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Invidious
In a room
full of
fake blondes,
I tend to
stick out...
I cant help it
if its all
eyes on me
even yours.....
by all means,
please down another
glass of low self esteem
Published 20th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
20th Mar 2013 4:57pm
Another cool piece, the presence invokes resentment and hate. Because of the reflection back on superficiality? Great writing in such concise space. Mike
20th Mar 2013 5:35pm
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20th Mar 2013 5:36pm
:) I feel like this every time I walk into a bar in a certain neighborhood
thanks for reading
thanks for reading
20th Mar 2013 5:44pm
Awesome pic nikki. Bleach blondes are everywhere. Natural is the way to go definitely... Although I dyed my hair red so yeah, I'm a hypocrite. Lol
20th Mar 2013 7:39pm
20th Mar 2013 6:35pm
Learned a new word thanks to your title.
Piece lines are clean and the nailer is beyond textbook tight.
Piece lines are clean and the nailer is beyond textbook tight.
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Anonymous
21st Mar 2013 1:08am
Natural trumps fake every time. & fake knows it, lol. Love the simplicity of this, Nikki.
21st Mar 2013 2:12pm
21st Mar 2013 4:05am
I'm amazed at how you describe so much with so little. Wow. I love this poem :)
21st Mar 2013 2:13pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Mar 2013 8:33pm
21st Mar 2013 8:51am
GREAT write, Nikki!
You are very much right, the sentence "Blonds have more fun" isnt always correct...
Love the last phrase, strong, golden phrase!
You are very much right, the sentence "Blonds have more fun" isnt always correct...
Love the last phrase, strong, golden phrase!
21st Mar 2013 2:14pm
