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IF ONLY !!!
If only you had turned around
to see a dying soul in vain
Who gave her all in love
Still cries alone in the raucous rains.
If only you had made little efforts
to console her in the worst pain
Who didn't demand a single gift but love
Still keeps you in her heart and brain.
If only you were concerned
to let go of all the useless fights
Who begged till the end only for the support
Still comes up to you making things alright.
If only you were not blind to see
How much I loved you
If only you had that heart to feel
If only you were me !!!!!
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
29th Mar 2013 9:57am
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29th Mar 2013 11:32am
Yaa.. it pains if you are still stuck up in ur past !! Thanku for sharing your feelings..
Re: IF ONLY !!!
30th Mar 2013 1:54am
shedding the past is hard... but burying it makes you frail. hating it makes you sour. loving it releases you. ironic isn't it?
nice write B
nice write B
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30th Mar 2013 4:56am
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31st Mar 2013 11:30pm
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1st Apr 2013 9:59am
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7th May 2013 3:06pm
There is no future, spending the present, worrying about the past!!
Love this piece sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
Love this piece sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
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10th May 2013 11:20am
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11th May 2013 12:01pm
Painting a beautiful picture takes a lot of preparation from making the frame with nails to many overlays. Each part is essential to the whole and should not be regreted, because to regret any part is to regret yourself. Growing up is a bitch ain't it?
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11th May 2013 1:21pm
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16th May 2013 2:07am
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16th May 2013 3:30pm
very deep and emotional, favorite lines:
"If only you had that heart to feel
If only you were me !!!!!"
"If only you had that heart to feel
If only you were me !!!!!"
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17th May 2013 5:35am
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23rd Sep 2013 7:21pm