Christian Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Christian seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
One Voice
Reaching across this void
On the other side of a reality
Fractures in our perspectives
Brokenness from different points of view
Learning to see eye to eye
In this world of sight that is our blindness
The fight of faith is trained in these trials
As we sojourn on in this world of pain and prolonged miles
Mountains protrude and boast of their glory
But this is just the beginning of your recovery story
What the enemy intends for evil, God will turn to a testimony of truth
He is not the author of the affliction but a...
On the other side of a reality
Fractures in our perspectives
Brokenness from different points of view
Learning to see eye to eye
In this world of sight that is our blindness
The fight of faith is trained in these trials
As we sojourn on in this world of pain and prolonged miles
Mountains protrude and boast of their glory
But this is just the beginning of your recovery story
What the enemy intends for evil, God will turn to a testimony of truth
He is not the author of the affliction but a...
#love
#Christian
#spiritual
#healing
#cancer
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For Christ’s Sake
How do we define this?
One man’s law is another man’s virtue
What’s the matter of our preference
What’s a matter of our politics
Where does it collide on the tracks?
Ethics and morality versus the philosophy of our own well being
Our comforts are megaphones for lies when indulgence takes the cake
Are we living for ourselves or does our worship embody our values for Christ’s sake?
Lost for the weight of issues what do I address
When it’s easier to point to someone else than gauge the damages of our own mess
Give me an...
One man’s law is another man’s virtue
What’s the matter of our preference
What’s a matter of our politics
Where does it collide on the tracks?
Ethics and morality versus the philosophy of our own well being
Our comforts are megaphones for lies when indulgence takes the cake
Are we living for ourselves or does our worship embody our values for Christ’s sake?
Lost for the weight of issues what do I address
When it’s easier to point to someone else than gauge the damages of our own mess
Give me an...
#corruption
#politics
#religion
#God
#Christian
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Judas
Take the poker out of the flame
Close the grate and
Suffocate the hypocrisy.
No one is innocent
In a theocracy
You’re Judas and I’m Judas.
Sin impregnates you
The betrayal is birthed
Blood stains and birthing pain
Cannot be erased from the earth
You’re Judas and I’m Judas
Point the fingers
Shift the blame
Avoid the mirror
We’re all the same
You’re Judas and I’m Judas
Burning in flames
Close the grate and
Suffocate the hypocrisy.
No one is innocent
In a theocracy
You’re Judas and I’m Judas.
Sin impregnates you
The betrayal is birthed
Blood stains and birthing pain
Cannot be erased from the earth
You’re Judas and I’m Judas
Point the fingers
Shift the blame
Avoid the mirror
We’re all the same
You’re Judas and I’m Judas
Burning in flames
#betrayal
#Christian
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Mary
Mary did not weep or know distress
bur sang a song of joy
just after she was told
in Gabriel's address
she’d quicken soon
because she’d be
by spirit and by overshading power won
and give birth to in nine month’s time
the Most High’s holy son.
She did not feel thereby
herself undone
or that her “yes” to Gabriel
was costly or against her will
constrained.
Instead, she praised the Lord
with ringing words, refrains,
that signaled she was raptured,
pleased,
to be the...
bur sang a song of joy
just after she was told
in Gabriel's address
she’d quicken soon
because she’d be
by spirit and by overshading power won
and give birth to in nine month’s time
the Most High’s holy son.
She did not feel thereby
herself undone
or that her “yes” to Gabriel
was costly or against her will
constrained.
Instead, she praised the Lord
with ringing words, refrains,
that signaled she was raptured,
pleased,
to be the...
#Christian
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6 Comments
Wandering from Faith
How do I confess
that recently I sat in church
below a rainbow flag and hoped
that somehow God would now make sense?
I’m always journeying from faith,
am never quite there because
the dread hand of Creation looms
and testifies to me
that no Creator ever was,
it’s all just wind and rain, chaos.
But until I die there’ll be
a place in my heart for an English church
with that uniquely English air,
of understated sprays of dried flowers,
a calming light at old windows,
a stained pieta of the Lord
presented...
that recently I sat in church
below a rainbow flag and hoped
that somehow God would now make sense?
I’m always journeying from faith,
am never quite there because
the dread hand of Creation looms
and testifies to me
that no Creator ever was,
it’s all just wind and rain, chaos.
But until I die there’ll be
a place in my heart for an English church
with that uniquely English air,
of understated sprays of dried flowers,
a calming light at old windows,
a stained pieta of the Lord
presented...
#atheism
#religion
#Christian #spiritual
#Christian #spiritual
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I'm Hebrew!!
I'm Hebrew a nation of people who's been treated unfair!!
In a world 🌎 were everyone's looking to prosper an gain dwelling in sin, without feelings and emotions or remorse to even care!!
Because being labeled as people behind two continents or even a color, now amongst the civilized, now our culture and brilliant minds your able to share!!
To the world 🌎 like precious jewels gems 💎 stones, pearl's and diamonds 💎 with no rewards being given or any thoughts of coming close to even being compared!!
Next to those whose...
In a world 🌎 were everyone's looking to prosper an gain dwelling in sin, without feelings and emotions or remorse to even care!!
Because being labeled as people behind two continents or even a color, now amongst the civilized, now our culture and brilliant minds your able to share!!
To the world 🌎 like precious jewels gems 💎 stones, pearl's and diamonds 💎 with no rewards being given or any thoughts of coming close to even being compared!!
Next to those whose...
#religion
#Christian
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#prayer
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How Do I love Again
Love is a drug and I just need my fix
Tired of pouring all this love into the wrong bitch
Tired of the different mood swings
I hit the wrong switch
Love ain’t did nothing
Not even made me rich
Who knew Love would feel like this?
Love chose a man over her kids
Love had me locked up facing a bid
Love had me wishing I didn’t exist
Love had me taking risks
Now I know what love feels like at the end
I might have said some things I never meant
You really going to throw away all the time that we spent?
I can’t even sleep...
Tired of pouring all this love into the wrong bitch
Tired of the different mood swings
I hit the wrong switch
Love ain’t did nothing
Not even made me rich
Who knew Love would feel like this?
Love chose a man over her kids
Love had me locked up facing a bid
Love had me wishing I didn’t exist
Love had me taking risks
Now I know what love feels like at the end
I might have said some things I never meant
You really going to throw away all the time that we spent?
I can’t even sleep...
#ImSorry
#breakup
#Christian
#LongDistanceRelationship
#dating
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fog
I walked into the fog of a spell
avoiding it was impossible
for I was born blind (blindness the sin –
see at any cost) like all,
a fog lain over the land where we dwell:
see it too late – it covers itself.
when all becomes fog, world becomes bathed in gray
we become accustomed to limited spectrums
within our conception
what breaks our perception?
given a cure – then it's taken away
or diverts the curse into new dimension:
symbols are abstracts; the ocean is mere introspection
look inward, into the fog – fog has settled there ...
avoiding it was impossible
for I was born blind (blindness the sin –
see at any cost) like all,
a fog lain over the land where we dwell:
see it too late – it covers itself.
when all becomes fog, world becomes bathed in gray
we become accustomed to limited spectrums
within our conception
what breaks our perception?
given a cure – then it's taken away
or diverts the curse into new dimension:
symbols are abstracts; the ocean is mere introspection
look inward, into the fog – fog has settled there ...
#Christian
#faith
#spiritual
#magic
#curse
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For the Old Pagan Gods
you can tell me life was dangerous back then
and in those stories was
the gamut of loathing, violence, and fear,
the world expressed in spider’s webs
and men to fauna turned by wicked nymphs
and heifers once bewailed girls
but in caprice and madness there’s
a certain honesty, no sense that man
is ever saved or needs to live out on their knees
before a crude symbol,
it’s all just grass and rock and swirling mystery
and in those stories was
the gamut of loathing, violence, and fear,
the world expressed in spider’s webs
and men to fauna turned by wicked nymphs
and heifers once bewailed girls
but in caprice and madness there’s
a certain honesty, no sense that man
is ever saved or needs to live out on their knees
before a crude symbol,
it’s all just grass and rock and swirling mystery
#religion
#Christian
#mythology #pagan
#mythology #pagan
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Jesus was a Cuckold
#sex
#Christian
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THE TREES OF EDEN
THE TREE OF KNOWLEDGE
Its Root is SWEET
It's branches are ALIVE
It's Light is LOVED
It's leaves are HONEST
It's nectar of GOODNESS
is in its blossoms
It's fruit is WAKEFULNESS
It's seed is REBIRTH
It flowers in EPINOYA OF LIGHT
Those who eat from it your eyes will be opened
And you will be like God
The tree of knowledge
Represents higher thinking.
It's the Epinoia of Light
And it has to do with your mind and thought.
It is interesting how the tree of knowledge
is forbidden.
...
Its Root is SWEET
It's branches are ALIVE
It's Light is LOVED
It's leaves are HONEST
It's nectar of GOODNESS
is in its blossoms
It's fruit is WAKEFULNESS
It's seed is REBIRTH
It flowers in EPINOYA OF LIGHT
Those who eat from it your eyes will be opened
And you will be like God
The tree of knowledge
Represents higher thinking.
It's the Epinoia of Light
And it has to do with your mind and thought.
It is interesting how the tree of knowledge
is forbidden.
...
#trees
#religion
#Christian
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DEAR GOD, ARE YOU OUT THERE,
(Now I know this is long but it's worth reading if you're interested.
I would love to hear your thoughts on this if you can and be honest.)
DEAR GOD ARE YOU OUT THERE?
My name is Elizabeth
I have a lot of questions,
And it would be great if you can answer them.
But first I Just want to make one thing clear,
I am not a believer nor do I want to be
Unless you can convince be.
Dear God
How do i have faith or believe in a concept,
where I speak to a man I've never seen
with my own two eyes,
Or heard with my ears or...
I would love to hear your thoughts on this if you can and be honest.)
DEAR GOD ARE YOU OUT THERE?
My name is Elizabeth
I have a lot of questions,
And it would be great if you can answer them.
But first I Just want to make one thing clear,
I am not a believer nor do I want to be
Unless you can convince be.
Dear God
How do i have faith or believe in a concept,
where I speak to a man I've never seen
with my own two eyes,
Or heard with my ears or...
#religion
#God
#Christian
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3 Comments
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