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Spring
I can taste spring tantilizing my senses
the almond orchards are in full bloom
I taste the sweet nectar of their buds on my toungue
swirling clouds over head hang heavy with dew
mother nature raining down from the heavens
giving sweet life to the seeds buried deep underground
the feeling of freedom as winter conceeds defeat for the moment
sun shining every being a buzz with life
I cast off my winter coat and run through the orchards
as the trees whisper secrets to me
I feel alive listening to their ancient tales
of the changing seasons
clinging to life I shrug off my depression
realising everything is born anew
and so am I.
the almond orchards are in full bloom
I taste the sweet nectar of their buds on my toungue
swirling clouds over head hang heavy with dew
mother nature raining down from the heavens
giving sweet life to the seeds buried deep underground
the feeling of freedom as winter conceeds defeat for the moment
sun shining every being a buzz with life
I cast off my winter coat and run through the orchards
as the trees whisper secrets to me
I feel alive listening to their ancient tales
of the changing seasons
clinging to life I shrug off my depression
realising everything is born anew
and so am I.
Published 26th Mar 2013
| Edited 27th Mar 2013
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26th Mar 2013 10:53pm
26th Mar 2013 11:18pm
26th Mar 2013 10:53pm
This is a wonderful feeling write Crim, so nice to read you this way, captivating beauty. :)
26th Mar 2013 11:18pm
Anonymous
27th Mar 2013 00:10am
lovely crim
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27th Mar 2013 6:48am
27th Mar 2013 00:15am
I really like this take on the process...I was picturing Joss Stone singing it bare footed on stage....I have no idea why....
27th Mar 2013 6:49am
Anonymous
27th Mar 2013 10:17am
A beautiful write, great flow, structure, visuals...
and a great energy in this one Crim, positive and filled with new hope :-)
peace
and a great energy in this one Crim, positive and filled with new hope :-)
peace
27th Mar 2013 7:29pm
Thank you lovely Miki..spring does remind me of rebirth of the soul and freedom..peace Crim
