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Did You/You Did

I wonder if you
ever really did
Did you
could you
I wonder

Never felt like
you did
heartless cold
did you

Left lonely
constantly no
you didn't
did you

Not caring to
like I did
I did
try
I did

Giving up on
caring
I did too
much
you didn't
enough

I gave up
I did
you began
you did
you
did
love

You could love
you did
you
did
love
Written by tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)
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