Poems About a Life Changing Moment Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about a life changing moment seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Time
Taxi’s, Twitter and Trauma
Are the words of my week I’m afraid
Thank god for time and humanity
For where would we be without them?
Time is always of the essence
And without humanity what am I?
Profound and enlightening experiences
Are what I can summise
Life goes along, a bird sings her song
And what can be for the rest?
One can never know as the world will still go
Until the end of time as we know it.
Are the words of my week I’m afraid
Thank god for time and humanity
For where would we be without them?
Time is always of the essence
And without humanity what am I?
Profound and enlightening experiences
Are what I can summise
Life goes along, a bird sings her song
And what can be for the rest?
One can never know as the world will still go
Until the end of time as we know it.
#suicide
#TruthOfLife
#LifeChangingMoment
#TimeHeals
#philosophical
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We Just Learn To Breed What Fills The Soul Beyond Measure
Demise deviates from its route
When life clings to its smile
And love springs from its root
When the soul deluged by the Majestic Nile
*****
Pain is the pulse that shall not wane
Sight and super powers we derive
One of the signs one still sane
And the flames aglow and alive
*****
End not your world for a word
And feed not what cannot be fed
A word wraps a state while a whole is the world
Souls of Light have Love to nourish and spread
*****
How vain to confine the sight to a favourite...
When life clings to its smile
And love springs from its root
When the soul deluged by the Majestic Nile
*****
Pain is the pulse that shall not wane
Sight and super powers we derive
One of the signs one still sane
And the flames aglow and alive
*****
End not your world for a word
And feed not what cannot be fed
A word wraps a state while a whole is the world
Souls of Light have Love to nourish and spread
*****
How vain to confine the sight to a favourite...
#spiritual
#LifeChangingMoment
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
#wisdom
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8 Comments
The Magic Of Words
It's an undeniable truth
That words can
have a magical feel
Words are what
makes something real
I once had no voice but
It wasn't by choice
I held everything closely inside
Then I discovered there
was freedom in writing
God bless the poets
and those
who write songs
They know the meaning
of true wonderment
That words can
have a magical feel
Words are what
makes something real
I once had no voice but
It wasn't by choice
I held everything closely inside
Then I discovered there
was freedom in writing
God bless the poets
and those
who write songs
They know the meaning
of true wonderment
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeChangingMoment
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19 Comments
I'm Still Healing
I'm trying hard to be
The best me I can be
Have a little empathy for me
I have so many scars
Due to my tumultuous past
I'm still healing from my
Caretakers misdeeds
It's taken me so long
To learn to love myself as I am
To truly believe I am enough
But now I know I can
Life has never been easy
I just go with the flow now
Please don't criticize me
I'm taking baby steps
To get where I was meant to be
My progress is rather slow
But it moves so steadily
I may have a long way to go
Just...
The best me I can be
Have a little empathy for me
I have so many scars
Due to my tumultuous past
I'm still healing from my
Caretakers misdeeds
It's taken me so long
To learn to love myself as I am
To truly believe I am enough
But now I know I can
Life has never been easy
I just go with the flow now
Please don't criticize me
I'm taking baby steps
To get where I was meant to be
My progress is rather slow
But it moves so steadily
I may have a long way to go
Just...
#hope
#LifeChangingMoment
#healing
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Heart Craves Home
Silently, a girl is reading,
how to love and how to serve,
is her heart profoundly bleeding?
Surely, she has a nerve.
Her vision is floating
above castles of light,
covering in overcoating
her heart against the dark.
Shields aren't effective,
compared to the Agni Fire,
pain is still infective
underneath illusions dire.
She reads of karma's ways.
The insight, hovering, lands
on her head, a victorious day,
let Agni burn deceptive plans.
A time of trial has commenced.
A silent test...
how to love and how to serve,
is her heart profoundly bleeding?
Surely, she has a nerve.
Her vision is floating
above castles of light,
covering in overcoating
her heart against the dark.
Shields aren't effective,
compared to the Agni Fire,
pain is still infective
underneath illusions dire.
She reads of karma's ways.
The insight, hovering, lands
on her head, a victorious day,
let Agni burn deceptive plans.
A time of trial has commenced.
A silent test...
#love
#God
#Christian
#LifeChangingMoment
#SelfDiscovery
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A Comforting Inevitability (2024)
The sun rises beyond its normal horizon —
from this point on are all things changed
a switched journey is inked in the upper house
since missing truths have merely been mislaid
a sense of new order emerges with increasing frequency
as patterns of deliberation give way to a singular path
the new base-line points to a tropic of conversion
with questions answered before even asked
in the final analysis one moves beyond looking back concerned
and looks forward with a kind of anticipating TLC
where, of all the many futures...
from this point on are all things changed
a switched journey is inked in the upper house
since missing truths have merely been mislaid
a sense of new order emerges with increasing frequency
as patterns of deliberation give way to a singular path
the new base-line points to a tropic of conversion
with questions answered before even asked
in the final analysis one moves beyond looking back concerned
and looks forward with a kind of anticipating TLC
where, of all the many futures...
#spiritual
#LifeChangingMoment
#SelfReflection
85 reads
6 Comments
A Kiss at the Circus of Horrors
Two men, painted in oil on canvas
are under the striped canvas.
Amidst the crowd of curious eyes
in the circus of horrors
where normality is challenged.
Their lips touch, soft and bold,
like a secret shared in the shadows,
they challenge conventions, break chains.
While watched with fascination and buzz.
Simple natural men, their bodies sculpted
they bow towards each other, like flowers in the sun.
Expressions of joy and pleasure on faces
as if the outside world faded away
and only love remained.
The...
are under the striped canvas.
Amidst the crowd of curious eyes
in the circus of horrors
where normality is challenged.
Their lips touch, soft and bold,
like a secret shared in the shadows,
they challenge conventions, break chains.
While watched with fascination and buzz.
Simple natural men, their bodies sculpted
they bow towards each other, like flowers in the sun.
Expressions of joy and pleasure on faces
as if the outside world faded away
and only love remained.
The...
#love
#men
#mirror
#LifeChangingMoment
#passion
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The Train Kept A Rollin
A teenage girl somewhere anywhere was busy text messaging friends on her cell phone a month ago.
She was walking along a set of railroad tracks.
Although deaf since birth, she had frequently proclaimed that she could avoid danger more easily then hearing people.
She was much more sensitive to vibrations, especially from approaching trains and those roaring train whistles.
She was wrong.
She was mangled beyond recognition.
They were able to identify the body, since her i-phone survived the collision.
She was walking along a set of railroad tracks.
Although deaf since birth, she had frequently proclaimed that she could avoid danger more easily then hearing people.
She was much more sensitive to vibrations, especially from approaching trains and those roaring train whistles.
She was wrong.
She was mangled beyond recognition.
They were able to identify the body, since her i-phone survived the collision.
#technology
#motivational
#LifeChangingMoment
#tragedy
#trains
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a delicate balance
Talent is God-given: be humble. Fame is man-given: be grateful.
Conceit is self-given: be careful."―John Wooden
all's not fair in love and war;
each may leave a deadly scar.
even Christ, upon the Cross,
suffered, for His love, great loss.
tread with care in right and wrong;
you may sing a different song,
if the confidence you boast
finds you sleeping at your post.
let loud laughter and soft tears
never find you in arrears;
celebrate with those who joy,
shed a tear with those who cry....
Conceit is self-given: be careful."―John Wooden
all's not fair in love and war;
each may leave a deadly scar.
even Christ, upon the Cross,
suffered, for His love, great loss.
tread with care in right and wrong;
you may sing a different song,
if the confidence you boast
finds you sleeping at your post.
let loud laughter and soft tears
never find you in arrears;
celebrate with those who joy,
shed a tear with those who cry....
#kindness
#fate
#LifeChangingMoment
#wisdom
#choices
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0 Comments
Rooster Rhyming Rhetoric
One summer I was in my pool when a rooster arrived
Two doors down he would crow with pride
In my town, it's illegal to own
Constantly crowing, I picked up the phone
Authorities came, the owner was fined
Situation continued, nothing rectified
Endless noise throughout the year
How much more will I need to hear?
Every morning he woke me up around five
One day I paid a visit, shot him, and he died
Two doors down he would crow with pride
In my town, it's illegal to own
Constantly crowing, I picked up the phone
Authorities came, the owner was fined
Situation continued, nothing rectified
Endless noise throughout the year
How much more will I need to hear?
Every morning he woke me up around five
One day I paid a visit, shot him, and he died
#home
#birds
#rhyming
#LifeChangingMoment
#frustration
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The Charms Of The Word My Heart Smite
Time in dry seasons seems loose
And heavy are the steps to wherever they tread
Such is the soul when gloom trying to shed
Retaining of beauty that I fear to lose.
*****
I hold my pain and just want to write
Caught by my pen versing in rhyme
The charms of the word my heart smite
And the world around melts out of time.
*****
The thoughts in my head cease not to mime
Striving to seek peace and quietude
My feelings how they aspire to feed my clime
Unwilling to drip despair or to agony allude.
*****
The words on papers...
And heavy are the steps to wherever they tread
Such is the soul when gloom trying to shed
Retaining of beauty that I fear to lose.
*****
I hold my pain and just want to write
Caught by my pen versing in rhyme
The charms of the word my heart smite
And the world around melts out of time.
*****
The thoughts in my head cease not to mime
Striving to seek peace and quietude
My feelings how they aspire to feed my clime
Unwilling to drip despair or to agony allude.
*****
The words on papers...
#TruthOfLife
#LifeChangingMoment
#WritingPoetry #SelfReflection
#WritingPoetry #SelfReflection
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A Bond Of A Human Touch
Smile is not just my name
It is a bond of a human touch
The mime of my very heart
The language of my whole
It is my shield behind I hide
Never did it fail to win its fights.
*****
“Abhor and hate”, their mention I don’t even rate
To God my gratitude they are erased from my human traits
And so many a word like “foe”
Fell into oblivion as I no longer know
Love I do not preach to humans souls reach
Love in all my tenses my motto and the breath I breathe.
*****
For wrong and right no right I have to judge
Just I try to...
It is a bond of a human touch
The mime of my very heart
The language of my whole
It is my shield behind I hide
Never did it fail to win its fights.
*****
“Abhor and hate”, their mention I don’t even rate
To God my gratitude they are erased from my human traits
And so many a word like “foe”
Fell into oblivion as I no longer know
Love I do not preach to humans souls reach
Love in all my tenses my motto and the breath I breathe.
*****
For wrong and right no right I have to judge
Just I try to...
#relationships
#spiritual
#LifeChangingMoment
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
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DU Poetry : Poems About a Life Changing Moment Seeking Honest Critique