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I, Sophisticate (a sum'ry of mislaid th'ought)
no
form/dir
ection concludes us now,
~~~~~~~~
now
later remembers
in fwd'd imaginates,coord
inates,
functional possessions[of]
a cc epta ble
time(+&)space,
paradigmatically
adjusted for health + wellbeing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
engines hum
poised
for that un'iversal-'me'
[unto]mass-des t r u c t u r e
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
pleas bring yOur(own) sophistry,
yr'own sophist,
pre
loaded fo'thee sophi'sting,
( a
full pharmaceutication --- absorbtion rate
left in dangling
circumstance,
but no'less thee great amusement [of]
certifiable healing )
~~
as mine'mind need[s] be dis'led
~~
to that fabled,fake'd BetterPlace
wh'ere
all-is forgivened
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Published 14th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
14th Mar 2013 1:52pm
long fabled indeed-that place! Nice one!
14th Mar 2013 1:57pm
14th Mar 2013 5:39pm
Another thought(and smile) provoking write- Alas, I fear that I have reached the age when I am rather more interested in soporifics than shophists - a nap now seems emminantly more practical and far less tedious than any debate- and far more enlightening. But of course naps do not feed the gapimg maw and bulging pockets of the sociocommercial machine- as it costs nothing and produces nothing salable-(how odd- to be thinking like a socialist radical at my age)Seems I am feeling out of sorts- time for a nap! Another great poem!
14th Mar 2013 6:25pm
grazi, caro muzio.....
damn,'my consciousness' is drifting so far from the 'sociocommercial'
toxicity
of what WE consider The Norm,
'I'
fear i w'ill find mySelf unable to
for[e]go
doing something absurdively inappropriate,&
poss
ibly fatal (to that socalled mySelf)----
(Lo! h'ow muchmore me'dicine t'swaller
t'git thru anygivenfckn Day?)*
*Note: thee above may 'be' my nexpoom....b'warn'd
i'mucho'preciate yr kindly empathetique attentions
damn,'my consciousness' is drifting so far from the 'sociocommercial'
toxicity
of what WE consider The Norm,
'I'
fear i w'ill find mySelf unable to
for[e]go
doing something absurdively inappropriate,&
poss
ibly fatal (to that socalled mySelf)----
(Lo! h'ow muchmore me'dicine t'swaller
t'git thru anygivenfckn Day?)*
*Note: thee above may 'be' my nexpoom....b'warn'd
i'mucho'preciate yr kindly empathetique attentions
14th Mar 2013 6:40pm
Yes, I'm afraid not much changes- Wordsworth penned-
"The world is too much with us;late and soon,
Getting and spending, we lay waste our powers;"
And I'm afraid it's still as true today. I guess we just need to wait around for Triton and his wreath'ed horn - 'cause if we add your Eb clarinet and my horn in F - I think we've got the beginnings of a bitchin' combo!
"The world is too much with us;late and soon,
Getting and spending, we lay waste our powers;"
And I'm afraid it's still as true today. I guess we just need to wait around for Triton and his wreath'ed horn - 'cause if we add your Eb clarinet and my horn in F - I think we've got the beginnings of a bitchin' combo!
14th Mar 2013 10:15pm
heck, iknow it been tha'way 10,000yrs---golden calf, "7 deadly sins" became the Admirable Attributes of Suckcess before Wordsy eloquated it.
it'll all be over before any of Us know what hit us.
tis a great show/amusement/That'sEntertainment!/ & all, but......nevermind (only"mind" worth'avin')
it'll all be over before any of Us know what hit us.
tis a great show/amusement/That'sEntertainment!/ & all, but......nevermind (only"mind" worth'avin')
Anonymous
16th Mar 2013 7:05pm
I enjoyed this trippn ;)
17th Mar 2013 2:32am
19th Mar 2013 3:47pm
19th Mar 2013 4:13pm
grazie,Lucas
ain't burn'd th'fern nor consumed alkillall in over 25yrs....damn,
ain't that
sumkinda nuthin,or what?
ain't burn'd th'fern nor consumed alkillall in over 25yrs....damn,
ain't that
sumkinda nuthin,or what?
