Poems About Long Distance Relationships Seeking Honest Critique
#LongDistanceRelationship
Poems about long distance relationships seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Sep 2023 2:45pm
26th Sep 2023 2:45pm
I'm No Longer Okay With This
Even though I
do love you
with all my heart,
I'm no longer okay
with this one long distance
relationship and this
guy has decided to cut you loose.
do love you
with all my heart,
I'm no longer okay
with this one long distance
relationship and this
guy has decided to cut you loose.
#heartbroken
#romantic
#fiction
#dialogue
#LongDistanceRelationship
133 reads
2 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
25th Jul 2023 3:27pm
25th Jul 2023 3:27pm
Stay Away!
#BDSM
#LongDistanceRelationship
#passion
193 reads
2 Comments
Kewton_Magic1
KewtonMagic
KewtonMagic
Poem Published
5th Jul 2023 11:37pm
5th Jul 2023 11:37pm
Abyss of Love
I have never met her in person yet i fell head over heels for her. It sounds erratic, Right?
Yes....wondering why?
Because of the peculiarity of each of us in this world.
To many it can't make sense to even imagine how deep i dived into her and that's invincible.
I have never been so convinced by the depth of feelings until she arrived. In her I realised how sapiosexual i am, because I fell for her intellectual spills.
When she speaks, pardon me coz we never talk on calls or anything .... I mean what she writes flows like the great river Nile, Each and every word...
Yes....wondering why?
Because of the peculiarity of each of us in this world.
To many it can't make sense to even imagine how deep i dived into her and that's invincible.
I have never been so convinced by the depth of feelings until she arrived. In her I realised how sapiosexual i am, because I fell for her intellectual spills.
When she speaks, pardon me coz we never talk on calls or anything .... I mean what she writes flows like the great river Nile, Each and every word...
#love
#relationships
#lover
#FallingInLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
449 reads
3 Comments
A_Failed_Artist
Poem Published
5th Jul 2023 5:34am
5th Jul 2023 5:34am
Graveyard Love
I don’t have time to mess with ghosts
Throw a sheet over your head or stay underground
I’ve seen too many bodies fall before me
They never told me they were dying
Dear spirit, why do you look so pale?
Throw a sheet over your head or stay underground
I’ve seen too many bodies fall before me
They never told me they were dying
Dear spirit, why do you look so pale?
#heartbroken
#death
#ghosts #LongDistanceRelationship
#ghosts #LongDistanceRelationship
157 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2023 7:35am
2nd Jul 2023 7:35am
ORGASMIC BLISS
#love
#sex
#rhyming
#LongDistanceRelationship
#bittersweet
315 reads
2 Comments
Isgyppie_
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2023 6:12am
2nd Jul 2023 6:12am
XX
I miss you more
Than I can bear to feel.
Than I can bear to feel.
#love
#LongDistanceRelationship
#PopCulture
227 reads
0 Comments
Isgyppie_
Poem Published
2nd Jun 2023 7:57am
2nd Jun 2023 7:57am
If I Could I Would Fly to You
The rain is falling
On the cabins roof
A staccato rhythm
of a scattered melody
Playing the song
That my heart composes
When I think of you
The upbeat ting
Of precipitation on tin
Like our body’s colliding
When we meet again
The sound
Of water sinking into soil
Absorbing, like me into your arms
The somber tone of
Heavy drops falling on a
On a Luna Moth’s wing
If I could I would fly to you
On the cabins roof
A staccato rhythm
of a scattered melody
Playing the song
That my heart composes
When I think of you
The upbeat ting
Of precipitation on tin
Like our body’s colliding
When we meet again
The sound
Of water sinking into soil
Absorbing, like me into your arms
The somber tone of
Heavy drops falling on a
On a Luna Moth’s wing
If I could I would fly to you
#love
#rain
#LongDistanceRelationship
281 reads
4 Comments
eljustignoreyou
John Daliva
John Daliva
Poem Published
9th May 2023 10:57am
9th May 2023 10:57am
Distant Feeling
How I long for the days when our world was never hindered,
when our voices were the only things that were revered.
How I dream of our time alone,
As it feels being together is far gone.
How I wish we could go back,
To our yesterday as if we never unpacked.
How I sometimes grow tired of waking,
In a bed alone with my heart beating.
How I succumb to tears to days of distance
As I reminisce about your embrace in abundance.
Despite the buts and ifs
Spellbound in time you and I lifts,
Days of sorrow will pass I am certain,
In...
when our voices were the only things that were revered.
How I dream of our time alone,
As it feels being together is far gone.
How I wish we could go back,
To our yesterday as if we never unpacked.
How I sometimes grow tired of waking,
In a bed alone with my heart beating.
How I succumb to tears to days of distance
As I reminisce about your embrace in abundance.
Despite the buts and ifs
Spellbound in time you and I lifts,
Days of sorrow will pass I am certain,
In...
#strength
#hope
#faith
#LongDistanceRelationship
#admiration
231 reads
1 Comment
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
7th May 2023 8:47am
7th May 2023 8:47am
TAKE UP MY OFFER
#love
#grief
#sex
#rhyming
#LongDistanceRelationship
237 reads
1 Comment
Naajir
Poem Published
7th Apr 2023 6:59am
7th Apr 2023 6:59am
The Fourth Wall
her sex was always
there like a voyeuristic siren lingering
as a perpetual undercurrent
riding carrier waves between casual conversations
always tempting the movement of
her tongue
he had specific plans for her
he wanted her painted in a certain way
to be receptive to this avalanche of unspoken literature
burgeoning...in need of burrowing
so..a little deeper he knew he would have to go ...
there like a voyeuristic siren lingering
as a perpetual undercurrent
riding carrier waves between casual conversations
always tempting the movement of
her tongue
he had specific plans for her
he wanted her painted in a certain way
to be receptive to this avalanche of unspoken literature
burgeoning...in need of burrowing
so..a little deeper he knew he would have to go ...
#sex
#lover
#LongDistanceRelationship #metaphor
#LongDistanceRelationship #metaphor
509 reads
3 Comments
Isgyppie_
Poem Published
6th Apr 2023 9:47pm
6th Apr 2023 9:47pm
Trade My Dreams for Insomnia
My body shifts
Every few minutes
As my mind incessantly
Stirs the irony
Of my upcoming reality
You’ve been asleep for hours
And haven’t noticed my soft
Touch, followed by a
quiet withdraw
lingering feelings that send
Me into deep thought
In a dark room
Hot, with the fan on
Hot with your rhythmic
Breathe on my neck
And I wish I could freeze time
But instead I turn my body
Face down; Down
Soaking in welled up tears
Disdain for the wit of life
Somewhere I...
Every few minutes
As my mind incessantly
Stirs the irony
Of my upcoming reality
You’ve been asleep for hours
And haven’t noticed my soft
Touch, followed by a
quiet withdraw
lingering feelings that send
Me into deep thought
In a dark room
Hot, with the fan on
Hot with your rhythmic
Breathe on my neck
And I wish I could freeze time
But instead I turn my body
Face down; Down
Soaking in welled up tears
Disdain for the wit of life
Somewhere I...
#love
#dreams
#insomnia #LongDistanceRelationship
#insomnia #LongDistanceRelationship
428 reads
4 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
31st Mar 2023 2:20pm
31st Mar 2023 2:20pm
Heart Bridge
Distance between us
does nothing to diminish the love that bonds us
The words that connect us
flow freely across space
feeding the flame within the shared soul that unites us
does nothing to diminish the love that bonds us
The words that connect us
flow freely across space
feeding the flame within the shared soul that unites us
#ILoveYou
#spiritual
#LongDistanceRelationship
543 reads
1 Comment
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