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You think you know me?
You think you know me?
Fuck, I wish I knew me
I wish I could see
there is more to be
than darkness and sadness
that lives in my madness
of my so called life
my heart that is abscessed
from being torn and used
trampled on and bruised
emotionally broken
and abused
So before you think you know me
remember no one does
the only one who can explain me
is the one and only, up above.
Fuck, I wish I knew me
I wish I could see
there is more to be
than darkness and sadness
that lives in my madness
of my so called life
my heart that is abscessed
from being torn and used
trampled on and bruised
emotionally broken
and abused
So before you think you know me
remember no one does
the only one who can explain me
is the one and only, up above.
Published 10th Mar 2013
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10th Mar 2013 5:43pm
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10th Mar 2013 5:52pm
I always love your comments. They are soo generous and very enlightening to me when I read them. Thank you very much ♥♥♥♥
10th Mar 2013 8:50pm
Builds up well to my favourite lines, the last two. Big Hi! after so long.
10th Mar 2013 9:12pm
Thank you and yes, I have been null and void for awhile. Only popping in every now and then to check things. A lot going in life but then again, nothing going in life either. Dreams are still satisfied and life is still unrecognized. With painful moments of being paralyzed with nothing left to hide :/ So yea, I might have to use them few lines in my next one :)
26th Mar 2013 10:59pm
Hello Samatha, dig this piece, Really like it... It is hard enough to know one self, let alone some one else saying, I know you, or how you feel... with me just answering a simple hello is hard and complicated enough, without havint to really give an honest answer and going through all the levels of feelings an thoughts... course, me kinda just easily rambles on... nice piece here
26th Mar 2013 11:32pm
Well if you are a rambler than meet the master rambler :) I tend to start off saying one thing but go elsewhere with it then never finish explaining what I started with, lol
