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Blood Rose
I'm not one for possessions
spiritual or otherwise
so pardon me,
if I act as if
this is my first time
I love to see a reaper weep
especially after a lost soul,
well, one that he
could not control
only the weak hand over their light
the strong and free willed
stand up tall
and yes...they fight
all you have are 6's
I've got the ace
assume that's the reason
for this grin on my face
clip my wings, I still fly
higher and higher
into a brightly lit
night sky
keep your red rose
and I'll keep my soul
run back to hell quickly
tell them who's in control
the woman who,
refused your gold
the one hell tried its
damnedest to hold
she now has the power,
suck on those
lemons Mr.Lucy,
tell me..are they sour?
spiritual or otherwise
so pardon me,
if I act as if
this is my first time
I love to see a reaper weep
especially after a lost soul,
well, one that he
could not control
only the weak hand over their light
the strong and free willed
stand up tall
and yes...they fight
all you have are 6's
I've got the ace
assume that's the reason
for this grin on my face
clip my wings, I still fly
higher and higher
into a brightly lit
night sky
keep your red rose
and I'll keep my soul
run back to hell quickly
tell them who's in control
the woman who,
refused your gold
the one hell tried its
damnedest to hold
she now has the power,
suck on those
lemons Mr.Lucy,
tell me..are they sour?
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Re: Blood Rose
Anonymous
12th Mar 2013 9:54pm
Yes, the battle for one's own soul....bravo! excellent write! Mike
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Re: Blood Rose
12th Mar 2013 10:22pm
"suck on those
lemons Mr.Lucy,
tell me..are they sour?"
lovin' the dry wit, as always.
:)
lemons Mr.Lucy,
tell me..are they sour?"
lovin' the dry wit, as always.
:)
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Re: Blood Rose
Anonymous
12th Mar 2013 10:31pm
You're creeping me right the hell out, Nikki! Too many touch points in this one... a paranoid soul might wonder, lol.
Fan_freakin_tastic write. Do it again!
Fan_freakin_tastic write. Do it again!
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Re: Blood Rose
13th Mar 2013 00:05am
Nikki you certainly come up with original thoughts mate and excellent ways of expressing them too so I second what Scat said!
Luv & hugz
Luv & hugz
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Re: Blood Rose
Anonymous
13th Mar 2013 00:11am
well penned, a good read
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Re: Blood Rose
13th Mar 2013 3:22pm
i dunno if'n aye agree wit all the agreements y've garnered wit this one,
but i always love readin mdear nikkimoe,
reg
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but i always love readin mdear nikkimoe,
reg
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les
sly
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Re: Blood Rose
8th Apr 2013 11:29pm
Aahahaha... the last sharp laugh. The back and forth cadence makes me feel like this is some sort of showdown where the faster gunslinger is just draaaaawing it all out, knowing full well how things will end and just... waiting.
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