Lick My Haiku Part I

This is definitely an odd compilation of Haiku but I figure since I put it on forums I might as well post it as a work of art! After all, it is. :D Please comment and critique. I always likey. :) Thanks. ~ Jade

I like it.  Makes a good statement, with excellent use of imagery that makes it interesting.

Thanks Patrick, I am really glad the imagery came across, I was worried I made the Haiku a little too simple. :D

After reading this anyone who disagrees would be foolish. You are a great artist and very inspiring. :)

Aw, thanks Glenn, that's is really, really sweet of you to say! That makes me especially proud of this one, thanks. :D

You would agree that the use of "lick" "lucid juices" "candy cane" "mistletoe underwear" suggest eroticism. But this poem is way deeper than that.

I have read it again and again and each time, I see a beautiful poem couched in tight diction.

Such an infectious way to write.

Thanks again, Divine. It's lovely to get complimented on what I pull out of this head of mine. :P I appreciate your support AND the fact that you actually like it, lol. :D

nice erotic feel to this series of haiku's, such a beautiful poem :)
i like this, it's very imaginative and inspirational.
excellent piece :) x

So happy you like it, thanks. :)