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Sober Writing
Hands trembling
I write out my scattered thoughts
like illusive ghosts
there one minute then as if a shadow
seen on my periphery
slip sideways through the cracks
sober and standing on shakey feet
I feel the ground swaying beneath me
grasping at what remains of my sanity
I fight for my freedom
screaming on the inside
afraid as paniac attacks
cloy and cling
a dying demon
who won't go easy into it's grave
riding out the storm
surfing the waves of unease
no more rivers of wine and whiskey to drown in
as I cough up the last of the drink
I take a big breath of reality and sigh in relief
I write out my scattered thoughts
like illusive ghosts
there one minute then as if a shadow
seen on my periphery
slip sideways through the cracks
sober and standing on shakey feet
I feel the ground swaying beneath me
grasping at what remains of my sanity
I fight for my freedom
screaming on the inside
afraid as paniac attacks
cloy and cling
a dying demon
who won't go easy into it's grave
riding out the storm
surfing the waves of unease
no more rivers of wine and whiskey to drown in
as I cough up the last of the drink
I take a big breath of reality and sigh in relief
Published 28th Mar 2013
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28th Mar 2013 7:41pm
Graphic imagery, takes me somewhere else.
cloy and cling
a dying demon
who won't go easy into it's grave
riding out the storm
surfing the waves of unease
I enjoyed this.
cloy and cling
a dying demon
who won't go easy into it's grave
riding out the storm
surfing the waves of unease
I enjoyed this.
28th Mar 2013 7:58pm
Thank you Scibbler i'm glad you enjoyed this..that gives me much appreciated encouragement..peace Crim
28th Mar 2013 8:14pm
28th Mar 2013 8:34pm
Anonymous
28th Mar 2013 11:07pm
awesome crim...you got the power here
strider
strider
29th Mar 2013 00:41am
Anonymous
28th Mar 2013 11:36pm
as I cough up the last of the drink
I take a big breath of reality and sigh in relief
WONDERFUL GHOSTLY AND GRITTY READ
GOOD LUCK AND BE WELL x
I take a big breath of reality and sigh in relief
WONDERFUL GHOSTLY AND GRITTY READ
GOOD LUCK AND BE WELL x
29th Mar 2013 00:42am
Thank you beautiful lady for the lovely comment and add to your reading list..peace Crim
30th Mar 2013 00:11am
Sober writing but I'm inebriated from reading this! Such a beautiful high I've witness!:)
Adding to my list! Such an injustice not to!xoxo
Adding to my list! Such an injustice not to!xoxo
30th Mar 2013 00:37am
30th Mar 2013 5:06pm
A haunting sensation, but oh, such a brave tackle of a difficult situation. Smiles your way...
:)
:)
30th Mar 2013 6:48pm
Thank you Ataki for such an uplifting comment..smiles back at you lovely lady..peace Crim :)
31st Mar 2013 00:14am
I have been there too many times and am all too familiar with this feling...back and forth...back and forth...so I can relate...Good Luck I wish you the best
31st Mar 2013 4:42am
31st Mar 2013 6:02am
Some demons refuse to die, their claws firmly entrenched within my soul. The crutch they offer me, a double edged sword. Great read.
31st Mar 2013 6:33am
