Poems About Mental Health by Top Critiquers
#MentalHealth
Poems about mental health by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
PAR
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 1:21pm
13th Feb 2025 1:21pm
Hypertrichosis and cola
Phimosis,
cirrhosis or
osteoporosis,
however,
a nevermoredyingosis
is the main disease.
Bursitis,
sinusitis or
rhinitis,
just like that,
the completestupidititis
is the endemic disease.
cirrhosis or
osteoporosis,
however,
a nevermoredyingosis
is the main disease.
Bursitis,
sinusitis or
rhinitis,
just like that,
the completestupidititis
is the endemic disease.
#humankind
#illness
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth
#politics
85 reads
7 Comments
Ambjr
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 6:09pm
20th Feb 2025 6:09pm
one too many
hands brace against concrete walls
searchin for somethin solid
in a spinnin world
where streetlights melt
in late november rain
liquored up white lies
slide from a tongue gone numb
drippin like poison
as dawn ticks closer
and memory unravels
the bartender’s face
smears like watercolor
thru the bottom of my glass
measurin out oblivion
in four finger pours
while my phone buzzes
with promises I failed to keep
broken bottle self esteem
catchin glints of moonlight
in parkin lot...
searchin for somethin solid
in a spinnin world
where streetlights melt
in late november rain
liquored up white lies
slide from a tongue gone numb
drippin like poison
as dawn ticks closer
and memory unravels
the bartender’s face
smears like watercolor
thru the bottom of my glass
measurin out oblivion
in four finger pours
while my phone buzzes
with promises I failed to keep
broken bottle self esteem
catchin glints of moonlight
in parkin lot...
#addiction
#alcohol
#healing
#MentalHealth
#PersonalGrowth
224 reads
15 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 6:55am
21st Mar 2025 6:55am
Mary Jane
I like to date rape.
I don't need rope or tape.
Just a good friend,
That recommends a vape,
Instead of rolls.
Not sushi, but baked.
I like her eyes half open.
I feel masculine and safe.
She stumbles like her legs are broken.
Is this date rape?
She invited me over.
So it's definitely not fake.
Her legs are wide open.
She flows like a lake.
Mary Jane is who I'm groping.
She always wins the race.
The field is always open,
So let me out of the gate.
I like to date rape.
I don't...
I don't need rope or tape.
Just a good friend,
That recommends a vape,
Instead of rolls.
Not sushi, but baked.
I like her eyes half open.
I feel masculine and safe.
She stumbles like her legs are broken.
Is this date rape?
She invited me over.
So it's definitely not fake.
Her legs are wide open.
She flows like a lake.
Mary Jane is who I'm groping.
She always wins the race.
The field is always open,
So let me out of the gate.
I like to date rape.
I don't...
#addiction
#dirty
#MentalHealth #women
#MentalHealth #women
140 reads
5 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 10:06pm
1st Nov 2024 10:06pm
Whale Psychologist
One day...
When the boffins pull his carcass apart
they'll find a new species of syphilis
had acted as a stand in for his heart
even as it worked as a chrysalis
in syndication with his Adderall
to evolve neural function into venom
spat as demagoguery and Sharpie scrawl
never too far from his ogre frenum
routinely caught by photos, in a sneer,
or wide open cetacean blowhard hole
in all the ways lips can represent fear
and neuronal damage rigamarole;
too late to analyze when he is dead,
in lackey wake...and subsequent...
When the boffins pull his carcass apart
they'll find a new species of syphilis
had acted as a stand in for his heart
even as it worked as a chrysalis
in syndication with his Adderall
to evolve neural function into venom
spat as demagoguery and Sharpie scrawl
never too far from his ogre frenum
routinely caught by photos, in a sneer,
or wide open cetacean blowhard hole
in all the ways lips can represent fear
and neuronal damage rigamarole;
too late to analyze when he is dead,
in lackey wake...and subsequent...
#addiction
#hypocrisy
#MentalHealth
#politics
#violence
195 reads
10 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 00:51am
2nd Oct 2024 00:51am
The dog ate my therapy homework
The dog ate my therapy homework
He chewed it up into bits.
It was spiced with tears and bitter regret
and held all the secrets I’m scared I’ll forget
Now I’m doomed – and my dog has the shits.
The cat ate my therapy homework
She shredded the evidence.
The lessons it taught me were so hard-earned
I’ll mess up again if it isn’t returned
and no one will heed my defense.
My kids burned my therapy homework
They tore it up for kindling.
The progress I’ve made has gone up in smoke
One step up, three steps back, it’s really...
He chewed it up into bits.
It was spiced with tears and bitter regret
and held all the secrets I’m scared I’ll forget
Now I’m doomed – and my dog has the shits.
The cat ate my therapy homework
She shredded the evidence.
The lessons it taught me were so hard-earned
I’ll mess up again if it isn’t returned
and no one will heed my defense.
My kids burned my therapy homework
They tore it up for kindling.
The progress I’ve made has gone up in smoke
One step up, three steps back, it’s really...
#funny
#MentalHealth
#PersonalGrowth
310 reads
17 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
18th Sep 2018 11:24pm
18th Sep 2018 11:24pm
Unstability of the Dancing Illusions (Re-sub)
#SelfHarm
#MentalHealth
666 reads
6 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 6:17am
20th Aug 2024 6:17am
I Feel Sick
#emptiness
#depression
#MentalHealth #erotic
#MentalHealth #erotic
198 reads
10 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 2:36am
28th Jun 2024 2:36am
Aqua
no point to regrets
thrashing in a fetid swamp
swim in a clear pond
thrashing in a fetid swamp
swim in a clear pond
#MentalHealth
#MovingOn
157 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 00:38am
4th Oct 2024 00:38am
he says
couldn’t make it up the hill without
you holding my hand -
and it’s not about the state of my knees,
it’s about love ..
you holding my hand -
and it’s not about the state of my knees,
it’s about love ..
#wife
#aging
#illness #MentalHealth
#illness #MentalHealth
161 reads
6 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2024 4:44pm
22nd Aug 2024 4:44pm
voices
you're my grace when midnight calls
and I'm on the floor
reeling with delusions
you comfort me and make me laugh
you keep watch over me
when my mind is no longer my own
madness hurts I get frightened
my demons are terrors but they are my own
you love me no matter what
I know I come with a lot of spirits
you find yourself afraid too
but you still stand up for me
in my darkened states
you battle with me
I don't know what the point is
I hear full discussions in my head
between people who don't talk...
and I'm on the floor
reeling with delusions
you comfort me and make me laugh
you keep watch over me
when my mind is no longer my own
madness hurts I get frightened
my demons are terrors but they are my own
you love me no matter what
I know I come with a lot of spirits
you find yourself afraid too
but you still stand up for me
in my darkened states
you battle with me
I don't know what the point is
I hear full discussions in my head
between people who don't talk...
#dark
#MentalHealth
101 reads
7 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:15am
22nd Dec 2024 3:15am
The Iron Fist Of Absolute Control
be quiet
not a word
don’t dare
raise your voice
this is our
domain
we rule this
our way
you don’t
have a say
it don’t matter
if your right
i have the power
to put you down
my foot
has more weight
to stamp you
down hard
just know
your place
i’m watching you
every minute
waiting for
your mistakes
remember i’m perfect
your not
i only hear you
when I need too
your mine to control
feel as small
as you...
not a word
don’t dare
raise your voice
this is our
domain
we rule this
our way
you don’t
have a say
it don’t matter
if your right
i have the power
to put you down
my foot
has more weight
to stamp you
down hard
just know
your place
i’m watching you
every minute
waiting for
your mistakes
remember i’m perfect
your not
i only hear you
when I need too
your mine to control
feel as small
as you...
#abuse
#deception
#manipulation #MentalHealth
#manipulation #MentalHealth
163 reads
9 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 00:37am
3rd Apr 2025 00:37am
no, Google, I'm not suicidal
I googled
"what to do
when you've given up
on life"
and it gave me a list
of suicide hotlines
and articles on positive
mental health practices
I didn't know how
to explain to a search engine
that I'm not suicidal
I'm not looking for that kind of exit
I'm lost
I'm lonely
I'm aimless
Everything feels pointless
I've hit the edge of depression
and kept going into the abyss
instead of pulling back
like I was supposed to
I scroll through the...
"what to do
when you've given up
on life"
and it gave me a list
of suicide hotlines
and articles on positive
mental health practices
I didn't know how
to explain to a search engine
that I'm not suicidal
I'm not looking for that kind of exit
I'm lost
I'm lonely
I'm aimless
Everything feels pointless
I've hit the edge of depression
and kept going into the abyss
instead of pulling back
like I was supposed to
I scroll through the...
#depression
#despair
#emptiness #MentalHealth
#emptiness #MentalHealth
80 reads
14 Comments
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