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Brent
Broke me with the very first kiss
Replaced with feelings of sheer bliss
Ended a love before it started
Never thought you'd be so cold hearted
Thinking always of your name
Brent...why'd I let you get away?
Replaced with feelings of sheer bliss
Ended a love before it started
Never thought you'd be so cold hearted
Thinking always of your name
Brent...why'd I let you get away?
Published 3rd Apr 2013
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3rd Apr 2013 8:56pm
Always heartbreaking when affairs of the heart fade away. If you feel so low then go make amends before he's out of reach
Fine poem. Short sweet and sad.
Lookawaynow
Fine poem. Short sweet and sad.
Lookawaynow
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2013 9:46pm
oh memories nyx sigh
strider
strider
4th Apr 2013 1:12am
:( I try to dwell on the good ones, doesn't always work out that way...lol
Thanks strider
Thanks strider
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Apr 2013 2:21pm
4th Apr 2013 00:47am
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5th Apr 2013 4:37pm
4th Apr 2013 7:17pm
memories suck dude...especially the good ones...cuz they cant happen anymore :-( nice short piece...
