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I personally quite like these short vignettes of verse. Every decent poet has a good store of them, such as this one by Stevie Smith:

All things pass
Love and mankind is grass.

I think you should try and express more of a complete thought with them, but other than that they're great!

thanks a lot for taking time and reading my poem
i also thank you u for ur kind words
and ur criticism i will take ur advice
thats for sure!  

hehe we both named a poem by the same name.. that's cool.. I understand someone being like a drug.. and then there's withdrawal :(

hehe!
what do you mean by saying "and then there's withdrawal"?
could you care explain that to me?

good way to capture the experience of the human heart. like a drug that lasts a bit longer. a little better, a little deeper, than the high of a drug. very romantic. makes me want to get high and surrender to love/lust. of course, eventually, you have to come down. still, eventually you may come to appreciate the crash as well. it's all part of living. it should be embraced. this poem does that. a good poem indeed...