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Oldfuck's dispoeticDigressionPlayword For Comedicosmic Consump[tion]
"There's no Telling what......."
(no Saying aswell)
so th'at must
pr
obably in dicate(that) an
eXten'ted moment of
silence ~witin a great
eXpanse of Quietude~ islike
'in-order' - yet
all thee blabberr blaa'blaabs on(+on)
from e'ry
mouth'o'wee,TheTrueMe of TheRealUS,
distortling an already wore'out
pa
ra
di
gm [of][like][a] RealityAgent not selling
e'nough quotiential
homely structures for wee
to make better magic'imagin'd
Lifes
wit'in -
or sumsuch other crap of our crappling posithunk
'healthy competition'
ruse[of]
egoicbloodletting thru
proper prop'o[f] business attire,
pride=no'sin(nor greed,nor avarice,nor
usuruy-as-usual) fo'longtyme now,
it be bestbig[gest] Virtue yr goodoldnew
golden'veal cutlery
that any templebound moneyfckchanger's$$can
buy'buy
great buy[&]buy byebye -
There May Be No-Telling(of thee yammering say-so),
butta faithful more-or-less(all'th'same)auto
mated telly'call
tells ((a-one-who-looks-alike))
me that thee drugs thee drugs
TheeDrugs!('life-sustaining',y'stupidmthrfckr) is
ready t'be pick'ed Up & eaten(consummmmed) at yr
local unimodel-mold'd
pharmaciCathedral(there's two at every intersexion
conveniently in this'ere securely sterilated
Geo.Zimmerman'ic 'deeded entry only'
neighborhoodie)-
& thus,eye must answer
thee disembodied call-to-dinner,
my sustain'ence......
butteye d i(fckn)gress - i must just
Eat My Fill fwhich iyam
most greatfull
XXXXXdkzk2013vvvvvvpfhoto;by;dkzk(aswell)xvvx
(no Saying aswell)
so th'at must
pr
obably in dicate(that) an
eXten'ted moment of
silence ~witin a great
eXpanse of Quietude~ islike
'in-order' - yet
all thee blabberr blaa'blaabs on(+on)
from e'ry
mouth'o'wee,TheTrueMe of TheRealUS,
distortling an already wore'out
pa
ra
di
gm [of][like][a] RealityAgent not selling
e'nough quotiential
homely structures for wee
to make better magic'imagin'd
Lifes
wit'in -
or sumsuch other crap of our crappling posithunk
'healthy competition'
ruse[of]
egoicbloodletting thru
proper prop'o[f] business attire,
pride=no'sin(nor greed,nor avarice,nor
usuruy-as-usual) fo'longtyme now,
it be bestbig[gest] Virtue yr goodoldnew
golden'veal cutlery
that any templebound moneyfckchanger's$$can
buy'buy
great buy[&]buy byebye -
There May Be No-Telling(of thee yammering say-so),
butta faithful more-or-less(all'th'same)auto
mated telly'call
tells ((a-one-who-looks-alike))
me that thee drugs thee drugs
TheeDrugs!('life-sustaining',y'stupidmthrfckr) is
ready t'be pick'ed Up & eaten(consummmmed) at yr
local unimodel-mold'd
pharmaciCathedral(there's two at every intersexion
conveniently in this'ere securely sterilated
Geo.Zimmerman'ic 'deeded entry only'
neighborhoodie)-
& thus,eye must answer
thee disembodied call-to-dinner,
my sustain'ence......
butteye d i(fckn)gress - i must just
Eat My Fill fwhich iyam
most greatfull
XXXXXdkzk2013vvvvvvpfhoto;by;dkzk(aswell)xvvx
Published 22nd Mar 2013
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22nd Mar 2013 4:33pm
great write...
loving the sarcasm in this piece
the second from last line made me hungry....
:)
loving the sarcasm in this piece
the second from last line made me hungry....
:)
22nd Mar 2013 5:15pm
Ha....honey,you so sweet would it were
that icould eat my fill'o
thee, but
not-so
it-go[es]
bless'ye,babe----
uh,waitaminute....'sarcasm'? who? me?
that icould eat my fill'o
thee, but
not-so
it-go[es]
bless'ye,babe----
uh,waitaminute....'sarcasm'? who? me?
22nd Mar 2013 10:52pm
I love these kinds of poems, such an artistic manipulation of words. It forms an awesome and beautifully vivid story!
23rd Mar 2013 1:30am
thank you, Lucas....
a sweet commentary indeed.
welcome to the club of Precious-Few who can see enough to appreciate whatever it is that blows out of whatever-is-left-of-'me'
peace&blessings onya, kid
a sweet commentary indeed.
welcome to the club of Precious-Few who can see enough to appreciate whatever it is that blows out of whatever-is-left-of-'me'
peace&blessings onya, kid
