Im Sorry by Top Critiquers Poems
#ImSorry
im sorry by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2022 10:08pm
23rd Jun 2022 10:08pm
i miss you
i miss you today
the day stretch out and I couldn't find you
inside my solemn soul I ache for your tenderness
a caress on my face
or something more intimate
my sorrow spoke of hurt, I hurt you
I tell myself it's better that way
that my thoughts of you are unrealistic
my foolish heart cries for what it can't have
unreachable truth I just miss your presence
I want to touch you in your solace
where I am enough
your heart's desire
but that is foolish
no one person can assuage a feeling of need so deep
I...
the day stretch out and I couldn't find you
inside my solemn soul I ache for your tenderness
a caress on my face
or something more intimate
my sorrow spoke of hurt, I hurt you
I tell myself it's better that way
that my thoughts of you are unrealistic
my foolish heart cries for what it can't have
unreachable truth I just miss your presence
I want to touch you in your solace
where I am enough
your heart's desire
but that is foolish
no one person can assuage a feeling of need so deep
I...
#love
#ImSorry
509 reads
11 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
31st Aug 2022 12:24pm
31st Aug 2022 12:24pm
For The Love Of Lucille
She is a pretty, pretty girl
Adored by all the neighborhood boys
She's a very tricky child
Living in her own chaotic world
She's got a bag full of tricks
Because it goes like this
She gets what she wants
Letting nothing stand in her way
Just when you think you know
What card she's gonna play
It ends up with the tables
Always turning her way
She'll ask you to
Give her everything you own
You can tell her to go away
She'll tell you she's here to stay ...
Adored by all the neighborhood boys
She's a very tricky child
Living in her own chaotic world
She's got a bag full of tricks
Because it goes like this
She gets what she wants
Letting nothing stand in her way
Just when you think you know
What card she's gonna play
It ends up with the tables
Always turning her way
She'll ask you to
Give her everything you own
You can tell her to go away
She'll tell you she's here to stay ...
#ImSorry
#prison
#FeelingLost
450 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
20th Aug 2023 11:55am
20th Aug 2023 11:55am
Redemption and a Cup of Tea - Apologizing Publicly
Yeah
I made a mistake
Bad one too
I'm sorry
I offended a member
Something I wrote as a comment
She then blocked me
I deserve the block
I'm hoping I can redeem myself
I made a mistake
Bad one too
I'm sorry
I offended a member
Something I wrote as a comment
She then blocked me
I deserve the block
I'm hoping I can redeem myself
#regret
#ImSorry
#LifeCycle #disappointment
#LifeCycle #disappointment
264 reads
wallyroo92
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 6:36pm
7th Apr 2024 6:36pm
Corporate Shenanigans
It’s an upsetting thing looking back it now
I thought I was just doing my job
But those of us who worked in subprime lending
We were part of that predatory mob
I had access to so many files
But I was just a paper pusher in those days
Get it from one reviewer and then out to another
I never really questioned every bonus or raise
It was a like a freight train on speed
Eventually the steam for the company ran out
And there I was, jobless for a while
Unsure of how all of that came about
Later on as the entire world went...
I thought I was just doing my job
But those of us who worked in subprime lending
We were part of that predatory mob
I had access to so many files
But I was just a paper pusher in those days
Get it from one reviewer and then out to another
I never really questioned every bonus or raise
It was a like a freight train on speed
Eventually the steam for the company ran out
And there I was, jobless for a while
Unsure of how all of that came about
Later on as the entire world went...
#regret
#ImSorry
#humankind #job
#humankind #job
52 reads
1 Comment
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
18th Feb 2024 5:38pm
18th Feb 2024 5:38pm
Quandary of silence
Oh! Wait...
Is it over?
Did I miss a line?
Did you?
I didn't hear anyone call "scene"
or see the curtain drop,
but I'm standing in the dark
wondering
what comes next.
---
Are you still here,
or is that just your ghost?
---
What do I say now?
Prompter, please!
I wanted to know how this story ends.
but...
If it's already over, ...
Is it over?
Did I miss a line?
Did you?
I didn't hear anyone call "scene"
or see the curtain drop,
but I'm standing in the dark
wondering
what comes next.
---
Are you still here,
or is that just your ghost?
---
What do I say now?
Prompter, please!
I wanted to know how this story ends.
but...
If it's already over, ...
#ImSorry
#friendship
#confusion
#MovingOn
#acceptance
164 reads
12 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
20th Mar 2023 3:44pm
20th Mar 2023 3:44pm
Rae of Sunshine
The universe tilts on its axis,
access to your heart is a privilege.
Edge of the eclipse
glimpses into your soul.
Control your wild emotions.
Oceans I would drown in.
Sin of me, sad of you.
Through better or the worst of it
fit yourself into the nook of my heart.
Start to see your value.
access to your heart is a privilege.
Edge of the eclipse
glimpses into your soul.
Control your wild emotions.
Oceans I would drown in.
Sin of me, sad of you.
Through better or the worst of it
fit yourself into the nook of my heart.
Start to see your value.
#love
#BestFriend
#ImSorry
25 reads
16 Comments
PencilScribbles
Scribbles
Scribbles
Poem Published
13th Oct 2020 4:04am
13th Oct 2020 4:04am
Go Ahead, Make Me
Go ahead,
make me cry again.
Hundreds of miles away, I cry.
I said your name, I cried.
I tried to explain, I cried.
Years away and I cry.
How far do I have to run
to outrun the memories of you?
How far until the compulsion to talk about "a friend I once knew" doesn't hurt like a stab in my heart?
How many band-aids do I have to find,
only to painfully rip them off?
No one will ever be you!
Some scars only look healed. ...
make me cry again.
Hundreds of miles away, I cry.
I said your name, I cried.
I tried to explain, I cried.
Years away and I cry.
How far do I have to run
to outrun the memories of you?
How far until the compulsion to talk about "a friend I once knew" doesn't hurt like a stab in my heart?
How many band-aids do I have to find,
only to painfully rip them off?
No one will ever be you!
Some scars only look healed. ...
#love
#regret
#ImSorry
#friendship
#disappointment
216 reads
14 Comments
moony_
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 10:16pm
22nd Feb 2024 10:16pm
The Hurting Kind
I wish I didn’t have to hurt you
To escape the way you hurt me
But the world will keep spinning
I wish you all the best
To escape the way you hurt me
But the world will keep spinning
I wish you all the best
#ImSorry
#oppression
#inequality
95 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
5th Jun 2023 00:24am
5th Jun 2023 00:24am
Rochester
trying to climb the winding, uneven, positively medieval stone steps that led up through the dark interior of the castle, with two (too)
unreliable legs and a walking stick,
plus my wife and a pregnant daughter in law in tow, probably wasn’t my best idea, he says ..
unreliable legs and a walking stick,
plus my wife and a pregnant daughter in law in tow, probably wasn’t my best idea, he says ..
#ImSorry
106 reads
0 Comments
3rdEYErising
Poem Published
18th Nov 2023 5:08am
18th Nov 2023 5:08am
Guilted
his whole intention
all along was to always bully me
with proposition after
dirty proposition
until i was positioned
right where he wanted me
pinned with no place to go
hogging up my space
with his domineering presence
selfishly sucking up my air..my thoughts
my moods..my moisture
aggressive as fuck
possessive..proactive
he saw my responses in advance
then acted on each one of them accordingly
preyed on them like a hawk
perched over my entire being
...
all along was to always bully me
with proposition after
dirty proposition
until i was positioned
right where he wanted me
pinned with no place to go
hogging up my space
with his domineering presence
selfishly sucking up my air..my thoughts
my moods..my moisture
aggressive as fuck
possessive..proactive
he saw my responses in advance
then acted on each one of them accordingly
preyed on them like a hawk
perched over my entire being
...
#ImSorry
#BDSM
#lover #dirty
#lover #dirty
380 reads
14 Comments
Diaryofabasketcase
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 7:46pm
17th Apr 2024 7:46pm
Forgotten
I’m drinking on a Wednesday
And it isn’t even noon
I try to make the hurt go away
Want to fly over the moon
Each morning when I wake up
This shit starts up again
When the hurting stop?
When will this torture end?
When will I forget what you did?
Replay it all the time
Betrayal that I guess I earned
Deserved it for the lies
Karma found its way to me
And now I have to pay
Pay the price for evil deeds
I pay it every day
I know that I don’t deserve you
Or all you put me through
I...
And it isn’t even noon
I try to make the hurt go away
Want to fly over the moon
Each morning when I wake up
This shit starts up again
When the hurting stop?
When will this torture end?
When will I forget what you did?
Replay it all the time
Betrayal that I guess I earned
Deserved it for the lies
Karma found its way to me
And now I have to pay
Pay the price for evil deeds
I pay it every day
I know that I don’t deserve you
Or all you put me through
I...
#betrayal
#conflict
#heartbroken
#ImSorry
#sadness
21 reads
0 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
14th Oct 2019 6:59am
14th Oct 2019 6:59am
I am what I hate
my apologies to those who saw my bully this poem
a lady poetess was openly insulted in comment on one of her poems
I openly spoke out against her foul treatment
I was then insulted and challenged what was I going to do about it
so I wrote this person a poem
it was vicious
I know you were probably taken aback by my dark rage
I usually control it
but I was hurt on this ladies account
putting myself in her shoes
no it wasn't my place
I should have handled things better
and just reported the offending comment as abusive ...
a lady poetess was openly insulted in comment on one of her poems
I openly spoke out against her foul treatment
I was then insulted and challenged what was I going to do about it
so I wrote this person a poem
it was vicious
I know you were probably taken aback by my dark rage
I usually control it
but I was hurt on this ladies account
putting myself in her shoes
no it wasn't my place
I should have handled things better
and just reported the offending comment as abusive ...
#love
#regret
#ImSorry #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#ImSorry #DeepUndergroundPoetry
437 reads
7 Comments
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