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Can't Sleep
I'm awake
at this hour
What the fuck
Wide awake
on a Saturday
morning
No need to
be up early
but it figures
that I am
Damn insomnia
What the fuck
at this hour
What the fuck
Wide awake
on a Saturday
morning
No need to
be up early
but it figures
that I am
Damn insomnia
What the fuck
Published 6th Apr 2013
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6th Apr 2013 3:09pm
6th Apr 2013 3:29pm
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7th Apr 2013 3:00am
Can relate...strider
8th Apr 2013 7:31am
Insomnia...greatest feeling of dread EVER, I hate it! It's only been one night in my life I can remember but I remember it so well, where I never fell asleep at all the entire night, I just lay awake. This poem perfectly conveys that frustration, nice writing as always Tommie. Next time though, do what I do: always have a bottle of wine or hard liquor on hand, or rub one out...or both! ;)
8th Apr 2013 11:34am
Oh Deepest_Fantasy,
That was me on this certain night...just laying there!Mad because I couldn't sleep but I'll be damned if I was getting up out of my bed!
I love wine and some liquor...and rubbing one out might have helped me but I was too angry to think of it! ;)
That was me on this certain night...just laying there!Mad because I couldn't sleep but I'll be damned if I was getting up out of my bed!
I love wine and some liquor...and rubbing one out might have helped me but I was too angry to think of it! ;)
8th Apr 2013 4:54pm
That's true, you'd have to get out of bed; I have to get out for both. Sometimes it's worth it though! One or two straight shots of vodka on an empty stomach usually does the trick for me! The worst part of insomnia is that the more you think about how you can't sleep, the harder it is to fall asleep!
8th Apr 2013 6:12pm
