Beg

Sweets, you should never have to beg for anything!! With that sweets pen you have!!!
I Love the write!
Great read!!

Sir Lancelott

Sir Lancelott,

Such kind words! Thank you for your awesome comment! I shall no longer beg!

Olga :-)

Enjoyed this poem, I like your style here, the flow, and the great power captured in such brief verse.

Thank you Miki for the read, I am glad you enjoyed! I did not realise there was such power in the verse. Thank you once again!

Olga :-)  

Indeed never beg Olga. Much yearning here, well expressed and penned. :)

Thank you Magdalena for your kind comment. Much appreciated!!

Olga :-)

Olga,

Nothing quite like the real thing ; ) Could feel the undertow in this one ; ) Enjoyed!

tornado

Indeed Tornado - there is an undertow! The song by R.E.M. "Find the River" comes to mind.

"The river to the ocean goes,
A fortune for the undertow
None of this is going my way"

Thank you for the read. I am glad you enjoyed!

Olga :-)

Perfectly fits with the saying, "absence makes the heart grow fonder".

It sure does JAZZMANOR!

Thank you for the dropping in and for the great comment.

Olga :-)

Thank you for the lovely comment Kasupuu. Much appreciated!

Olga :-)