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Fuk'Que HaiKu /aBaker('s)DozenTreats[of]aLiveDeath[in]Springtyme
too much mostmuch o
ver much tension contention
eXtended t'death /
wee all speak mighty
mouth-missel orifacial
wordvoids t'be real /
april fourth april
fourth month of days wit no names,
not even april /
i can't put in to
words can't be put in-to this
word eye try to speak /
six ty ninth posi
tion drip sweet blo'ssom nectar
la prima vera /
haiku flows mo'smoothe
than dreams of deadmeat dreaming
of-self-of-one's-prime /
read this pleas y'see
it is onliest shit I
know for no'thing sure /
hailstones hit sting bare
chested old jerk at thee edge
of world, he likes it /
ever y thing no
thing happens same place
same time time less[ly] /
effortless nothing
aye was to lose looseleft self,
not seeing I go(ne) /
hellmissels pointed
at BigHead by fucking fools
Bighead created /
every same thing keeps
I paralyzed, or else just
para'dancing ass /
fuk'que hai ku eats
old meats, vomits for newlife
in jasmine springtyme /
XXXdkzk2013xxxxxpfhoto;dkzk;OOOOOOOO
Published 4th Apr 2013
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5th Apr 2013 1:05pm
Some of these are real gems. The first, the "read this pleas," the "he likes it" at the end of the next one, and especially the final one. You have breathed a new life into this form and like magic I see another new slant on haiku.
5th Apr 2013 2:53pm
as all ways, much'preciate yr preciation....
I haven't done much haiku for longlong time, &overwhelmin urge come over me otherday. Thought my "ardent fans" & other deepsouls of DUP would dig'em, but....so it goes.
thank you for lookin in on th'oldfckr
I haven't done much haiku for longlong time, &overwhelmin urge come over me otherday. Thought my "ardent fans" & other deepsouls of DUP would dig'em, but....so it goes.
thank you for lookin in on th'oldfckr
