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Suits.
saliva trickles from the dogs mouth
as if she knows whats coming
as if she wants it
she blinks
tears roll like heads for a tudor punishment
and her moans echo and reality hasnt hit
for either of us
i quiver
blood pours from the stone
adrenaline exists
time is void
splash
Number 1160 - didnt protest or bargain
cherry blonde hair 5"2 slender
four children, such a shame
log off
as if she knows whats coming
as if she wants it
she blinks
tears roll like heads for a tudor punishment
and her moans echo and reality hasnt hit
for either of us
i quiver
blood pours from the stone
adrenaline exists
time is void
splash
Number 1160 - didnt protest or bargain
cherry blonde hair 5"2 slender
four children, such a shame
log off
Published 10th Mar 2013
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10th Mar 2013 1:54pm
It doesn't make much sense to me but i like it best for its surrealistic touch.
'adrenaline exists
time is void ' you left me speechless there..
'adrenaline exists
time is void ' you left me speechless there..
10th Mar 2013 1:59pm
Thank you. I intended it to be about corporate kidnapping, the metaphor is a sadistic, half-sexual one but the underline is an economic judgement. Parents can't feed their children, wages aren't high enough. The suits of the world paid far too much sit in glass houses and kill lower class prospects like killing a sick dog.
