I Love You by Top Critiquers Poems
#ILoveYou
i love you by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 00:14am
14th Sep 2024 00:14am
the pictures
went to the cinema this
afternoon, there were two others
in the auditorium
besides us, so four in all
‘of a certain age’.
it was great; no eating or slurping
or talking, just watching
a film
could come out of this,
or a poem ..
afternoon, there were two others
in the auditorium
besides us, so four in all
‘of a certain age’.
it was great; no eating or slurping
or talking, just watching
a film
could come out of this,
or a poem ..
#ILoveYou
133 reads
7 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
4th Oct 2017 3:22am
4th Oct 2017 3:22am
Twisted Highway
How did we end up where we are
thinking only of the past nothing for tomorrow
as if how we used to be is the only way
to get back all and be together
are our tears of sorrow
bandages of what we know
to hurt within our body and soul
to love apart yet live with each other
it’s easy for you to rest and slumber
for me each heartbeat without you is a knife
that seems to stab me every time I want to remember
that living without you is my lot in life
it’s the twists and turns of our fate
to love apart to be near and...
thinking only of the past nothing for tomorrow
as if how we used to be is the only way
to get back all and be together
are our tears of sorrow
bandages of what we know
to hurt within our body and soul
to love apart yet live with each other
it’s easy for you to rest and slumber
for me each heartbeat without you is a knife
that seems to stab me every time I want to remember
that living without you is my lot in life
it’s the twists and turns of our fate
to love apart to be near and...
#love
#ILoveYou
#IMissYou
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
946 reads
12 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
24th Mar 2020 2:39am
24th Mar 2020 2:39am
Goodnight My Love
#sexy
#passion
#ILoveYou #lover
#ILoveYou #lover
1132 reads
5 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
13th May 2021 3:03pm
13th May 2021 3:03pm
After
Kiss me in the afterglow
Of passions throes
Slick, sleek, and wet
Of love wrought sweat
Churned from frothy lust in ardent gasps
Words rent from delicious kisses with panting rasps
Time standing still, out of focus, musky and torrid
As we lay achingly entwined and florid
You softly melded into the melt of me
Left of the fire of your love set free
Your hair damp ringlets on my chest
My hand still longing upon your breast
Just let me breath you in
My love and favorite sin
And kiss you again
And more hungerly, again
Of passions throes
Slick, sleek, and wet
Of love wrought sweat
Churned from frothy lust in ardent gasps
Words rent from delicious kisses with panting rasps
Time standing still, out of focus, musky and torrid
As we lay achingly entwined and florid
You softly melded into the melt of me
Left of the fire of your love set free
Your hair damp ringlets on my chest
My hand still longing upon your breast
Just let me breath you in
My love and favorite sin
And kiss you again
And more hungerly, again
#love
#lust
#ILoveYou #passion
#ILoveYou #passion
535 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2022 1:37am
3rd Dec 2022 1:37am
rules of engagement
god, I'm hurting
I want to tell you I love you
but it's against the rules
we don't do that
it's inconsiderate to be so forward
I know you love me
you've told me so
but you don't want those words from me
perhaps it would hurt too much
I'm taken and I wouldn't fit in your world
you like sampling my world
but you don't want to cross over
into the madness that is me
so I keen in the dark
I weep I'm not enough
I cry I'm too much
it hurts down deep
my lips whisper I love you
I'm...
I want to tell you I love you
but it's against the rules
we don't do that
it's inconsiderate to be so forward
I know you love me
you've told me so
but you don't want those words from me
perhaps it would hurt too much
I'm taken and I wouldn't fit in your world
you like sampling my world
but you don't want to cross over
into the madness that is me
so I keen in the dark
I weep I'm not enough
I cry I'm too much
it hurts down deep
my lips whisper I love you
I'm...
#love
#ILoveYou
447 reads
4 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
24th Dec 2021 9:44pm
24th Dec 2021 9:44pm
Happiness Is the New
Happiness Is the New
In a world
So jaded
Through
And through,
A smile
Is looking
Good
On you.
When hot
Is when
The gauge
Turns dexy,
Happy
Then
Is the new
Sexy.
In a world
So jaded
Through
And through,
A smile
Is looking
Good
On you.
When hot
Is when
The gauge
Turns dexy,
Happy
Then
Is the new
Sexy.
#happiness
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#crush
#obsession
606 reads
2 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
19th Aug 2018 8:04pm
19th Aug 2018 8:04pm
Love Me Til Tomorrow
Wrap me in your comfort
Let me melt inside your eyes
Kiss away my salty tears
Embrace me where you lie
Undress me with your passion
Sooth me with your song
Tease me with your tenderness
Drive me crazy all night long
Be my pillow when I need one
Blanket me with your loving care
Cradle me in your arms of satin
Be the answer to my prayer
Hold me close, I hear your heart beat
Drink me in for I'm right here
Lay with me on a bed a pleasure
Letting our worries just disappear
Love me til...
Let me melt inside your eyes
Kiss away my salty tears
Embrace me where you lie
Undress me with your passion
Sooth me with your song
Tease me with your tenderness
Drive me crazy all night long
Be my pillow when I need one
Blanket me with your loving care
Cradle me in your arms of satin
Be the answer to my prayer
Hold me close, I hear your heart beat
Drink me in for I'm right here
Lay with me on a bed a pleasure
Letting our worries just disappear
Love me til...
#love
#ILoveYou
684 reads
10 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
12th Jun 2021 7:15pm
12th Jun 2021 7:15pm
Her Beautiful Soul
Her Beautiful Soul
Why is it that I can’t help but kiss your nose?
I love it when you crinkle it in seriousness.
And how can I not nibble on your adorable ears?
Your cheeks beg for my lips to kiss them gently.
Your eyes sparkle and shine straight into my soul,
Illuminating it with the warmth of your heart.
How is it that your touch feels unlike any other?
Your skin has a magnetism, from which I cannot resist.
And your mind, is a crown jewel, that which makes you who you are,
Is nothing short of magical and breathtaking.
You...
Why is it that I can’t help but kiss your nose?
I love it when you crinkle it in seriousness.
And how can I not nibble on your adorable ears?
Your cheeks beg for my lips to kiss them gently.
Your eyes sparkle and shine straight into my soul,
Illuminating it with the warmth of your heart.
How is it that your touch feels unlike any other?
Your skin has a magnetism, from which I cannot resist.
And your mind, is a crown jewel, that which makes you who you are,
Is nothing short of magical and breathtaking.
You...
#romantic
#ILoveYou
917 reads
9 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 6:28pm
13th Jan 2025 6:28pm
Full Moon ín Love
Once in a month I cry for your love
Without words but loud and clear
Don't look around you, I'm not here
Find me high in the sky above
Sometimes I reach out for you
My moonbeam fingers stroke your fur
Until almost like a cat you purr
And I feel that you love me too
Protected by the velvety night
I kiss you soft and tender
Caress you with my splendor
Your yellow eyes reflect my light
Tonight you'll throw back your head
And howl a sweet melody to me
I blush with delight can you see
My moon face is...
Without words but loud and clear
Don't look around you, I'm not here
Find me high in the sky above
Sometimes I reach out for you
My moonbeam fingers stroke your fur
Until almost like a cat you purr
And I feel that you love me too
Protected by the velvety night
I kiss you soft and tender
Caress you with my splendor
Your yellow eyes reflect my light
Tonight you'll throw back your head
And howl a sweet melody to me
I blush with delight can you see
My moon face is...
#beauty
#ILoveYou
177 reads
8 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 3:53pm
9th Apr 2024 3:53pm
Compunction
09 /30
Compunction
After more than two --
years of promise
You left with out
a word –
Sorry, a sentence
from Your best
Friend
i never saw it coming!
Flattened my face
a pancaked
stupor
the melting butter felt
very much like the
acidic apple cider
VINEGAR.
I know You don’t want
want to talk about
Happenstance
what happened
and yet,
we share love-related
memes on Facebook
daily
My major Hope is that
You KNOW /...
Compunction
After more than two --
years of promise
You left with out
a word –
Sorry, a sentence
from Your best
Friend
i never saw it coming!
Flattened my face
a pancaked
stupor
the melting butter felt
very much like the
acidic apple cider
VINEGAR.
I know You don’t want
want to talk about
Happenstance
what happened
and yet,
we share love-related
memes on Facebook
daily
My major Hope is that
You KNOW /...
#sadness
#hope
#ILoveYou #NaPoWriMo2024
#ILoveYou #NaPoWriMo2024
226 reads
1 Comment
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
21st Jan 2020 9:50pm
21st Jan 2020 9:50pm
YOU
I give my heart that only pairs to you
A shape no other can compare to you
that flows to glossy banks that lead to you
Illumination that only shines for you
Rainbows arch to open hidden treasure for you
Raindrops that shower's my fondness to you
Distance is irrelevant when thinking of you
Nothing will change my mind about you
My love is only destined for you
In times resting I patiently wait for you
My attached words that say and is true
"SWEETHEART, I LOVE YOU"... ❤
A shape no other can compare to you
that flows to glossy banks that lead to you
Illumination that only shines for you
Rainbows arch to open hidden treasure for you
Raindrops that shower's my fondness to you
Distance is irrelevant when thinking of you
Nothing will change my mind about you
My love is only destined for you
In times resting I patiently wait for you
My attached words that say and is true
"SWEETHEART, I LOVE YOU"... ❤
#love
#relationships
#ILoveYou
#ValentinesDay
#LongDistanceRelationship
911 reads
15 Comments
MYSTERIOUS_GIRL
Lizzy_3164
Lizzy_3164
Poem Published
27th Feb 2023 7:37pm
27th Feb 2023 7:37pm
THE BLESSING OF THE HANDS
RYAN & IZEL
Please face each other
and TAKE EACH OTHER'S HANDS,
so that you may see the gift
that they are to you.
THESE ARE THE HANDS
of your best friend,
Young and strong and full of love for you.
THESE ARE THE HANDS
that are holding yours on your wedding
day as you promise each other
love each other today, tomorrow and forever.
THESE ARE THE HANDS
that will work alongside yours
as together you build your future.
THESE ARE THE HANDS
that will passionately love you
and...
Please face each other
and TAKE EACH OTHER'S HANDS,
so that you may see the gift
that they are to you.
THESE ARE THE HANDS
of your best friend,
Young and strong and full of love for you.
THESE ARE THE HANDS
that are holding yours on your wedding
day as you promise each other
love each other today, tomorrow and forever.
THESE ARE THE HANDS
that will work alongside yours
as together you build your future.
THESE ARE THE HANDS
that will passionately love you
and...
#relationships
#marriage
#romantic #ILoveYou
#romantic #ILoveYou
405 reads
1 Comment
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