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get thee to the cannery
missed
[out]of session to
sound-out
as if thee dead could shout
around stoneconcrete city'corners
or the th'leaves'o
trees always leaving.....
littlevoices of them 'loved ones' that
keep goin'a'way mamas poppos
aunti/uncles...
smartsharp dumbfuckers all doin
it -
ha
aha
a h a hha haa - a joke's a joke,jerko-
have a laugh while ye can
while wee can,yes,You,
While the You(which is just
anOther blessed Me) Can.
o,gooG'odd awemitey,
my
Inbox is [way] outtaLuck'n'
empty
as one'o them
zenmindheadskulls
eye done
h'eared[a]bout,
f'illed wit no
thing, iyam
herenow,
pissin bloody
bliss
at thee
edge of EveryWhere
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[out]of session to
sound-out
as if thee dead could shout
around stoneconcrete city'corners
or the th'leaves'o
trees always leaving.....
littlevoices of them 'loved ones' that
keep goin'a'way mamas poppos
aunti/uncles...
smartsharp dumbfuckers all doin
it -
ha
aha
a h a hha haa - a joke's a joke,jerko-
have a laugh while ye can
while wee can,yes,You,
While the You(which is just
anOther blessed Me) Can.
o,gooG'odd awemitey,
my
Inbox is [way] outtaLuck'n'
empty
as one'o them
zenmindheadskulls
eye done
h'eared[a]bout,
f'illed wit no
thing, iyam
herenow,
pissin bloody
bliss
at thee
edge of EveryWhere
XXXXXXXXdkzk2013xxxxxxxpfhoto:dkzkArch'iveXXXXXXX
Published 10th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
10th Mar 2013 5:07pm
Clever piece here-I like your individualism with poetry- refreshing to see writes like this one..and it takes quite an IQ to relay them this way
Bravo :-)
Bravo :-)
10th Mar 2013 5:44pm
good to see ye again ,miki --
sweet praise
indeed - always nice when somebody
can see into my slightly
eccentric slant
grazie,cara
sweet praise
indeed - always nice when somebody
can see into my slightly
eccentric slant
grazie,cara
10th Mar 2013 5:29pm
Great poem- love the title - Ophela as a sardine.There's a wonderful story called The Grass Harp- Tennesee Williams I think- or Truman Capote maybe- (brain too old-hour too early) Anyway one of the characters says that all the stories of all dead are played on the grass harp- which is the sound the wind makes blowing through tall dry grass-this reminded me of it a bit- if you haven't read it you MUST - a group of misfits and dreamers give up on normal life and go off to live in a treehouse- it's very you.
You've inspired me to a write I've been thinking about lately- thanks -
You've inspired me to a write I've been thinking about lately- thanks -
10th Mar 2013 5:47pm
"Ophelia as a sardine"....now that-there is a gem of a comment....
will check upon on Grass Harp--
danke, daddyo
will check upon on Grass Harp--
danke, daddyo
12th Mar 2013 9:57am
IQ is as IQ does.
(Please excuse my short, stupid comments;
I just hated to only click 'like'.)
(Please excuse my short, stupid comments;
I just hated to only click 'like'.)
12th Mar 2013 12:06pm
IQ? what's that?......i
may
have had one once, but
They,(youknow how They can be),took
it
away because it wasn't making any
money
bless'ed be Thee ChoochLord
may
have had one once, but
They,(youknow how They can be),took
it
away because it wasn't making any
money
bless'ed be Thee ChoochLord
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