Poems on Charles Bukowski Seeking Honest Critique
#CharlesBukowski
She's Obedient but Thinking Out of the Box
Could be my dog
Could be my wife
Could be my mistress
Could be my muse
Could be my massage therapist
Could be my dry cleaner
Could be my cardiologist
Could be
Or
?
Could be my wife
Could be my mistress
Could be my muse
Could be my massage therapist
Could be my dry cleaner
Could be my cardiologist
Could be
Or
?
#CharlesBukowski
#dogs
#EECummings
#mystery
#SelfDiscovery
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26 Comments
Summer is ..
July
Heat
Staying light late
Watermelon
Flesh exposed
Complaining about weather
Humidity
Bugs
Alcohol haze
Horniness
This year political madness
They all suck
I’ll take Kamala
At least she’s lucid
Back to regular programming
Sleep deprived
Did I say horny ?
Mood
Would be poet
Widow Jane Rye
Gradation
He’s got a good curveball
The boys of summer
Beer
Heat
Staying light late
Watermelon
Flesh exposed
Complaining about weather
Humidity
Bugs
Alcohol haze
Horniness
This year political madness
They all suck
I’ll take Kamala
At least she’s lucid
Back to regular programming
Sleep deprived
Did I say horny ?
Mood
Would be poet
Widow Jane Rye
Gradation
He’s got a good curveball
The boys of summer
Beer
#alcohol
#CharlesBukowski
#sex
#StreamOfConsciousness
#summer
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35 Comments
Bearing the weight of words; worlds
Well Mr.
Chinaski,
the wine's got me by the will,
(I'm sure you'd say my woman’s got me by the
balls)–
and though I respect your work I
can't quite say I'd agree–
wheat and
chaff.
Long after first light I
rise, my
head still
sagging to one
side—
waterlogged with the
Midnight Dew.
Hangover hounding,
baying at the
back door of my cranium.
McCarthy mixes with the
brain fog
and
both plume upward to...
Chinaski,
the wine's got me by the will,
(I'm sure you'd say my woman’s got me by the
balls)–
and though I respect your work I
can't quite say I'd agree–
wheat and
chaff.
Long after first light I
rise, my
head still
sagging to one
side—
waterlogged with the
Midnight Dew.
Hangover hounding,
baying at the
back door of my cranium.
McCarthy mixes with the
brain fog
and
both plume upward to...
#CharlesBukowski
#nonfiction
#WritingPoetry
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3 Comments
Rhyme ?
I’m your queen
Not mean
Most of the time
Unless drinking vodka and lime
My Rhyme sucks
I don’t give 2 fucks
You're cute
And astute
Give me a prayer
I promise to pull your hair
It will be fun
I don’t carry a gun
I’m smart not dumb
Your beautiful hair … no gum
Not mean
Most of the time
Unless drinking vodka and lime
My Rhyme sucks
I don’t give 2 fucks
You're cute
And astute
Give me a prayer
I promise to pull your hair
It will be fun
I don’t carry a gun
I’m smart not dumb
Your beautiful hair … no gum
#WritingPoetry
#CharlesBukowski
#pagan
#StreamOfConsciousness
#EECummings
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35 Comments
You asked me how I am
Edgy
Moody
Horny
Irritatable
That's when I want you most
Moody
Horny
Irritatable
That's when I want you most
#lust
#confessional
#myself
#CharlesBukowski
#pagan
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22 Comments
Send me your used panties still moist and dewy
#erotic
#porn
#CharlesBukowski #pagan
#CharlesBukowski #pagan
306 reads
29 Comments
Want to drink alcohol, do art and f**k … no waiting in lines
Let’s be honest
I am
I am
#sex
#alcohol
#art
#CharlesBukowski
#minimalist
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30 Comments
Quagmire and Disgust in the Underbelly
Eat some empty calories
A donut or 2
Suck a dick
Protein
Wash the car
Even though it rains constantly
Don't discuss politics
Pay your bills the last day due
A donut or 2
Suck a dick
Protein
Wash the car
Even though it rains constantly
Don't discuss politics
Pay your bills the last day due
#silence
#LifeCycle
#CharlesBukowski #StreamOfConsciousness
#CharlesBukowski #StreamOfConsciousness
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25 Comments
Don't Try
Don’t try
It may imply that you’re giving yourself some wiggle room
In case you fail
There may be some obstacles too big to overcome
Therefore it questions your dedication
Your determination to get it done
Don’t half ass it and then expect to get great returns
Nothing special comes out of mediocrity
It is as they say, you reap what you sow
And if your mode is to be average
You’ll never stand out, if you know what I mean
I guess the important thing here is to be honest
Do you really want to accomplish what you set out to...
It may imply that you’re giving yourself some wiggle room
In case you fail
There may be some obstacles too big to overcome
Therefore it questions your dedication
Your determination to get it done
Don’t half ass it and then expect to get great returns
Nothing special comes out of mediocrity
It is as they say, you reap what you sow
And if your mode is to be average
You’ll never stand out, if you know what I mean
I guess the important thing here is to be honest
Do you really want to accomplish what you set out to...
#LifeStruggles
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle #CharlesBukowski
#LifeCycle #CharlesBukowski
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9 Comments
We'll call her Lilith
Because she broke
her rosary beads early
and thought jesus
made too many rules
for a cunt to follow,
she didn't take to sidewalks
but knew the streets
each name sat
on her slim
fingertips.
Took to upper class
and was mean
as hell about it,
she was everything
their wives, girlfriends
and partners
dreamed
about
her rubber legs
stained with grime
from requests
they demanded,
they ask for more
because she was there
and money
was ready to burn ...
her rosary beads early
and thought jesus
made too many rules
for a cunt to follow,
she didn't take to sidewalks
but knew the streets
each name sat
on her slim
fingertips.
Took to upper class
and was mean
as hell about it,
she was everything
their wives, girlfriends
and partners
dreamed
about
her rubber legs
stained with grime
from requests
they demanded,
they ask for more
because she was there
and money
was ready to burn ...
#CharlesBukowski
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6 Comments
Faux Daddy 2
I’m your sickness
Codeine and Sprite
Pulling you down
Into my lair of last rites
I’m your addict
Artist, poet and troubadour
Outta red
Slitting my wrist
I need that color bad
I’m your admirer
Old but hard and vigilant
You don’t understand this attraction
Yet you won’t let me leave
I put you on a pedestal
Half looking at your ass
Or up your dress
I put you on a pedestal
I understand your mess
It goes on and on
I’ll never stop coming for you
You like the attention
Faux Daddy ...
Codeine and Sprite
Pulling you down
Into my lair of last rites
I’m your addict
Artist, poet and troubadour
Outta red
Slitting my wrist
I need that color bad
I’m your admirer
Old but hard and vigilant
You don’t understand this attraction
Yet you won’t let me leave
I put you on a pedestal
Half looking at your ass
Or up your dress
I put you on a pedestal
I understand your mess
It goes on and on
I’ll never stop coming for you
You like the attention
Faux Daddy ...
#love
#MyInspiration
#CharlesBukowski
#art
#admiration
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10 Comments
I'm already sick of saying Happy New Year
Is there code for dropping it
I was already bored yesterday
Maybe because it fell on a weekend
Extra day off but extra saying too
I was thinking about a THC gummy at noon time
Now it's just burbon and trouble
I've got a bad attitude
Nothing new there
Happy
Not
Just the same old same old
Think I'll have some gluten
Live dangerously
In the underground
I was already bored yesterday
Maybe because it fell on a weekend
Extra day off but extra saying too
I was thinking about a THC gummy at noon time
Now it's just burbon and trouble
I've got a bad attitude
Nothing new there
Happy
Not
Just the same old same old
Think I'll have some gluten
Live dangerously
In the underground
#funny
#CallToAction
#frustration
#CharlesBukowski
#culture
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34 Comments
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