Love in a vase

Entered in a comp:)

Soul, a beautiful write, great imagery.

Thank You Dear Grace!!!

I would love to see you expand on the role of the ghosts! How are they a challenge or obstacle? It hints of conflict; the song/video seems to suggest more of that.

Perceptive, Thanx Jazz!!!
I may do that:)

Cool, just follow that bliss.

Beautifully written, powerful visuals throughout.

Motions forward
penned paper, parachuted parchment
drops, dew upon petals, my rose
the presence a gift
we shirk our ghosts
and come to life,

Very, very, well written.

Thank You so much Scribbler!!!
:) that was my favorite too!!!

Most beautiful Soul, the music goes perfect with your poem. :)

Thank You Dear Magdalena, I'm glad it played well, Tis my favorite incarnation of that man!!!

Bro. SOUL, That was Awesome coming from "da man"!!

I got a clear pic of this piece!!!

Great Luck in the comp.

Sir Lancelott

Thanx Lance!!!
Always appreciate Your support and kind words!!!
I Appreciate the clear vision, it wasn't meant to be cryptic ...only symbolic.

First off, I need something else to call you because your username is too long for my lazy butt to type! lol ....:)
Now for you ink!
A tender captivating piece! The video/song was a key factor to me consuming every sing word you inked!
Hypnotized by the beauty of this entire read!
LOVED THIS!!

Hey Soul, really strong imagery in this piece , the music set a really nice mood.. I just kept waiting for a voice over while the song played.. as I wasn't really sure what the two had to do with one another... But Great job say I.

Cheers! Scot

Thanks Scot!!!
Greatly appreciate the read!!!
...The song is a cryptic piece of the poem...
it fits...but hows and whys I don't let on...sorry Sir hope it didn't steal away too much from the work. Thank You for The kind words!!!