some of us laughed, some of us cried, then we looked down again and...
#NoPoo
498 reads
5 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
18th Aug 2022 11:37am
18th Aug 2022 11:37am
It's not you
I don't know if I want her heart any more
mine is still cold, and I'm sure
it should have warmed
by now
mine is still cold, and I'm sure
it should have warmed
by now
#NoPoo
798 reads
14 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
17th Apr 2022 5:49pm
17th Apr 2022 5:49pm
So... what're we gonna call zebras and xylophones now
they've taken
the letter z
and stained it
like the Aryans stained
the swastika
the letter z
and stained it
like the Aryans stained
the swastika
#NoPoo
665 reads
14 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
17th Apr 2022 5:17pm
17th Apr 2022 5:17pm
An excerpt from a strange occurrence
you may not remember
back when we were one cell
wriggling round the ocean
and not a care or notion
of standing on dry land
I do
I remember much
later, when eyes overwhelmed us
with beauty and sadness
and where it took us
from there
and look at us now
look at you"
but, I don't think he knew
who he was talking to
#NoPoo
back when we were one cell
wriggling round the ocean
and not a care or notion
of standing on dry land
I do
I remember much
later, when eyes overwhelmed us
with beauty and sadness
and where it took us
from there
and look at us now
look at you"
but, I don't think he knew
who he was talking to
#NoPoo
#NoPoo
688 reads
7 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
10th Dec 2021 9:24pm
10th Dec 2021 9:24pm
Take the moo off the menu ?
who is going to tell the cows
their presence is detremetal
to the world at large
and I wonder, on hearing it
would they understand
the gravity of the situation
and cease
all
procreation
or will we
have to do it
for them 🤔
their presence is detremetal
to the world at large
and I wonder, on hearing it
would they understand
the gravity of the situation
and cease
all
procreation
or will we
have to do it
for them 🤔
#NoPoo
748 reads
13 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
19th Sep 2021 5:48am
19th Sep 2021 5:48am
Dual Depths
together we sink
into oblivion.... ~ where
passion truly dwells
into oblivion.... ~ where
passion truly dwells
#love
#FallingInLove
#senryu
#crush
#NoPoo
423 reads
5 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
13th Jun 2021 11:29pm
13th Jun 2021 11:29pm
Son, My son
can say with conviction
and honesty, the journey
has been mostly easy
for me, anyway
cos this father’s love ain’t fussy.
all I really want you to be
is alive
#NoPoo. #PrideProud
and honesty, the journey
has been mostly easy
for me, anyway
cos this father’s love ain’t fussy.
all I really want you to be
is alive
#NoPoo. #PrideProud
#NoPoo
871 reads
12 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2021 4:08am
2nd Mar 2021 4:08am
ffs...
felt my heart sink down
then eat itself
would have eaten me too
only for the five pairs of eyes
in the room
seven hours have passed
and I think I’m over it
just wish
I’d have strangled her
when she tried to hug me
on the way out
..no I don’t
ffs
then eat itself
would have eaten me too
only for the five pairs of eyes
in the room
seven hours have passed
and I think I’m over it
just wish
I’d have strangled her
when she tried to hug me
on the way out
..no I don’t
ffs
#NoPoo
820 reads
11 Comments
lepperochan
CraicDealer
CraicDealer
Poem Published
13th Dec 2020 2:20am
13th Dec 2020 2:20am
what about this one
Just because your hair is short
don't mean you ain't no emily
there's talk you brought a bottle
to the fountain, they say Timoteì
but I know different
either way the youth you drank
still wears you
whatever it was you paid
don't mean you ain't no emily
there's talk you brought a bottle
to the fountain, they say Timoteì
but I know different
either way the youth you drank
still wears you
whatever it was you paid
#NoPoo
699 reads
17 Comments
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