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(as)Eide Norena sings Ophelia role(inSardinia)~LeMuseNoir said so(mo'orLess)

curswords point t'yOur
piddled'a'way
genius � / �cur s w o r d
� � � � � � � � s ,
� � �crossword puuuuuuuuzzle
� � � �cros'sword razor
swee t w ords,(be'what is'which,huh?)
impale
til bloodloss bloodloss
� � � [drippy unto
� � �dried'upon-thee shank,smilin skullbone
� � � � � � � � � � � � � �dingle'danglin]
� � � � bloodloss is
justanother
� � � � � pallid � �p'rank,justlike [a]
rabble yelling 'bite my crank!'
in someother diff
� � erent lyfetyme of
someother longlost friends' � be'lief(system[s]) -

every
� straind'ligament,ev'y ruptured mus
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �cle
� � � � � � � � � � [ purp
� � � � � � � � � � � le 'd �wit/of
� � � � � � � �internalbleeding~internalblood
� � � � � � � � � � �eternalbleed'o'
� � � � � � � � � � � �theegreat
� � � � � � � � � � humanus hemorhage ]
� � � blabbers,(Lo!screams!) of NewInspiration
� �unto the 'firstdayoftherestofyourlife'
every momomor'morning moanin'low,fauxPositivEnergies a'bound
� � � � in thee shock of waking from sweetcrazy dream
to comicosmic
� � � � �sick reality made sick by yOur collective
thinkings of th'goodle,personal self,
(as) �kinderpoots'& pun'ditdlers of-all-ages
� � � �rage for
� � � 'more', � 'better' � �me

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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX

(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

Published 11th Mar 2013

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Re: (as)Eide Norena sings Ophelia role(inSardinia)~LeMuseNoir said so(

LeMuseNoir

11th Mar 2013 4:06pm

Well if I said it then there's at least a fifty percent chance it's true! Thanks for the nod- and the pic made me howl.Great poem - I do think that you have succeeded this time where all the myriad poets and philosophers of the ages have failed- for never have I seen the true essence of this reality of ours more succinctly and completely expressed than "comicosmic". Of course there is a fifty percent chance I'm wrong. Yes, the great "humanus hemorhage" - one of the myriad problems of the world is that too many bleed too much and too many bleed not at all. A more equitable dispersion of sanginous resources is needed- but I wouldn't hold my breath. Another great read and jewel in your crown my friend.