Solitude

So it rhymes...

Each stanza is beautifully written and flows naturally to the next. But that last one. Pure perfect ending. "Sad" doesn't begin to describe it. Nicely done, Lola!

thank you Scat

Lola

I echo Scat, beautiful Lola.. I have 30 years worth of rhyming poetry :)

Thanks M!  I still love poetry that rhymes...I have fun doing the free verse, but I think my heart will always belong to rhyme and rythym.

Lola

nicely done and great flow lola

strider

thanks Strider

Lola

Ye[. it rhymes and beautifully so:-)

thanks for dropping by cupid!  a pleasure to meet you.

Lola

like this a lot

cheers Lola

thanks for taking the time!  nice to meet you.

Lola

Solitude is not a happy place when accompanied by lonely on any level. I think this is a really good piece with lots of depth.
Rhyming in poetry isn't necessarily a bad thing-when done with skill and adding to the meaning of the poem-I think it's when people simply rhyme a bunch of words to try and be poetic that rhyming is pedantic and shallow
Your rhyme scheme is well done and simply gives a nice touch to the content..well done

thank you Miki.  I still have a great fondness for rhyming poetry.  

Lola

Good poetry,I enjoyed the rythm.

Thank you Kexby!

Lola

Thank you Gabriel.  I appreciate your kind remarks.

lola

It speaks of loneliness and a love starved heart. It is sad but I enjoyed reading it.